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Reviews for Sex, Subtances, Sin, Salvation

By : MasamuneBlade
  • From shoujokitsune on January 04, 2008
    I love this story so far - it's so gritty and detailed. I applaud your ability to manipulate so many PO simultaneously! This last section, however, is a bit sad and it's beginning to feel a bit too drawn out.
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  • From Diane on November 28, 2007
    I demand more! Seriously! I should have reviewed a while back when I was thinking about something I wanted to say... now I can't remember what it was. Oh well. I don't know if you intended this, but I have a wonderful mental image of a very high Chang Wufei running down an alley, screaming, and waving his arms to get as much attention from the cops as possible. Crap, I think I was going to say something important too. *sigh*
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  • From Eclipsalee on October 07, 2007
    god this story is sooooooooo good!!!!! I really enjoy the inner monologue and character depth
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  • From Echo13moon on September 12, 2007
    Love it!! Well thought out, good plot line, well written. An interesting twist on each of the chars. they all have their own problems and deal with them differently. Great job, keep it up!!!!
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  • From ZaKai on September 07, 2007
    This story deserves more reviews, dammit! I love this story. I really think you're doing an awesome job with the characters, and the plot... the PLOT~~! There IS plot, and it is great! O_O *grins* Keep up the good work!!

    ...now... I need sleep... but I couldn't possibly go away from this site without leaving you some comments.

    - Z
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  • From zekesbabe on August 31, 2007
    Wow...Zechs is a good guy...thats a role reversal...though would you say the Gundam Pilots have changed roles? In the anime, yes they are considered war heroes but throughout the whole ordeal they were known as the bad guys...makes you think...

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    Zekesbabe
    xxx
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  • From zekesbabe on August 27, 2007
    What a jerk...Duo should have bitten his dick off! What a jackass though...Heero should make someone suffer! Mind you...if he's already got his jack material then what does he need a body for? *snickers*

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  • From zekesbabe on August 26, 2007
    Duo is a comic! Slump against the wall pretend to be asleep...then still be mouthy to the cops even though he had no proof that Heero would return to him! Classic!

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  • From zekesbabe on August 24, 2007
    Never read the book but this chapter was certainly...tame. I enjoyed it don't get me wrong...but there need to be more blood sex and violence! Bless Trowa though...so new to this game...makes me wonder if he even put his heart into the 'game.'

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  • From zekesbabe on August 22, 2007
    I LOVED THAT LAST CHAPTER! Which may sound weird but NO ONE WRITES THAT MUCH DETAIL! Which is why I worship the ground you walk on! All this fluffy junk....ABSOLUTE BULL! THE BLOOD SWEAT PAIN AND URINE IS WHERE THE ACTION LIES! You like totally rawk!

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    Zekesbabe
    xxx
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  • From jukeboxcsi on August 15, 2007
    This is an enjoyable read so far. I checked out your website, which looks really great and well laid out as far as explanations and character profiles, etc. It looks like you will have an epic by the time you're done. I look forward to reading it. You might consider having an update notification list, too, that people can join to be automatically notified of updates to the website.

    I think I have to disagree a little on the 'GW fandom losing its steam' thought. I belong to several GW yahoo groups that post stories and/or updates to WIPs regularly - sometimes one or two a day. Of course, there's always something new at AFF and MM.org in the GW category as well. I think it's still going pretty strong even after all this time. :^)
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  • From zekesbabe on August 11, 2007
    *giggles* Poor amateur Trowa! I hope he doesn't get caught and/or hurt. (I'm sure you've worked out by now I worship the ground he walks on...and the TV!) Quatre is so hilarious...he's like oh...this place is being robbed...DAMNIT GET ME MY CIGS BEFORE YOU ATTEND THE GUNMANS WHIMS! And a junkie Wuffy...now that is a twist!!

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    Zekesbabe
    xxx
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  • From zekesbabe on August 10, 2007
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! Trowa being an armed robber is my favourite fantasy...oh...*pops that back into head* you didn't hear that! And poor Duo...in a holey coat...and Heero is so bold!!!!! But is Quatre a rich bitch (as they call them on the west side)? I hope you update really really soon!

    Update Soon!

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    Zekesbabe
    xxx
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