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By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2008
    Ooh. I love you. You wrote one of my favorite positions for sex. Not many people write this one for yaoi couples, and I always wondered why. It's hot. When Goku asked Vegeta if he could be on top, I knew he was referring to this. Still, I think Goku should get a chance to REALLY top Vegeta some time. Maybe as a one-time thing just so he can say he topped his top :P

    Great chapter. It was juicy and the sex scene was good :D It's rare that I find ones I like to read.
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  • From ANON - Saya on July 20, 2008
    I love you really much *_*
    And I love your goku and vegeta even more...
    (and don't make me hate trunks pleaseeeee ç_ç)
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  • From BullKitty on July 15, 2008
    May praise be had to the 15 minute delay in computer shutdown!!! ...And of course the author herself :P
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  • From topbear1974 on July 15, 2008
    I have been following this story for a while. I love goku vegeta pairing--doesn't matter who's on top as long as these two are together, I am a happy bunny.

    You writing style is very gripping I really enjoy how you unravel the plot. Only thing troubled me now is Goku's character is quite OCC to me. He is gentle but never weak. He is free like wild, but also take responsibility when required, no matter how heavy it is. He is persistant as well, will try to think any possible little way to win, I simply can not imagine his resignate and cry in the corner. I love him dearly, seeing him cry would make me eat for days. Luckily in anime he never did.



    However I guess everyone has a different interpretation of the story. I guess mine is quite different from yours. Thanks for the long lovely story. Must took a lot thinking. I wish you can return Goku his glory, not become just a attachment to vegeta. But it is just me. Don't worry. Write the story in your heart. That would be the best.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2008
    I like your story. I've been following it for little while now. Sorry I haven't reviewed before this...I never get much time on the computer these days. Anyway, I like how cleverly done the story is. I never completely saw GT (I got bored about twelve episodes in) but I like how you incorporated the plot into this story and made it work. I also like the pairing Vegeta/Goku. Not my favorite but still an interesting pairing.

    The only thing that kinda bugs me is the way you write Goku. He seems more like an angsty teen than the gentle hero I came to know. Buuut you have explained that people don't go through experiences such as these and come out alright and perfectly the same. I think you have Vegeta's character down though. :D

    Also, your sex scenes are all rather similar so they get kind of boring but that's not a big problem for me. I usually skip sex scenes anyway...unless they are absolutely crucial to the plot and I'd be completely lost if I don't read it.

    Grammar could use some work too...but that's about all I can think of. Good work on writing such a long and complex story! Hope to see a new chapter soon.
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  • From Zofo on July 15, 2008
    I'm worried that Trunks is making a play for Goku. What if he overpowers him during Goku's heat. I'd hate to see Goku forced against his will again after all he's been through. Back off Trunks!

    Sad to see Goku accepting he can't go SS anymore without much of a fight. He says he's tired of being the hero, but I'm still wishing he can re-gain the ability. Maybe after a couple of cubs :)

    Goku's first unforced blow-job was hot, loved him exploring Vegeta. Vegeta certainly enjoyed it too as he nodded off afterwards lol.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on July 15, 2008
    The bonus chapter was cute! I really enjoyed reading it. This one was nice too, of course! I never really thought Trunks would show an interest in Goku. It certainly does make an interesting love triangle. Goku's also reacting to the news that he can never be a Super Saiyan quite well. Looking forward to see what you've got cooked up for the next chapter!
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  • From XxChiChixX on July 15, 2008
    x] This was a reaaaallllyyy good chapter. I mean, I read it twice. :D Couldn't get enough of it!

    I really like how the dinner went. This developing Trunks/VegetaxGoku love triangle that's developing is really interesting and I'm really eager to see where it goes. Vegeta's foreshadowing some intense plot twists in the future!

    The blowjob was amazing. X3 I laughed aloud at the end (both times) when Vegeta said 'Holy shit'. Heee~ Iloveyou.
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  • From zombiebait86 on July 15, 2008
    Skee
    J-chan
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  • From zombiebait86 on July 15, 2008
    your mean to veggie he wants some steamy shower love! lol....>.> though.......if Bunny cooks as well as people say.... >_< I'd leave my redhead in the shower too.......
    J-chan
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  • From XxChiChixX on July 11, 2008
    I'm sooo sorry for the delayed review! Okay! So. About Goku not being able to go SSJ again....POOR THING! After all thats been taken away from him, he's really losing it all! All he wants is to get back to his life, the way it was before Villa, but it seems like he never can. But being as young as he is, he's getting the chance to start over and try life again -- something some people dream they could do. But really, Goku losing his ability to fight and grow strong is like me losing my ability to draw! D: Oh god I would cry...

    I really loved the last scene, though. Where he runs out of the shower to go help Bunny. "She lets me lick the bowl!!" I bet Vegeta was really thinking "I'll let you lick my---- D:!! " XD Ahh, priceless moments!

    What I'm going to hate most about being away from my computer for a month is not being able to read this! ;^; I mean, I think some of the hotels have internet connection but I don't know for sure. KEEP UPDATING WHILE I'M GONE! If by some chance I cant get on, I want to come home to FOUR weeks worth of In Your Dreams goodness! You know I'll be looking forward to it.

    I'm gonna go doodle nooowww. :3 -:: Smooch. ::-
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on July 10, 2008
    Thank you very much for the continuation of ch35/bonus chapter. That was very generous of you and did make it seem more tied together at the end. You've done an excellent job once more, please continue to do so when you have the time.
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  • From ANON - Vegevi on July 10, 2008
    the end is soooo sweet^^
    "What about me?" Awwww, you´re truely a talent, i love this ff^^
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  • From Zofo on July 09, 2008
    Haha, Vegeta must be kicking himself.

    Nice to have a bit of comedy after the shocking revelation of the previous chapter, which I still haven't got over.
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  • From ANON - TristaML on July 09, 2008
    AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA


    Vegeta would extract revenge

    Thats funny

    :D
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