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Reviews for Pretense

By : Kalysia
  • From ANON - Rain on June 16, 2008
    i like how this is starting, it give you a strong sense of suspense, plus i dig it ^_^ overall great start, and i hope you keep on going and i look forward to see what happened to Edo next XD.
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  • From Safir84 on January 11, 2008
    Wow, what an awesome start to what seems to be a very promising fic! The plotline is very interesting, indeed. I cannot wait to read more, therefore you've to continue to write, please and update soon... Poor Ed he wanted Al back, but instead he got Envy, now that's rather brilliant! Excellent work, so far!
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 09, 2007
    that was great! please say that there's more! i'll give you a cookie if ya do...*waves cookie*
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  • From Awenseth on July 05, 2007
    Hmmm...a really interesting and nice start, I hope you will continue...
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  • From SkippingAlice on July 03, 2007
    ...Oh, oh dear. XD Update soon!
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