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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From Chuquita on August 13, 2008
    AWWW! Vegeta left? :( Well, I understand why; Goku isn't ready to get pregnant just yet. (Is there such a thing as a saiyajin birth control pill? Or would that fool with his heat?).
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  • From ANON - Saya on August 12, 2008
    °_° No Goku, you need to make baby-vegies!
    Don't make him leave >Oo
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  • From ANON - Lacrymosa-Angel on August 12, 2008
    aww poor vegeta, i hope goku comes round soon :) and yay gohan accepts the relationship!! XD
    great chapter regardless of length. OH! and i'm glad your dogs ok :) i love dogs XD
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  • From DarkSerapha on August 12, 2008
    d'aw... somebody should tell those two about condoms.
    I'm still wondering if everyone else if ever going to find out about Goku's past in the lab. Reading this story makes me want to continue a story about an experiment starring Goku and Vegeta that I started a long time ago but never published...
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  • From saiyajinxyz on August 12, 2008
    Nooooo! Okay, I understand why Vegeta's leaving. He's being very considerate and he doesn't want to accidentally inflict damage on Goku's already hurt self-esteem. He wants Goku to trust him, that he won't take advantage of the situation even thought he would really like, and get Goku pregnant to boot. It's just that I don't think Goku will be any easier without Vegeta around, even if he's afraid of having a baby. Update when you get the chance. I hope you are alright from the coyotes. They are very pesky animals.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2008
    Poor Vegeta and poor Goku. This heat stuff doesn't seem to be helping them any. At any rate, I really liked the little scene between Goku and Gohan at the beginning of the chapter. I had sort of forgotten about their fight from earlier but I'm glad that things cleared up between them. I'd hate to see their wonderful father/son relationship ruined because Gohan couldn't accept Vegeta.

    I hope Goku comes to terms with the idea of becoming pregnant, and I hope Vegeta doesn't do anything stupid. IS a pregnancy going to happen in this story?

    Whatever happens, I can't wait to see how it turns out!

    And don't worry about the short chapter, just take care of yourself first :)

    Love always,

    Talitha.
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  • From Tyrana on August 11, 2008
    Chapter 19

    O.O Wow! I was speechless there for a while. This chapter was so thrilling. It got me so hooked till the end. It was like watching one of those actions movies. You have a knack to writing action scenes, the detail was amazing. You have me all worried for a while when the chip was found by Villa and they got on the road, I was all screaming "No, no, no, how will the others find them now." The idea of the two saiyans being at the nercy of the diabolic doctor without any way out was blood-curdling. Hahah, I wasn't expecting that a silly tune would become their salvation, genial touch.
    I agree with they don't having sex in the lab and for forced motives. It wouldn't be fair to Goku after all he's been through over the years. And I'm glad Vegeta would think so. Goku deserves to live a beautiful love story, with the proper wooing from his prince and to know what means to be really loved awww, sorry for going all sentimental here ^.^
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  • From Tyrana on August 11, 2008
    Chapter 17

    Sorry for switching the order, I read chapter17 nd 18 altogether and then almost forgot to review this one ^^;

    I think this was the better written chapter so far. From Vegeta's reaction at the forced "mating" to all the mayhem afterwards. The sheer intensity of it all just left me breathless, really. Bravo for Vegeta's view about suicide: The coward's way out, I think that's the most realistic Vegeta I've read. I hate it when people depict him as a pathetic emo with suicidal tendencies, that's so ludicrous. Vegeta would go into an homicidal wrath under pressure, not would go crying his guts out like some hysteric teenager, bleh. Sorry for this little ranting, but there's too much butchering of Vegeta out there to find something enjoyable to read anymore. (well, for very rare and delicious exceptions ^.^)
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  • From Tyrana on August 11, 2008
    Chapter 18

    (I have a helluva to catch up here, sorry. I couldn’t read anything for a long while, it was interfering with my own writing, mostly making me wonder why the hell should I keep writing at all when I’m too clumsy and unable to write a decent thing unlike the rest of people ^^; I still have some issues but I’m reading, but just at the pace my sanity allows ^^; )

    I specially liked this chapter, masterfully written I’d dare to say. That Villa is a manipulative son of a bitch, messing with Goku in such way, I just wanted to strangled him with my own hands and choke him very slowly and very painfully to death.

    Vegeta isn’t helping to much either, not too tactful of a guy, neh? I think he deserved that beating XD But I suspect the kiss and the sexual “harassment” he was subjected to afterwards must have been even more shocking.
    All the scene between the two saiyans was very intense. I was reading with all the detail you put there as if I could see everything unfolded before my eyes and at the same time feel as if I was therein, in that same room with them hearing his voices and feeling the tension. You have to tell me one day your secret to get that level of interaction with the reader ;D

    What was hilarious about this chapter was that when Villa was tying to manipulate Goku into bribe Vegeta to impregnate him I couldn’t stop thinking of Ursula, the witch from Disney’s little mermaid, you know all that thing of “If you don’t seduce the prince and get him to choose you as his wife you will return to your mermaid shape” and she lost her voice too, lol I was just wondering if it served you somehow of inspiration or it was just a purely coincidental thing, (well, nothing is coincidental entirely, all the background we bear one way or another ends showing in the things we do ) I thought it was funny. Goku the little mermaid, Vegeta the prince (prince asshole in his case instead of prince charming, Lol and Villa the perverse sea witch. I wonder who would play Sebastian…Sorry, now I’m being a dork ^^; )



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  • From LittleMustardSeed on August 07, 2008
    i never would have thought Trunks would be so obssessed...and sly enough to actually try and get Goku while he was with Goten and Gohan, baka XD last 2 chaps were really good, i loved the glittery hair bit, made me giggle ^_^
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  • From solitare1 on August 05, 2008
    Vegeta understanding.....hmmm.....there's a new concept. I like it!
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  • From zombiebait86 on August 05, 2008
    i can't draw Goku T-T tried and fail miserably! **sigh**
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - darkserapha on August 05, 2008
    Ah.. it's been a while since I checked by and man, have I missed some tasty tidbits. Mmmh. I'd love to see you participate in my canon to fanon-challenge, by the way. There's some nice prizes to be won, and of course you'd make me very happy. *grins* All the details are here: www.darkserapha.de/challenge
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  • From Chuquita on August 05, 2008
    Vegeta handled that awesomely! X3 And way to go Gohan and Goten for stopping Trunks before he could do something beyond his control. I think a Capsule Home is an excellent solution to this. :3
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  • From kyuhyun4evr on August 05, 2008
    gah! you left me hanging.....-.-. i wanna hear the talk between Goku and Vegeta. XO maybe itll lead to some nice Saiya-jin smex??? XD one can always hope.
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