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Reviews for Duo's Kidnapping

By : animegamergirl
  • From Diane on November 26, 2007
    This is an interesting story, but you have several grammer mistakes and you switch between present and past tense. Also, very OoC, especially for Heero. I can see him being frantic, but crying in an elevator? I can't see that happening unless they'd confirmed Duo was dead. Don't stop writing this though. I want to see some serious ass kicking.
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