Click Here!

Reviews for Red Flower, Black Dragon

By : shinobilover23
  • From MiguelKaiLover on October 01, 2007
    nice. i really like it! please update soon! great chapter!
    Report Review

  • From Dragon7 on September 30, 2007
    I love it the lemon scene was so hot. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
    Report Review

  • From solitare1 on September 30, 2007
    Fantastic!
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on September 27, 2007
    Great chapter. Could you describe Vegeta's house more as I'm wondering what it looks like?
    Report Review

  • From kitkit on September 27, 2007
    wow they sure don't waste time
    Report Review

  • From Dragon7 on September 27, 2007
    Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
    Report Review

  • From NAnderson on September 26, 2007
    Ok so far im liking what I see. U may want to put a mark to show ur jumping from one place to another, cause i got lost for a sec once or twice. And can I juat say AAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! KAWIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!! I love how vageta is with gohan! Its to much! I hope to see u updating this story soon!
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on September 24, 2007
    What a promising start, can't wait for more. Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From solitare1 on September 24, 2007
    Very good I like what I'm reading so far. Keep it up. I think you have a great storyline.
    Report Review

  • From kitkit on September 24, 2007
    wow what a day
    Report Review

  • From Robyn on September 24, 2007
    I was a little concerned when you mentioned there would be two types of POV for this story, first person for Vegeta, and third person for Goku and Gohan.

    You pulled it off nicely though. *thumbs up*

    This chapter is an excellent start to the story. It got all the necessary things set up, without giving poor details on what the characters were feeling/thinking, and what their motives were for moving away from their cannon women. I'll be looking forward to seeing how it developes.

    I hope I am not sticking my foot in my mouth when I suggest the need for a beta. They would find small errors for things such as then/than and wonder/wander.
    Report Review

  • From Dragon7 on September 24, 2007
    Fantastic chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
    Report Review

  • From PurpleMoonlight on September 24, 2007
    Your story definitely has potential and it would be even better if you had it beta-read.
    PM
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!