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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide

From ANON - gwyllion on August 22, 2010
OMFG.

This has GOT to be one of the BEST reads of DBZ in my life!!!! You have turned me into a HUGE fan of Vegeta and Goku. I seriously couldn't gt my ass out of this chair for 2 days. 2 DAYS! It was love at first sight! Thank you so much or this. I was practically laughing and crying throughout the entire story. My heart gave out to discover the ending part where Vegeta woke up. Oooh...that was mean. Lol. It nearly tore my heart in two. But all in all, I really enjoyed it. Though I was sad to see it finally end. Thanks so much again! I look forward to reading more of your stuff! :D
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From ANON - Ubikono on August 16, 2010
Since DBZ Kai started airing again I've had the chance to re-watch the series and as a result my perspective on the characters has changed in the eleven years since I was a teen. Pairings for this series were based on the established ones and not once did I ever think of the Goku/Vegeta pairing.

I went to some forums and saw that many people preferred the GokuxVegeta pairing. One that I couldn't help but ask myself why?Seeing as how their personalities were not compatible in that situation. Was it because of their height difference? I thought that their dynamics would be better in VegetaxGoku and luckily I came upon your story. Was I glad that I did!

You describe their relationship in such a dynamic way and the plot that you made is conceivable as canon. There are so many parts that I want to emphasize on why you're Vegeta and Goku work and how it retains on why they work better than Goku being in control. He's always seen strength as a means to gain friends and companionship. After all aside from his dad/grandpa Gohan everyone else who he met after that tested his strength and used it as a means, but not in a selfish reason. just that they needed his help. Give thanks and well.........that's it. I assume that Goku sees power as a means of friendship and acceptance. And it is understandable why after he couldn't become Super-Saiyan he was so distraught well also with what he was put through by Dr. Villa. His character does need to relinquish control and let others handle the situation.and i did like the part in which Goku stated that he wants to *rest*

As for Vegeta, despite his gruffness and just grumpy demeanor the reason he strives for that control and nothing is is that at a young age his ability of choice was taken from him by Freeza. it was his arrogance and anger that sustained him to survive and gather his time. he became ruthless, even to those who took care of him or respected him like Nappa and Raditz. Submitting puts him in vulnerable position one which takes him to that time when he witnessed his home planet explode. I believe that the Vegeta you portrayed one who is still arrogant but who has mellowed out due to his stay on earth and of his children has made him capable of understanding Goku's situation at the hands of Villa. It also helps that they were able to fuse, I don't think that they would understand one another if not for that.

They have such great dynamic and the dialogue just goes so well.As for the other characters their opinions on their Vegeta's and Goku's relationship just works. Bulma is more understanding and knows that what she and Vegeta have is not conventional, she understands that he needs something more and it has to be Goku, the last full-blooded Saiyan. Gohan's reaction though upsetting is true to character, he will be weary of Vegeta no matter what.As for Piccolo, one of my favorite characters. He's just himself, he doesn't meddle in affairs
unless needed and he provides support to the son family. As for Chi-Chi, she's one tough character and can come off as rude and hostile, but she cares in her own manner. One can't blame her for wanting a simpler life. She eventually just wants happiness for Goku.

When i read the last chapter, I couldn't believe it!I thought the title derived from the first chapter alone. It was certainly a surprise!
I sure wish that there would be an epilogue of sorts! One can hope, or a continuation of what does happen once Goku is truly saved. That might be asking to much :) But i know that maybe things might be different, that maybe Victor is able to help Goki early on seeing as how both Goku and Vegeta have a chance to do things differently and how the birth of Momoku is a happier expereince for Goku.

Overall, as my first VegetaxGoku story I couldn't be happier and satisfied. This story will certainly be re-read many times in the future.

