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By : nomdeplume
  • From on June 09, 2008
    I cried when I read the second ending... Y_Y
    It's just not fair for pour Ed.
    Though it was very well written. All I it was actually!
    I'm going to keep this fic close to my heart always.
    *That last sentence was kind of cheezy ^^*
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  • From radcat on December 25, 2007
    I liked both of your endings. Both in two different directions and both well written. I liked the happy ending but I also liked the more (?)realistic ending. I would have never been able to pick. I liked how you gave us two different endings and let us decide how we wanted it to end. Kudos to you.
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  • From yeagerbomb on December 24, 2007
    *irritated squeals* nooo... why? i hate maes being dead! it's not fair!! after i read the first ending i was thinking 'why couldn't the happy ending be second', but now i'm glad the sad ending is last, because it just feels... truer, i suppose. it doesn't seem right to change so much, but it was so much happier!! honestly, it's like the happy ending was the dream that ed in the sad ending was having. *sigh* great job. it's so sad, but it's really good all the same... *tears*~
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  • From alleycat88 on December 24, 2007
    Good endings...of course I like the one where Maes is alive! But they were both good! I'm sad its over! Awesome story! I'm glad you kept with it!
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  • From Afrieal on December 23, 2007
    clapping is heard from Af's mom's house and Rysh's place (gotta love speaker phones) wonderful *sniffing* definately a six hankey (three each) ending on the second one... forgive me but we like the first one better


    affie and rysha
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  • From KareNeko77 on December 12, 2007
    I love this, your turn of phrase rings so true it's like we're right on the bed with them. Which is of course where anyone reading this story wants to be!
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  • From alleycat88 on December 12, 2007
    That was awesome! I loved it! Good update!
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  • From Afrieal on December 11, 2007
    wow...ummm just wow that was wonderful and we can't thank you enough for writing it please continue when you can

    Rysha and Affie
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  • From ravensfrost on December 01, 2007
    woot fear the wrath of Hughs for he can destroy your life with but a little research. thanks for the update can't wait for more.
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  • From yeagerbomb on November 30, 2007
    AAARRRGGGHH!! i hate winry. i think i might have forgot to review a chapter or two, but oh well... anyway, i hate her and want her dead. well, not dead. but...you know what i mean!! and yay maes!! he's the best boyfriend ever! *girly sigh* i wish he was MY boyfriend... anyway, i'm upset that this is almost finished! NOOO!! it can't end so soon! either way, i believe the happy ending. great job, and please update soon!!~
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  • From ANON - Affie and Rysha on November 28, 2007
    thank you that was beautiful... we had family (of choice) that came out to friends that dealt with that and we only wish they had the support system you created for ed. As ever you have given us a stellar update and we're looking foreward to the next installment... but fear what is going to happen next as well.


    Affie and Rysha
    rabid fangirls on a misson
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  • From alleycat88 on November 28, 2007
    Ohhhhhh! Fluff moment! Real cute! That winry is such a skank! Man! Good chapter thanks for the update! *KISS*
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  • From on November 27, 2007
    This is still so great. There just isn't enough Ed/Mase out there. Let alone such great Ed/Mase.
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  • From ANON - Affie and Rysha on November 25, 2007
    Oh goddess it's getting better and better... thanks for the update we're looking foreward to more... you've made another pair of converts....

    affie and rysha

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  • From ravensfrost on November 24, 2007
    lovely. Al reacted exactly like i was exspecting. Brilliant. Will there be more? Please?
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