Click Here!

Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From saiyajinxyz on October 28, 2008
    I loved the chapter. I was thinking that he was making a nest, but I wasn't sure. I'm glad you confirmed it. I was becoming really curious. As for how Goku should give birth, I think that he should sneak into his nest and let his instincts guide him instead of having Bulma turn the birthing process into a medical and scientific exploit. I think he should use his nest and see what comes from that. Of course, I'm sure it won't be that simple, especially since Goku still isn't happy about being pregnant. Looking forward to the next update.
    Report Review

  • From XxChiChixX on October 27, 2008
    Well, I have an idea on how the birth goes but...^^; I can't share it with you because I'm going to be writing my own fanfiction soon and want it to be an original story. I trust you'll come up with something great though--after you came up with that cool tail lube detail, I have much faith in your creative muse. xP

    -:: Glances to the previous comment. ::- Just...do me a favor and don't cut his stomach open. >_O Not only has that idea been over used but it doesn't make much sense anymore. If he's able to get pregnant in the first place, his body should have a natural way of getting the baby out.

    You have a talent of ending your chapters with the most hilarious lines. XD Vegeta's rabies quote was incredible.


    Report Review

  • From ANON - rockforbrains on October 27, 2008
    -holds up chainsaw evilly- ...cut the belly...-laughs evilly-
    Report Review

  • From ANON - FrankMans on October 27, 2008
    Sorry i'm hiding my email... but give it via his tail? Would be kinda sexy...
    Report Review

  • From Gnome on October 16, 2008
    I love Goku's reaction to his pregnancy. It's so human. I've never been in that situation but I can imagine feeling like that. Terrifying. And even worse when it goes against everything he has been brought up to believe irrefutable. It makes me think of the Alien films, not that Goku needs that image.


    Thank you for the chapter.
    Report Review

  • From 66Hiei08 on October 14, 2008
    Love it!! Gonna hate to see this story end.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MewMew2 on October 14, 2008
    Thanks for updating and sharing. I like how you characterized Goku more like a new mom in the first 3 months of pregnancy. It's no joy ride all the way, in fact some women that I know got absolutely sick b/c of the stress on her body. Take my friend Jane, she was 18 when she had her first baby and it was unplanned. Apparently she had become so stressed that she regularly squeezed the babe when her muscles contracted during the first 2 months of pregnancy. Because of this her body actually reject he baby and about halfway through, she ended up w/ a still born. The doctors said that it was combination of her stature (4ft 11"), her self made sickness through stress, and her nervous habit of squeezing the muscles in her stomach and abdomen that did the baby in.
    Report Review

  • From saiyajinxyz on October 14, 2008
    Another lovely chapter from your talented hand. I'm glad that you have Goku being weirded out and uncomfortable about his pregnancy. Considering his past with Dr. Villa, the fact that he IS a man, and his newfound insecurities, I would think it strange he was A-okay about having a child. Not that I want Goku to suffer or having strange feelings about his child, but as you have written him, I think this fits. I do, however, hope that he recovers enough from his past experiences and insecurities to realize that what he has with Vegeta was created out of love, and that things have a way of working out. Looking forward to the next update and I hope you have good travels while you are out of your state.
    Report Review

  • From Chuquita on October 13, 2008
    Vegeta is always a delight in this fic. :3

    It's totally understandable that Goku wouldn't be used to the baby bump. I suppose if no exit appears they could always do a c-section--but that would involve cutting him open and I'm sure that would frighten Goku.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on October 10, 2008
    Squee! Great chapter! I liked the first part, it was funny the way Vegeta was messing with Goku about his stature and his girly voice. Poor Goku XD I still feel sorry that he had his height stripped away from him, it's sooo hard thinking about him being shorter than VEGETA. *snorts*

    Of course, Goku's come back was priceless! I think we would all prefer if the baby looks more like Goku. Hehe!

    And also, the sex scene was good. But what the heck was Goku doing to the clothes? O.O Is it some kinda thing that happens to pregnant men where they're attracted to the smell or feel of something that reminds them of their mate? XD Or is he up to something else? *rubs chin* Maybe he's building a 'nest' made up of their clothes...LOL.

    *cough*

    Anyway, great chapter!

    Love always,

    Tabz.
    Report Review

  • From saiyajinxyz on October 09, 2008
    Goku stealing Vegeta's shirt...I wonder if he has something planned. Anyway, sorry for revealing plotbunnies. It was completely unintentional. I tend to think a lot when reading a story I like, and those thoughts end up in the review. I'll try to contain my internal musings! Loved the chapter and I am looking forward, as always, to the next update. Keep up the great work.
    Report Review

  • From Nikikeya on October 09, 2008
    Shirt theif! Baaad Ku-chan! lol awesome chapter, (But just WHAT was Goku doing in that closet?) PCS!
    Report Review

  • From Chuquita on October 08, 2008
    Oh Vegeta. Him and his "dashing good looks". XD
    Wonderful chapter.
    Report Review

  • From XxChiChixX on October 08, 2008
    Wow, way to redirect Vegeta's attention away from the closet question, Goku. o__o; I still wonder what he was doing in there, though.

    This chapter: Cute. Sexy. Erotic. Funny~

    I want to rate it so much more than 5+s!

    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
    Report Review

  • From zombiebait86 on October 02, 2008
    Lol, vegeta's a pervy old man ^-^
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!