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By : enslavementthesis
  • From ANON - KK on October 11, 2008

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  • From ANON - Fate on May 04, 2008
    Good God please let there be more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2008
    Great first chapter! Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2008
    Please continue this fic! Its awesome!!!!
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  • From Fate on January 12, 2008
    Hot.
    More please? :3
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2007
    That was awesome!! Please continue!!!
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  • From ANON - ni on October 14, 2007
    yay! though i'm suprised you didn't mention how piccolo is like 4-5 yers older then gohan and not like 30 like how piccolo acts it is. write a full story please!!!!!
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  • From NAnderson on September 26, 2007
    Oh come on! that was such a tease.... We all know Gohans asking for it, so let him have it. For some reaso I love this paring but i can almost never find a good story with them in it togeather. And then I found ur story and now my days all happy now! I know there r 2 more coming in this set, but will they be 1 shots too or will they have several chapters?? hmmm, Well right now I dont really care, I just want the next part of the story UPDATED!!!! PLEASE!!!! We want to know what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - Jade on September 22, 2007
    Please keep on writing. I really like the story and the couple. Who wuold have thought that ChiChi would have had that naughty bit of literature in her house. I wonder if Piccolo will swipe one to find out the next step? Please update soon.
    Thanks.
    Jade
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  • From ANON - Susie Q on September 09, 2007
    Excellent! I think you've captured Picollo beautifully.
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  • From Aisuru on September 09, 2007
    Please make another one! That was incredible!!!!
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  • From ANON - mgpem on September 09, 2007
    great! little bumpy in the first paragraph, but after that the writing started flowing. And hey, I hope you continue this, I want to know how their relationship develops.
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  • From ANON - Love to be Anon on September 09, 2007
    Sweet story. Great potential. I think you should continue just because it is Gohan and Piccolo and how many stories are there of them? like almost none compared to Goku and Vegeta...so onwards with the fluff and smut. :)
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  • From ANON - pun_xy on September 09, 2007
    Great story! Pic was awesome XD
    Hope to see the rest, of course they won't settle for this, right? A child like Gohan practically begs for it and poor Pic, all alone all the time and everything. It's bound to happen ^^
    Really liked ^^v
    /pun
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