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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2008
    AHHH I KNEW IT WASN'T GOING TO BE A GOOD THING. Poor Goku, I feel for him so much right now. I blame this all on Vegeta just because I can. That bastard, doing this to Goku *shakes fist* and then blaming it all on him. Rape indeed.

    But I am glad my story was able to inspire you to write. I'm so glad that you did because this chapter was really awesome! I liked the beginning the way Goku was reacting to the idea that he could possibly be pregnant. I mean, it was actually really in character. Seems like him to sort of ignore the situation with a smile and nonchalant replies.

    Poor baby, morning sickness sucks. It seems between me and you, he's doomed to a lifetime of it. Hahahaha. I see you used the blood idea too, that was weird how we both thought of that ^^ Just rub it in mah face why don't you. Well, mine WAS a little different but same concept.

    I see you rather foreshadowed some dark events that may occur later. I don't like this. Don't tell me Goku is going to lose a baby in TWO fics Lol.

    Ahhh, I love this story. I wish there was more but I'm very pleased you updated so quickly. This shall keep me satisfied enough until later. You're really great!

    Love always,

    Talitha.
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  • From ANON - Rai on August 25, 2008
    Very well written. That lemon was quite good save for that line about Bulma. It was utterly unnecessary, when an ex lover is mentioned in the middle of a steamy scene it ruins the mood and throws you off. Of course it is your story and you are the one and only entitled to rightfully take the decisions you see fit, but if you allow a little advice, since that was irrelevant to the plot you might consider to change it or at least to take it into account next time, because those little details can affect to the overall factor of enjoyment. That said, the plot is really captivating and the story is developing very nicely.
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  • From DarkSerapha on August 25, 2008
    Awwwwr. What a wonderful lemon. So passionate.. just perfect. But I reckon "the morning after" will not be very pleasant...
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  • From ANON - Kakrot on August 24, 2008
    I love this story its awesome. Your a great writer ^_^
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  • From saiyajinxyz on August 24, 2008
    Great chapter! It was about time. I'm amazed that Goku and Vegeta survived as long as they did resisting each other. Does this unintentional yet intentional coupling spell a baby coming along? I can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2008
    DUN DUN DUN. Why do I get the feeling Goku is going to be pregnant from this? I don't know how to react! Good or bad thing? GOOD OR BAD THING? AHHH *rips at hair*

    But maaan, that lemon was HAWT! I wasn't actually expecting it but it was definitely a nice surprise. Very sexy :D I sure hope they don't regret doing what they did later on, if Goku does get pregnant from it and they don't like it. That would be totally just...eugh! I hope new problems don't arise or something. Oh well, does this mean Vegeta can come back now? And Trunks too?

    I hope so!

    Awesome chapter, thanks for making it so juicy!

    Love always,

    Talitha.
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on August 23, 2008
    Arrrghhhhh!!!!!! I hate needles too, Can't wait to read more, and yes the scream was for the end and not the needles, thanks.
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  • From ANON - Kaysha33 on August 23, 2008
    Hello once again,
    I truly think you are wicked ;-) as I said before on deviantart. I can't wait to read more... (I know, I know, I'm repeating myself here :-))
    Poor poor Goku... you TRULY like to torture him (needles?)
    How about you? Are you in Kansas by now?
    Seriously, I hope you and your family are okay...
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  • From kyuhyun4evr on August 19, 2008
    gahhH! evil!! EVIL!!!!
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  • From Gnome on August 18, 2008
    This story is a joy. I always look forward to it. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - lacrymosa-angel on August 18, 2008
    awww going through heat sounds horrible :S i feel sorry for poor goku :(
    hehe i knew vegeta was gonna turn up (at least i'm assuming that's who it is...who else calls him Kakarrot and is still living?) ARGH!! i can't wait to find out what happens next!! Will there be a lemon??
    Either way, this story ROCKS!! XD
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  • From saiyajinxyz on August 18, 2008
    I don't hate you, but...such a cliffhanger! I take it Vegeta couldn't stay away, and after witnessing Goku's little exhibition in the woods, I'm sure neither one of them are going to be able to resist each other. I feel badly for Goku. I wouldn't want to be in his shoes. Hopefully a little loving from Vegeta will help him out. Looking forward to the next update, and I really do hope that you don't blow away to Kansas:)
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  • From DarkSerapha on August 18, 2008
    *looks embarassed* Oh, allright, so condoms wouldn't have worked. It was worth a try though, don't you think? Oh dear, I think Kakarotto and Vegeta just got into trouble - again...
    *pokes Crimson Tide* Challenge? You? Participate? Hm? www.darkserapha.de/challenge Puuuhleeeeeeeaaaaazeee?
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  • From Chuquita on August 18, 2008
    Oh what a cliffhanger. X3
    And we all know who that is because there's only one person who calls him that. :D

    Much love for Goku and Bulma's interaction in the beginning of the chapter. I was almost worried Goku would go oozaru when he jumped out the window. ^^;
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2008
    I had heard about the hurricane from a friend who lives in Miami and I was wondering about you too. I hope everything turns out okay!

    As for the chapter, I was so happy when I saw that you updated. I was lying on my bed, sweating to death and then I was thinking about your story and I came on to read some old chapters but then I saw you posted already. Made my day so much better!

    I liked the interaction between Goku and Bulma. She's such a good friend and deserves more recognition than she gets in a lot of stories, and even in the show itself. I thought it was funny how Goku was embarrassed about being naked because before he used to NEVER care that he was naked. And then the needle...someone needs to really help him get over that fear. I get needles about three times a day, so I got over it right quick :P But I always wondered, how the heck does a thin little needle pierce saiyajin flesh anyway? They can withstand bullets but are easily penetrated by needles? LOL

    The other part of the chapter scared me a little. I never thought I'd see the day when Goku would ENJOY taking somethings life. This must be realllly getting to him. Also, never thought he'd be one to masturbate! Hahah. I loved it though, it was pretty sexy.

    But the ending, how could you! You meanie. Thanks for the update and stay safe!

    Love always,

    Talitha


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