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Reviews for Native Son

By : chibivegeta
  • From enslavementthesis on September 12, 2007
    *Eeps*
    How could you leave your poor readers with such a tantilising end?
    Well, despite a few people's obvious uh, shall i just say vocal behaviour?
    I myself was very impressed by your lashing of ficterature.
    I am very sorry that i cannot bathe you in a flood of compliments, but i stayed up very very late just to finish off this fiction,
    and Alas! Bed beckons
    Goodnight, and i desperately hope for a prompt update
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2007
    Soooooo goood, please keep going since I love this story line.
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  • From EnchanteNoir on August 27, 2007
    Just wanted to leave a review. I know how it feels completely to be upset when no one reviews your stories, but everyone reads them. I've had it happen on quite a few of my fics, but really it all depends on the fandom you're writing in. Either way though it freakin sucks to work so hard on something and to come out with nothing from your readers... it hurts too... at least in my case because then I get all anal and wonder if my writing is even good or not. I write mostly for Yu Yu Hakusho now... I tend to get more reviews LOL, but in all honestly I love writing, it's why I write... now I just wish like hell I could write the damn Yaoi novel I'm longing to do... but for some reason it's always easier to write fanfiction. Anyway I wanted to tell you I really like this story, and that you're doing a damn good job on it too. I look forward to your next update and no matter what I do hope you decide to finish it hear or at least leave a note where I can read it completely LOL. Well that's about it, but thank you again for such a wonderful read and keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Pride of a Saiyan on August 22, 2007
    Chibi, I love your work. Keep it up!
    Can't wait to read how this one ends...

    Greetz, Tisha - aka Pride of a Saiyan
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on August 12, 2007
    Really great fic! The thought of Goku all submissive to Vegeta is sorta nice, ne? ;)
    Hope you get the next chapter together soon ^^
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  • From LittleMustardSeed on August 10, 2007
    oh.my.god.!.


    truely amazing XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2007
    Awesome writing here! Can't wait to see what comes next! *sits and waits*
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  • From ANON - Katonie on August 01, 2007
    BEAUTIFUL!!! That was just so,*sniffle* sweet!Please continue this fabulous story or I will threaten you with...well...something, I don't know what...um...wait, let me think about it...nope can't think of anything right now, but I will!
    Anyway, keep up the good work!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From ANON - Krystal on July 31, 2007
    That was awesome! I hope that you continue this soon.
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  • From ANON - Susie Q on July 31, 2007
    Completely immersed in this chapter (5). What happened to the last half hour of my life?? Awesome!
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on July 30, 2007
    I thought I would write a review for your story even though I have only skimmed over it since I am adding to the hit counter. It is full of detail from the parts I read and i like fanfics that include Android 18 as a minor character. I do not know why though ._.;;
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on July 30, 2007
    nice! vegeta's growing his tail back!? please update as soon as you can!
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  • From ultistarmon on July 30, 2007
    Yay, were to the part where it left off on the other site. I've been hoping that I would be able to read more of this great fic eventually. Finally, I can see what happens next. Pretty please, update as soon as possible.
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  • From Dramastarelf on July 30, 2007
    yeah new chapters. Nice work, the story really rolls nicely. I'm enjoying greatly, it's my favorite.
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  • From saiyanb on July 30, 2007
    Hi B here. This is turning out to be a very interesting story so far.
    The character interaction is intense and very emotional with Vegeta questioning himself as well as Goku. You get the feeling that Vegeta's really the one that's lonely and in need of someone to except and understand him.
    Those dreams and flashback Vegeta had about his dad you could really feel he loved his father. Especially in his chapter when you wrote “So you see…it wasn’t…” Vegeta’s chin dropped slowly to his chest. “…wasn’t Papa’s fault…”. Many fic writers portray Vegeta's father as an ass and smear him, but the anime never gave me that impression. I always thought that king Vegeta had high hopes for his son and Vegeta was killing himself to live up to them, but out of respect not obligation.
    I love the explanation you created for planet Vegeta's weather, and the time of chaos it created. Much like before our own planet learn about the eclipse, everyone went crazy thinking the world was going to end or the devil was touching the world, etc, etc. It was tied in very nicely with Goku's current condition too.
    I have to wonder what happened to Chichi in all of this. You kind of hinted she was going to show up later, that she'd lied about going over to help Ox King. Or I could just be reading too much between the lines. Guess I'll have to wait and see (always love fics that keep you guessing at the plot).
    I'm a little confused about what time the story takes place. My first impression was after the Buu Saga, but when Vegeta was considering going to Bulma for help with his tail spot, he mention trusting both Bulma and Trunks to fix the problem. That kind of implies Trunks is older then say 8-10 years of age.
    The ending of this chapter was hot. What a pleasant way to wake up. I do prefer Goku to be the more dominate lover, Vegeta can be in charge in public and Goku when in private (Robert Jordan's "Wheel of Time" reference to the Sea Folk Marriage custom- anyone else know what I'm talking about? If not, good book series, I highly recommend). I also like Vegeta's clueless nature regarding Goku's ‘scent’; I really bet he didn't see it coming.
    I'm very interesting in the mental rant Vegeta will most likely have in the next chapter, and any conclusions he might make. Is he going to write it off? Is he going to turn a cold shoulder to Goku? Is he going to except and explore the thought of "them"? Is he going to hide behind his and Goku's families and loyalty to them? Does he love Bulma? Is he going to conclude the only why to get Goku to remember is to sleep with him? (Little far fetched that one, but you can't blame a smut lover for tossing the suggestion out there, ne?)
    Anyway hoping you've got your next chapter plotted out and started. Looking foreword to it.

    B-chan AKA Saiyanb

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