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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From XxChiChixX on November 10, 2008
    This is definitely one of those chapters that make me wish I didn't have to wait a week until the next update. D:

    Poor Goku!!! But at least it's out now! D: All over! ..Right? He's gonna wake up, right?? D: D: D: D: -:: Over-worries. ::-

    I really liked the first scene, where Vegeta first discovered that Goku was missing. Gotta love those instincts of his--I don't even want to think of what Goku would have done if Vegeta hadn't woken up. =x

    And when Vegeta first finds him--the way you described how Goku was all quiet and to himself besides the occasional whimper...I DON'T KNOW WHY THATS CUTE BUT IT IS. ..But its also sad....D: D: D: D: AAHH I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO FEEL.

    ...
    They have no senzu beans.

    ... Goku's going to wake up to see that doctor standing over him, isn't he. YOU'RE GOING TO MAKE GOKU SO UPSET, AREN'T YOU.

    I want more! What are they going to do with the baby! Why didn't Vegeta answer Goku's question! WHY IS PICCOLO THERE!?

    -:: Falls over. Crawls over to a pile of paper and picks up her pencil in order to doodle but then freezes and looks over at the word document with her story on it. Looks from pencil to story...pencil...story....pencil...story.::-
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  • From ANON - Madwren on November 09, 2008
    Wow I love you story! I saw some art for it on deviant art and I thought I'd give it a look. I LOVE IT!! Please update as soon as you can!! Your a wonderful writer and I can't wait to see what you have planned next for Goku and Vegeta!
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  • From Chuquita on November 09, 2008
    I was so nervous that Goku was going to go into labor right there in the bathtub. @_@
    Very relieved that everything seems fine.

    I have a feeling that when he does go into labor, things are going to be rough on everyone.

    Excellent chapter!
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  • From Nigellica on November 08, 2008
    I totally love this story, its so interesting ^_^ I can't wait to read more of it, I finally got through it all and it leaves off here T_T

    Do you have an updates list? If you do coud you please add me? My email is bubbles5166@hotmail.com

    Good luck with the next chapter ^_^ Should be interesting to write :D
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 07, 2008
    I discovered this story on what I supposed must have been...Tuesday night? Wednesday night? I dunno.
    I saw it on deviantart to begin with, and so was under the impression it was only 22 chapters long...
    When you gave me this link, I jumped for joy that it was 30 chapters longer! =D
    And it's literally been a struggle to tear myself away from the computer each time it was necessary...
    Each night since I discovered it I haven't been able to force myself to go to bed any earlier than 2am.
    Safe to say, I ADORE this story.
    And I really do mean ADORE.
    You should be extremely happy that you can write such fantastic stuff...I sure would be!
    I'm completely hooked.
    Lord knows Monday is miraculously going to morph into my favourite day of the week.
    Please don't tell me that someday this story will end...
    You'd break my heart =)

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2008
    Why do I keep forgetting about this story? Must be my lack of sleep, screwing me all over the place it is!

    I got through the chapter despite the fact my eyes were starting to blur XD I love it still. Gosh, this story just keeps getting better with each new chapter. You really know how to keep us wanting more. I'm really curious as to how Goku's birth is going to turn out. I hope all goes well but then again I don't see you ending this story with

    "And he had a wonderful, clean, painless birth. The end".

    *rubs chin*

    Well, can't wait for more!

    Love always,

    Talitha.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on November 05, 2008
    Nice chapter. Is seems as thought the birth will be occuring very shortly. I can't wait to find out what little Vegeta/Goku will look like and how Goku will react once he sees the child that he created with Vegeta.
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  • From 66Hiei08 on November 05, 2008
    Trust me, I'm still very much glued to this story. Umm.. Could you pass the glue solvent, please?
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  • From ANON - Irol on November 05, 2008
    I just realized i apparently never reviewed this fic. So im sure you're wondering wth who is this?! I really enjoy your writing and the original i idea you have going here!
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  • From ANON - Irol on November 05, 2008
    IM BACK! Im sorry i've been gone so long and i've missed so many chapters! But im caught up to speed and stoked for the next chapter!
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  • From zombiebait86 on November 01, 2008
    uhhh, Vegeta could have a dream sense they are mates on how to help Goku through this and find that he has to us a controlled ki blast to cut to the forming canal to much and the baby comes out easy but Goku suffers massive blood lose and possible death but too little and the baby has to force to much and get hurt and again Goku also suffers. Goku could have a numbing while this happens so he's not hurt and this leave the bulk of what needs to be done and his mates health in Vegeta's hands.
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  • From Chuquita on October 29, 2008
    Oh that was hilarious and wonderful in so many ways! X3
    I never saw Goku's "nest" coming. XD
    Poor Vegeta getting bit like that.

    Good to know the boys are supportive about Goku's pregnancy. :3
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2008
    D'aww, I loved the scene with Gohan, Goku and Goten. It was really sweet. I'm glad Gohan took the news well, we definitely don't need a repeat of what happened before. At least, Goku doesn't. He's got enough going on with him as it is.

    I was actually partially joking when I made the guess about the nests but lmao I think it's cool.

    Vegeta is a hilarious, sarcastic bastard XD

    Great chapter! Since I don't hang around on this site anymore right now, I keep forgetting to check for updates. But don't think that I got bored with the story because I so didn't! ^^ I love it as always.

    Love always,

    Tabz.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 28, 2008
    Nice. Actually, it's pretty common for people to create nesting grounds of clothing when in need o f comfort. I love how you described it perfectly, excellent job. I haven't been able to read a lot lately so it was a real treat to read this update. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lacrymosa_angel on October 28, 2008
    YAAAAAAAAAY!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!! That has really made my day XD

    I loved it!! I had a feeling Goku was up to something like that, still the thought of Goku lying in a nest of Vegeta's clothes is just adorable!! ¬_¬ hmmm DeviantArt ideas... Vegeta was hilarious at the end, it was his own fault for not backing off haha

    I burst out laughing at Goten's reaction to Goku's large tummy thinking it was a tumor and he was dying XD!! How do you come up with these things? Pure genious!! I look forward to another amazing chapter ^.^
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