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From ANON - Kei on July 23, 2010
Seriously, the best VxG fic on this planet. Glad I found it after it was finished though. Thanks for spending all that time writing it!
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From ANON - Nu on June 26, 2010
amazing...I did not expect the ending even though I should have, given the title of your fic.
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From audreytiphaine on June 05, 2010
this is a beautiful story! i've quite enjoyed it up until now (i'm on chapter 26). I can't wait to get to the end!

audrey
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From DevilWoman on January 01, 2010
i was thinking that maybe if you do an Epilogue you can write how Goku do to be the seme and how Vegeta take the dragon balls and wish being has youth has goku, XD i love when Goku as for being on top and that Vegeta said now misunderstanding the things jajaja that's why i said it. anyways i love both as seme and uke XD
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From DevilWoman on January 01, 2010
you know, i was re-reading the story and it came to my mind when i end it for 2nd time that you could write and epilogue of how Goku's friends took their relantionship. Maybe Chichi took it in the bad way or simple describing the surprise in everyone's face and how Vegeta and Goku hug each other when they seeing each other in the real and how they feel know that they are finally together in the real word, not in a vision.
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From ANON - satsukifujin on December 18, 2009
OH MY GOD!!! Have you ever seen a twenty year old bounding around her room as if on drugs? To bad my computer doesn't have a webcam. Wow, that was one hell of a plot twist! One hell of a story!!! Normally there would be no way I could read a story with a submissive Goku, or a vegeta one (obviously this limits me greatly), but your story was awesome!!!! On par with the greatest fanfiction authors I've ever read!!! Wahhh, if you haven't already, you should definatly consider writing as a career possibility because this was AWESOME!!!

Ok, I'm done being a fangirl now.

or maybe not. I will definatly be reading this again!!! Keep it up!

Satsukifujin
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From ANON - Kojiita on December 12, 2009
Dear CrimsonTide a.k.a. Rourinu,

I... don't know what to say. I'm so moved by this story. The ending was so sad I cried when Vegeta realized it was all a dream. And I had a little clue before the ending it all was just a dream... But what a dream. It was so sad and hard to realize that those happening weren't real. :'
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From ANON - Madeline on November 20, 2009
Wow didn't see that end coming! :) Loved it but I hope Vegeta and Kaka get Momoku :( She was such a cutie!! Great end to a great story!! Congrats!! :D
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From ANON - Russell on November 01, 2009
That was the best Fan Fic ever created. !.!

It could even be its own saga. =D

You've kept up with it no matter whats held you back.

You are talented and i hope you write more soon. =]

x
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From ANON - ann on October 08, 2009
I read up to chapter 19 before I stopped. It started off as an intriguing story, good job on that. My only complaint so far is that you seem to be effeminating Goku more as the story progresses. Son Goku has always been my favorite character in Dragon Ball so I'm not overly fond of fanfiction that tend to make him more 'girly' than necessary. The pregnancy thing was what made me wrinkle my nose in distaste... it seemed to push the feminine thing even more.

In spite of this I do plan on reading more and I really like the story otherwise. I also like the way you handled Goku when he first escaped from Dr. Villa. Even though he's been through a lot I think you handled the way he dealt with it very well. The interaction with Vegeta was interesting too. Particularly when he gave him the finger after he first summoned Kintoun for him, lol.

I see that there are already 50 chapters in this fanfic! I can only hope things get better as I read more of the story. Hopefully Goku want be getting any girly than you made him though. ^^
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From ANON - SacrifricialButterfly on October 04, 2009
What a weird ending...not sure what to make of it really lol. But all in all, I've so enjoyed reading this story =] Thanks for taking the time to finish it and update etc, unlike some fic writers. xx
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From ANON - Chuquita on October 01, 2009
Oh WOW! I did not see that coming at all! But it makes so much sense when I think about it given the title. O_O Everything came around full circle and even though I'm sad that Momoku was only part of the dream, I'm relieved that Vegeta will still get to rescue Goku in the end.
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From solitare1 on September 29, 2009
to say, that story was amazing would be an understatement. I wish I could go on a little bit longer, because well it's a good story. But all good things must come to an end. I'll be looking for word to your next story. Later.
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