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By : nomdeplume
  • From eeriansadowthefallen on August 17, 2007
    chapter five was great. the stove line was priceless. absolutely priceless.
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  • From radcat on August 16, 2007
    So cute. Perfect. I love the dialogue only format. You do it so well. This is one of the reasons you are one of my favorite writers.
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on August 15, 2007
    Awwww! That was so sweet! I just fell in love with Roy all over again!! :) For just a few moments the whole rest of the world didn't exist as Roy got to spend time with his baby girl. *melts* I just love precious little moments like this! :)
    Love it!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From radcat on August 15, 2007
    I love these stories. This was sweet and a nice slice of life that many people can relate to. I think you have captured Roy's character well and what he is feeling post all the trauma. Look forward to more. Good oneshots.
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  • From radcat on August 14, 2007
    AH, I think it is sweet. I am enjoying these stories. Thanks.
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  • From eeriansadowthefallen on August 14, 2007
    chapter 2 was just too much fun! i love those confessional style stories/chapters like that. and their sniping just made it that much more enjoyable. i'm really enjoying these little insights into the backstory of my current favorite fanfic saga.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on August 13, 2007
    Very nice! I really like this. There's not one bit of descriptive narrative anywhere in this and that makes it unique and open to so much interpretation. Where are they having this conversation? When does it take place? Is Ed still pregnant? Are they married yet? What started this conversation in the first place? Ah! Lots of lovely questions that don't really need answers. You could read this a dozen different times and come up with a dozen different scenarios! love it!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on August 13, 2007
    Kinda bittersweet since those of us who've read "For Her For Him" know how this will end. *smiles* Yeah, I can see Riza reacting like this. ;) Actually, I'm surprised she didn't shoot Roy on sight first and then cuss him out! XD I thought it was sweet that Roy stopped to check in on Ed before he got himself a drink. Aww! Roy does care about Ed even if he won't admit it - yet! :D
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From ANON - empress-eerian-sadow on August 13, 2007
    this is so sweet. (chapter 1) but its almost painful to read, because we know what's going to happen. (no spoilers for anyone who hasn't read the other stories!) beautifully written. i really should review for you more often, because i really enjoy your writing.
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  • From radcat on August 13, 2007
    I love this prequel to "For Him For Her". It is sweet but sad at the sametime because we know what will eventually happen. Thanks.
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