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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on May 06, 2008
    very cute chapter! I hope to see an update in the imeadiate future.
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  • From solitare1 on May 06, 2008
    Hey, Vegeta said he didn't want to go so you just have to pay the price for making him do what he does not want to do. Plus he is PAINFULLY honest!
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  • From oneswish on May 06, 2008
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

    it is by far the best vg/gk EV-VAR!!! i read this thing for three weeks.. i love it!! sorry that it took soo long to review, but i'll explain that later.

    im soo just.. wow-ed by the way u grabbed the characters.. its the best yet!! and i can actually see how goku is and its too cute! and u update the MOSTEST, do u know that?? u are a great writer, but people must tell u think often huh? i just wanted to say, i wanted to read what u had and finally i will review.. cause that chapter had me spitting soda all over my kid and she cried.. soo GOOD JOB!! u got my attention and soo much more, mostly stick computer.. lol! everytime my keyes stick now, i think about u.. lol!

    my kid makes it hard to read and review.. she helps me hit the keyes.. but well she is have a hard time with the soda incident. so i have a moment.

    this story is soo well written and descriptive. u have emotions down pat.. i mean vegeta is actually vegeta.. and goku is soo perfect.. if only this was a anime. ooo god.. **nose bleed** lol!! just so's u know's its too perfect, and addictive.. i come on everday and check to see if u made an update. its my poison of choice on aff.net and wow! what a choice..

    ThankYou!!
    higan
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  • From Zofo on May 06, 2008
    That was a lovely tender moment when Goku was watching Vegeta sleep and running through his feelings. Very touching.

    I didn't think Goku would agree to the triple date, but Bulma was right to get him socializing again. Chichi and Victor seem accepting. However, it looks like Vegeta's in trouble from that look at the end. Next chapter should be fun, wonder what Goku will do to get his own back.
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on May 06, 2008
    Thank you for updating once more. I eagerly await the next chapter>
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 29, 2008
    I'm glad for Goku's sake that he isn't pregnant. I think it would have really thrown him for a loop. And I enjoyed the Goku/Vegeta interaction. Vegeta seems to be able to say just the right things to make Goku feel better (when he isn't being an emotional retard). Talking about their strange phobias was great. I always found it amusing that both Goku and Vegeta would be afraid of such inane things, considering how powerful they are. Looking forward to the next update as always!
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  • From ANON - quasi on April 29, 2008
    EEEEEEEEEEEE chapter 12 = intense love. i read it this afternoon and the whole rest of the day i couldn't stop thinking about it, which made me pretty crappy company for my friends, i'm sure, but i don't care! and i just read it again just now and it's just...i have no words, i love it, you've captured the raw emotion so fully, it's perfect.

    have to go read the rest now, just had to say something about chapter 12 xDD

    xx
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  • From Zofo on April 29, 2008
    Typical way for Vegeta to stop Goku, by tripping him up. I could just picture the expressions, made me laugh.

    Great description of Goku's needle phobia, how it was irrational but you can't help your body reacting to it. I also have a phobia (not of needles) so could really relate to it. Glad Vegeta could calm him down and distract him. Also glad Goku isn't pregnant yet as I feel they need more time together, just the two of them, and Goku needs to come to terms with everything that's happened to him.

    Sorry you have had personal problems, update when you can.
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  • From Chuquita on April 29, 2008
    Heh-heh. X3
    That was an awesome chapter.
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  • From yukikoangel on April 28, 2008
    XD 'throw away the condom ...'

    Mmm Goku's refusal to be pregnant so soon also fit with the faq that he is physicaly 18 and well, not at the top of his form.

    But for Vegeta, it is also the chance to have a real saiyan+a proof of his mating with Goku.

    I want to see more of all your stories :D
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on April 28, 2008
    I completely understand. Supporting your friends should always come first. Thank you for fiding the time through it all in order to post anything.
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  • From Gnome on April 28, 2008
    So many places to laugh. Bulma, Vegeta and Goku all had their moments. I also noticed you controlled your POV! I never once had to wonder who was thinking what.

    On a darker note I'm very sorry to hear about your friend's boyfriend.
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  • From XxChiChixX on April 28, 2008
    Why does the image of Vegeta purchasing condoms at a drugstore make me laugh so much? XD

    Thank you for the great chapter! :3 I'm very appreciative and sorry you've been going through such a rough spot. :<

    I'm glad that you had Goku be physically too young for the children. ^^; As much as I adore my VegeGoku babies, I don't think Teen!Goku should be having them. xP So very good work with securing that.

    I loved how you described Goku's panic attack. I've said this many times before, and I'll say it again, YOU ROCK AT DESCRIPTION. X3

    The worm scene was funny. Poor Vegeta. XD You're always really good at portioning just the right enough of humor and suspense into each chapter~!
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  • From yukikoangel on April 27, 2008
    Okay, here is my email address : yukiko_angel_demon@hotmail.com and here is me screaming of outrage since I started that fiction.

    the story is simply captiving, and how some humans, even after Goku saved them so many time, only saw him as an animal.

    the Vegeta and Goku smex (giggle) but all the problem Vegeta is facing since he deosn't know how to correctly react!

    Oh god, I want more and probably an email for when your next chapter is up!

    (PS : Learned from it via Y!Gallery)
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  • From ANON - kuroineko on April 27, 2008
    Your story is so great, with all the plot twists, never know whatīs around the corner.
    I love long DB stories and male pregnancy.
    Keep going I canīt wait for the next chapter. I check the side every day.
    Pretty Pleeeeaaaase.
    (sorry english isnīt my mother tongue, I allways donīt know how to say what I want to say.)
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