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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - Lacrymosa-Angel on August 04, 2008
    This story is awesome!! Thank you so much for writing it, it is my favourite fanfiction out of any i've ever read! Sorry I'm only reviewing now...I started reading from when you had chapter 35 or so done and i've been meaning to review but i suck at reviewing on time lol however i promise to try harder.
    Goku is sooo cute in this story how could you NOT fall in love with his cuteness?? Evil Mean scientists hurting kaka-chan!! You had me scared for a while when you had him second thinking his relationship with vegeta and then left it at a cliff-hanger! But everything turned out ok yaaaaay!!
    HAHA i knew Trunks was gonna cause trouble...but at least he's sorry, I like Trunks and didn't want him to be mean :D I can't wait to see what happens next!! seriously! XX
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  • From Gelta on August 04, 2008
    Mwhahahaha! Chuquita's mental image came true! Two golden warriors, one defending Gokus honor and the other crazed with lust for him. Its a classic black knight and wight knight scene!

    *Deep Breathes*...*Evil Grin*...ok, psycho moment over... Vegetas understanding and compasion for how Trunks was awesome, as was trunks indepth veiw of his feelings, both very manly.

    40th chapter and over 300 reveiws, you go girl! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2008
    Baha! BRILLIANT chapter. I wasn't expecting ANY of that to happen and it was such a surprise, in a good way. I was kind of wondering when Trunks would do something to cause the tension to rise.

    I loved the way you described Vegeta at the beginning of the chapter. The way he was muttering to himself and slashing his tail was just too brilliant of an image. I also liked the way he looked at Goku's glittery hair with distaste. It is so just like him to act that way towards anything with a feminine appeal.

    People sniffing around Goku is also a funny thought. I liked the way Bulma just HAD to go off and experiment with the scent. Candles? Honestly. She's a strange woman.

    I'm glad Gohan and Goten were there to protect Goku. If he had been by himself he would've been attacked for sure, considering he can't go Super Saiya-jin anymore. I felt sorry for Trunks though; he's a good guy but just couldn't help himself. Luckily Vegeta didn't completely lose it. I would hate to read about him killing his own son.

    Awesome chapter. I was so waiting for an update and I got happy when I saw you added a chapter!
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  • From Asper on August 01, 2008
    Ah, finally got around to reading this one, I quite liked what you've written so far. It's fun, a little bit quirky, but in a well developed way. I find it interesting that you've spent less time describing what took place in the lab than you have the effects they've had; you focus on the now almost exclusively even though the past is relevant, a delicate and unique touch.

    I'm looking forward to seeing how Vegeta handles Goku's new dilemna :P The pampering and butterfly clips were especially funny, I was killing myself laughing when Goku wanted the girls to finish his nails! Keep it up, I like the light hearted mood you've got going here.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on August 01, 2008
    That was really cute, the image of Goku having a makeover with his granddaughter and Bura. Vegeta, apparently, didn't think it was such a great thing though. He's finally going into heat! Just like Bulma, I'm curious to see how 'interesting' things are going to develop as he proceeds and what Vegeta will do (if he will attempt to keep Goku from getting pregnant, even though he would really like another child).
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  • From Gelta on July 30, 2008
    300th reveiw! And Vegetas perception of Pan and Bura's pampering was hilarius, Im now so totaly begging you to draw Vegetas face at the part when he walks in sees Goku with all the glitter and clips in his hair LOL. Now im wondering what other strange things Goku will do as he goes into heat :P Good chapter, cant wait for the next.
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  • From zombiebait86 on July 29, 2008
    .....GAH EVIL!
    J-chan
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  • From Chuquita on July 29, 2008
    I'm ridiculously tempted to draw Goku with his hair pulled back now. XD

    This was a fun chapter; and I definitely agree with Bulma at the end about it going to be "interesting". Luv'd Vegeta's reaction to Goku with the mudpack on his face. XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2008
    Yes! New chapter. Made my grueling day a little brighter. That was like the first thing I checked for when I got home :D and you did not disappoint. The idea of Goku having butterfly clips in his hair isn't actually that strange. He and butterflies go well together (as they seem to have some WEIRD attraction to him). Poor Vegeta. I laughed when he broke the doorknob off the door. For some reason that was just SO funny.

    Also, Trunks is making things interesting. I always kinda wondered about him. TrunksxGoku is actually one of my favorite pairings, a couple above VegetaxGoku but sigh we all know it won't happen in this story :P And Goku's in heat :O Will Trunks try to make a move? Well, I'll be rooting for Vegeta of course ^^

    Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.
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  • From Zofo on July 25, 2008
    Oh I love reading that position, scrumptious!

    Nice to see Goku in control for change now he's so weak and helpless :( Maybe it cheered him up a bit.
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  • From Gelta on July 25, 2008
    Mmmmm ... tasty! I love how you wrote that. When are you going to get to all the stuff you had planned BTW? I second Chuquita's mental image but I also get one of Trunks chasing Goku around Capsule Corp XP lol. Mabe xxChiChixx will do some doodles when she gets back from florida,:) her work is fab! so was the last few chapters.Rock on.
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  • From Chuquita on July 25, 2008
    Poor Goku, he can't go ssj anymore TT_TT
    Though it does make sense from a medical standpoint.
    Vegeta's advice to him was hilarious (go blow something up, you'll feel better).

    So Trunks is a rival now? O_O

    I agree with Goku, Vegeta could easily defeat Trunks in battle. (Though I get this funny two knights in armor fighting each other over the hand image. XD )
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  • From zombiebait86 on July 25, 2008
    god that was evil >.
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  • From ANON - saya on July 24, 2008
    OOOOOO YEAH, RIDE GOKU RIDE.
    *_* I really (i think I'm really a stalker now) love this fic, and your style!
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  • From kyuhyun4evr on July 23, 2008
    holy geebus, I am lovin this story! Ive alreday read it twice, just for kicks. ^_^ and i loved the last chapter with the positions and stuff. hilarious and smexy all in one. XD
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