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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From XxChiChixX on June 24, 2008
    Awww, I like how he went back to his little house! You really described the scenery well--with how old and worn everything was. It's so sad that Goku had to burn his bath-----.........
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    IS THAT WHY HE BATHES IN A BARREL!? IN THE MOVIES? WITH WITH WITH WITH..WITH GOHAN? OUTSIDE? IS THAT WHERE THAT COMES FROM!? Oh man! That never even occurred to me until just now! O_O I always wondered what was up with that!

    ..>>; A-anyway. The doggy-style line cracked me up. X3 Very amusing. I wonder what Goku's going to learn from all of this.
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  • From Zofo on June 23, 2008
    Phew, Goku got to shelter, I was worried he'd catch flu!

    Strange image of Chichi explaining sexual positions to Goku. I always pictured her as very conservative, but I'm glad someone is explaining things to him and can't wait for him to put it into practice with Vegeta :-)
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  • From Zofo on June 19, 2008
    Nasty Gohan making Goku doubt Vegeta's love for him. Seems Gohan has a real problem about it, getting up on his high horse and preaching. Hope Vegeta finds Goku soon and makes him believe him again.

    Poor Goku shivering in the rain unable to get home, he'll catch his death of cold.
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  • From ANON - Chibi_Dilandau on June 18, 2008
    Gohan is such a stick-in-the-mud =(
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  • From Chuquita on June 17, 2008
    So good! Oh I luv'd the foreshadowing of the storm. Poor Goku, he's so worried now.
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  • From ANON - Simone on June 17, 2008
    Hi! Great chapter, I really liked it. Gohan stirred some doubt in Goku, which I think was really important.
    Goku needs time to think everything over, as things went somewhat fast lately. Everythings new and scary and he's still so vulnerable. I really can feel with him. I hope he'll train a lot to get his (high) ki back, this would make things a lot easier and would make Goku feel safer and more sure of himself. I always tend to think that, if SOMETHING happens, anywhere, and nobody happens to be around the once strongest fighter in the universe can't even defend himself against a stray wolf or something.

    So pleaaasssseeeee (can you see me begging on my knees?!) let him get stronger soon! I think it would really be a good idea if he stayed alone in the forest for some time without anyone disturbing him. He could really need some time to think everything over and to find his own center/point of view/position. I'm really feeling with him, but I KNOW he's strong! Go, Goku!!
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  • From solitare1 on June 17, 2008
    There is always one relative willing to unzip their pants and piss on your life and not feel bad about doing it. Great story BTW.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on June 17, 2008
    Goku is not better off by himself. Shame on Gohan for bringing up painful thoughts. I just want to scoop Goku up and give him a hug and tell him that everything will be alright. I know Vegeta didn't mean he wanted to control Goku the last time their passions got the better of them. And I'm sure Vegeta will be more then understanding about Goku's concerns (at least, I hope he would be). Goku's just afraid. Looking forward to the next chapter, even if it is filler.
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on June 16, 2008
    Excellent symbolism in this chapter! I like how there was a person that objected. Cannot wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From XxChiChixX on June 16, 2008
    X3 I just gave you your 200th + ! Hehe.

    That thunder storm scene at the end was really intense. I could see it so vividly. And it reminded me of what's going on outside of my window right now. .. If -only- Goku was out in that storm, so I could drag him in and dry him off---..ahem. ^^

    Filler Chapter or not, I still loved it. Always enjoy your writing! I'm excited to see what your plans are for the future chappies!
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  • From saiyajinxyz on June 14, 2008
    Vegeta sure likes to say things without thinking them through. It must be that Saiyan pride of his. Oh well, it makes his relationship with Goku all the more interesting.
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  • From Zofo on June 12, 2008
    Aww I loved Goku teasing Vegeta with his display in the river. Shows he's growing more confident around him.

    But then he was mortified by what he'd revealed last night. So glad Vegeta was calm despite his inner annoyance and finally got him to believe he wasn't disgusted and truly loved him.

    Looking forward to how he will make Vegeta pay for his comments to Bulma :-)
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  • From ANON - Danielle on June 12, 2008
    Hey CrimsonTide! Awsome job! Ive read all 32 chapters twice and never get tired! Clearly this is my fav on here....followed by Damned Traditions...this story rocks out loud...i wish it would never end! Ok now onto important matters....

    I saw that you wrote that your suffering from writers block and have some ideas that id love to read...you knw wht would be nice....if a guy appears at this stage and starts obsessing over Goku...you knw like stalking...and Vegeta gets jealous and stuff....yea stuff like that...cause i love seeing Vegeta jealous!!!! Heheheh anyways update soon....you update real slow...no offense


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  • From emudii on June 09, 2008
    I've been watching this story for a little while--probably since about chapter sixteen? It's one of the few V/G fics that I keep up with. I like the pairing dynamic, but I'm leery of its fandom. There's just... too much, blatant OOC flying around, you know? So it pleased me to find this. I enjoy your attention to detail and how carefully you've crafted a loving relationship between them. Just thought I should let you know that, since I'm going to be sticking around.

    Also, I'm shocked I didn't realize who you were, earlier. "Painfully Alone" was one of the first deviations I favorited when I switched over to a universal username. :)
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  • From Simoko on June 02, 2008
    "I'm YOURS!!!"

    Omg.. perfect. Just loved that. this chapter was definitely hot. You gotta do more. ;]


    --Android22
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