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Reviews for Black Heart

By : shinigamiinochi
  • From ANON - Tsuki chan on October 29, 2014
    When are u updating the story.Its seems interesting. Heero falling for the person he is gonna killed. As expected from your stories the complicated love which I love most in fiction.:)
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  • From ANON - Mii on March 17, 2011
    Nyuuu!!! I'm terrified Heero ish gunna kill Duo in this one! My Duo! No!! I don't know wether to ask you to update again or just be glad you haven't...
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  • From ANON - Miishii on June 30, 2008
    *Bites the ear of her teddy bear in anticipation* Noooo Dun make Heero kill Duo! I love Duo....
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  • From Kalico on December 06, 2007
    Hmh...so it does get better. Chapter is still kinda short but...I guess it can't be helped. Nice, ne?
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  • From Kalico on November 10, 2007
    I would say that that was wholly inspiring, amazing, a creation most masterful in nature. It has ensnared me so wholely that there is nothing that could break this mental bond. My very life would have to end to free me of this unexpected duality of serenity and destruction. My mind is so boggled I could not bear the thought of existence without continuation. My blood, so heated and loins so aroused that I can not manage to divert my smoldering life blood to my weakening brain. My heart is just flickering with so much anticipation that should you choose to not update my life would be snuffed. My lungs can not heave the weight of the love concentrated in my very air...But sadly I can't. I would instead have to say, "What the heck was that?" lol. Yes, yes, I know it's a teaser...but why? Teasing people is not fun and should not be indulged in. It ends lives in the most erotic sense even though this was not erotic per se. But do continue...in which ever direction this "teaser" is going. I don't know if I can imagine coming back to read this again...because the "teaser" seemed pointless and rather finite. So...what exactly is there to gain...afterall that was the end ne? hmh...why am I reviewing this again...not to be offensive but seriously...I must be in an odd mood. I rarely review and only then to say "update" or if the story was wholly satisfying beyond belief and i must give props...there are rare people whom i would deem worthy of me reviewing wholeheartedly. I think that you may have been of the few I considered if my memory serves me right...But to me a review is something personal and deep. I am meant to delve and dissect your work as constructively as possible and you, my friend, have left me with a "teaser" to do such wonders. It's not worth my time but I will say that i am interested in finding out what is "Black Heart" and what Japanese folklore it came from. Would I be wrong in assuming that the "teaser" was a mere recap of the story in its originality and now you wish to recreate the story in your own direction? Anyway, I hope this teaser is worth the while. I think I just might come back to find out exactly what you've created. I don;t want to underestimate you before time...afterall, if i'm not mistaken i used to like your work even though you do need to work on some components of your storytelling for your art's betterment...anyway, I suppose i should say...update soon...

    Kalcifer
    arka
    Kar-Megas Arakah
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