Click Here!

Reviews for Alternate Reality

By : 2dragonkat
  • From Serpensangel on October 21, 2017

    Love!


    Report Review

  • From bitemeslowly on May 23, 2011
    Wowww..I'm really amazed I think this is the best story I've read in a long time :) I love it..really its great..I love ur writing style.I love the idea of how its along the same story line but just that Vegeta n Goku are together..I love Vegeta in this..he's so loving n caring..I just love it! yay! it's great..I love how sweet he is to his boys..awl his boys so sweet..I can't wait until the next one n him n Goku are together again..I love how when Goku shows up n sees Goten..awl yay..I just love everything about this story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chewbear123 on January 02, 2011
    wow that was hot XD i don't read fan fic for the lemons but i've read a lot of them and that was really good =) great work! (no seriously...it made me cum....and ima chick) LOL XD so ya great job and i can't wait to read more of your stories
    Report Review

  • From 2dragonkat on November 04, 2010
    @bunnicle: I'm very sorry for the confusion. I was a very newbie writer when I wrote this part of my series, and I had this stupid assumption that everyone was familiar with the plot of the anime. Between the end of this story and the beginning of A Saiyan Way of Life, the Buu Saga happens. I decided to let that tell the story between mine instead of doing a rewrite or at least more description. Truly sorry for the confusion. I would keep reading the sequel though, because this story is done. And eventually I leave the territory of canon (for the most part) and everything thing makes more sense.

    @everyone else: Thanks so much for the reviews everyone. I really appreciate it. I just wish AFF.net had a better reply for reviews system. What I said to bunnicle also applies to all of you, and I've changed my final AN accordingly, to hopefully clear up confusion. There is an uncomfortable gap between this story and its sequel. I was just too new and too fangirly to notice it all those years ago (and now it's too much of a hassle to change). So hopefully you all continued on and forgave me in part for dropping the ball. This series gets so much better, I promise.
    Report Review

  • From Ruffner on November 04, 2010
    Ok, wait a second cause I'm feeling confused! Is this story really done at 6 chapters? Cause I went to the sequel and it starts off right after some big battle and I have no idea what's going on. I stopped reading it just in case this story isn't complete.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kimayared2000 on October 04, 2010
    I really LOVE this story and Gk/V is very cute couple............ and i really dont like chi chi dat much cause she is a bitch sometimes.......... but all in all the story was great and i can't wait til you continue this story!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From Nigellica on October 21, 2008
    I loved it ^_^ And now I am going to go read the sequel :D
    Report Review

  • From MeggieBeggie on March 05, 2008
    Bulma, what a bitch, being all nicey nicey. O_o LoL

    I can never decide what to do with her or ChiChi either, that's why I haven't posted anything yet. Love this story hardcore. I can't wait to start the next segment tomorrow!
    Report Review

  • From zombiebait86 on January 21, 2008
    Please ma'm can i have sommore?
    Report Review

  • From Nikikeya on January 10, 2008
    heehee he found Grampa Gohan's house XDXD
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on November 27, 2007
    SORRY! I never got around to reviewing your story but I thought it was great! You continue but I would love to see more piccolo/Gohan like their own lemon scene or something. Thanx if you continue!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shinestar on November 05, 2007
    i wish you luck with the sequel and i wonder how it turns out
    Report Review

  • From zombiebait86 on October 29, 2007
    WAH! I love this story!!!
    J-chan
    Report Review

  • From Primal on October 25, 2007
    my friend gave me the link to this story and i'm so happy she did its great and im hope to read more soon, i love how Vegeta is. he is one of my fav along side Goku and the pairing with Piccolo and Gohan is the iceing on the cake as they say. i hope ChiChi get more bashing cos the only one i hate in all of DBZ is her and that F***ing frying pan, i hate her hiting Goku its just not right and i love Vegeta putting her in her place. anyway is Goku going to have a tail like Vegeta cos that be so cool if he did and dose the boy still hav there tail? it be cool to see Gohan using his tail on Piccolo lol. please update soon and not keep ur readers waiting like i do lol ^^;

    From Kitty
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on October 25, 2007
    Ohh you can't leave it here!

    I loved the shower scene, very erotic. And it seems Goku regrets not coming back now. So he should.

    Please write a sequel.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!