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Reviews for Native Son

By : chibivegeta
  • From ANON - Calico soneji on July 29, 2007
    i like the nakedness ^_^
    cant wait for the next chapter!
    xxxxxx
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  • From Dramastarelf on July 28, 2007
    Thank you the new chapter. I really liked the bear scene it made me laugh.
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  • From ANON - Katonie on July 28, 2007
    That is SO cute!OMG! Kakarot watching over Vegeta! Awwwwww...
    Please update again soon, abd keep up the fabulous work!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From ANON - Carmel on July 28, 2007
    Just tell me one thing: How many fics have you read here or on other sites? And how many of them have you reviewed? Surely not all of them. Do you go to public libraries to read for free? Surely you do the same you are accusing others but don’t consider yourself doing “art thievery”, right? Then why are you accusing and bashing people like that? This is a public site, people are not obliged to pay in any way for reading, and nobody obliges you to put your works here. You should be grateful for the people who deem your work worthy to be read instead of treating them like some kind of “criminals“.

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  • From MiguelKaiLover on July 27, 2007
    wonderful chapter! i really liked it!
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  • From ANON - Neophyte on July 27, 2007
    Not very good with reviewing, but just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this. Look forward to reading more when you have time to post.
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  • From ANON - jsinuyasha on July 27, 2007
    great chapter!!! i love the quick updates, great job and great story! keep up the good work!!!
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  • From Zofo on July 27, 2007
    I love it when Goku reverts to his Saiyan side. Please update soon.
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  • From BullKitty on July 27, 2007
    O.O Uh ohs... wonder if Chi-Chi is coming back or if she's snapped...
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  • From ANON - calico soneji on July 27, 2007
    love it!
    update soon
    xxxx
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  • From ANON - Chaz on July 27, 2007
    Thievery?! YOU are the one posting your work (apparently not so "freely") on the INTERNET. When I go to an art gallery and admire a painting then walk out without buying it, does that make me a theif? I browse this adult site as a voyeur and I'm thankful that there are so many lovely exhibitionists, such as yourself, that are compelled by whatever "madness" motivates you to share your dirty, albeit well crafted, thoughts with the rest of the world wide web. However, a literary critic I am not. It's hard to enjoy a story when you're afraid of getting b*tch-slapped at the end of each chapter.

    I enjoy your sh*t, but damn!
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  • From ANON - Katonie on July 26, 2007
    That was a good lesson! For other people of course. But still a good lesson!
    Now onto what I really want to say!
    I LUV this fic! I can feel the excitement building! I feel the...tension? Well, that could actually be me, but what ever. I can't wait for you to update! Please update again soon.
    OH Yeah! I also wanted to say that I thought you really captured Vegeta's personality well, and also that I hate Chi-chi and think you should really bash her 'cause she sucks!
    Anyway, till next time! :)

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From MiguelKaiLover on July 26, 2007
    i really like this story! this chapter was wonderful! so that is what happened to goku. he was hit by lightning. genius. i didn't see that coming! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on July 26, 2007
    Hey I don't think it sucks. in fact I want to see where this is going
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  • From Dramastarelf on July 26, 2007
    I just love this wild Goku, I laughed at his reaction to his wife. so amusing, thanks for the hard work. I'm wiggling with excitement for where it will go. I really understand your position. I have written a lot of stories but I have been reluctant to post them on this site because the first one I posted here had 1200 hits in the first month and no reviews it made me sad. I knew it wasn't a bad fic since on my livejournal I got good reviews.
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