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Reviews for Native Son

By : chibivegeta
  • From ANON - Megs on October 21, 2007
    You're good. That cliff hanger is bad, but man, you're good. I'm addicted to this story. It's taken me about an hour to read the whole thing so far. I should be studying, but this was more important. And I like your point about reviews. I used to write HP fanfiction, but it was so disheartening when only my sister reviewed. I still write, but I don't bother posting. I'm actually working on a V/Gk right now, slowly but surely. If I finish it I'd love to see what you have to say about it. ^.^
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  • From LittleMustardSeed on October 16, 2007
    NOOO! what a cliff hanger! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Krystal on October 14, 2007
    I don't know whether to love that you put up a new chapter, or to hate that that was the end of said chapter...I was really good none the less.
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  • From solitare1 on October 14, 2007
    Oh you hurt me bad!...Please continue I love this story!
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  • From ultistarmon on October 13, 2007
    Whoa, now that's a cliff hanger. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - bob on October 13, 2007
    Oh my God I'm on the edge of my chair anticipating the next chapter. I can't wait until you post it! I have to bow down to you, you're such a good writer, you create the atmosphere perfectly, your descriptions are thorough and I love it. Update as soon as you can.
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  • From Zofo on October 12, 2007
    Loved the pure Saiyan side Goku and Vegeta showed, you described it brilliantly.
    But what a cliffhanger! Please let Vegeta be okay and get rid of Chi-Chi, nasty women.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Xenosangel on October 12, 2007
    I love the way you write. My biggest compliment is that you actually make sure everything is spelled correctly. I dont have to correct anything as I read very good story to cant wait to find out what happens in chapter 7
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  • From ANON - Katonie on October 12, 2007
    Chi-chi! That bitch! I hate her with a mother-fucking passion! Shove that gun up her ass!!! Kill her! I don't vare what you do, just make her suffer!!
    Anyway, good work so far! And, since it is a cliffhanger, please update again real soon. I await your next chapter.

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From ANON - CrimsonTide on October 12, 2007
    What the duece?! YOU CAN'T STOP THERE!!! Well... techniqually you can... but still, I'm pouting here! I don't normally care for Vegeta as uke, but I shall tolerate it... THIS TIME. lol.

    Seems Goku's memory is back since he recognized ChiChi and everything. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Excellent job and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Lady Shi on October 06, 2007
    Hey,
    I just wanted to say that I like the way that you write Vegeta and your portrale of the Saya-jins. Overall this is a good fic and I hope to read more.
    Shi
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  • From Aresy on October 06, 2007
    hehe nice chpater 5. Awww he said his name, so i guessing the real old goku is back? I kinda missed him, although this Goku is really cute.
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  • From Aresy on October 06, 2007
    I just wanted to say that i'm really enjoying this fic. I read fics before with Goku going all primal, but this a fresh way of showing it. ^^ I like goku as this primal animal like wild sajin. I'm just on chapt 3, but good job. Enjoying it.
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  • From jasmen on October 05, 2007
    i love your story which by extention and association means tha i like you. wonderful story if it's not finished i may just start to cry you don't want my tears on your hands now do you???!!!! please gimme more
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  • From ANON - Jaehn on September 13, 2007
    I love your work, and I've read just about all of it I think. I can't wait for the next installment. And I hope your health concerns have improved or are improving.
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