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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From zombiebait86 on April 17, 2008
    What is it with all my fav authors and plot bunnies?? Lol, prince with a face full of dirt XD
    J-chan
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  • From Gnome on April 15, 2008
    As usual you made me giggle so many times. And I do like to laugh.
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  • From ANON - Simone on April 15, 2008
    Awww, you're mean (like always :-) )
    Stopping at such a point. I'm DYING to see Goku's reaction and IF HE'S REALLY PREGNANT?!!
    If so, I hope you're not making him overly ... you know ... female. You know, having mother instincts and building a nest and all this.
    I don't really like those stories where either him or Veggie are pregnant and they're changing in some sort of female just happening to have a penis. They're men and they should act like one, pregnant or not.

    Anyway, I'll be true to you no matter how the story'll go on. I'm confident it will be awesome (no matter if Goku turns into a baby machine or not *gg*
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on April 14, 2008
    Lovely. I wonder how Piccalo and Krillin will react to the news......
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 14, 2008
    Yeah! Another excellent chapter, that nicely brought a head some of the issues that both Vegeta and Goku will have to deal with in their new relationship. I enjoyed the added perception of how and what Goku might think of his role in his relationship with Vegeta, and his concerns about what his family might think. I can see how the pregnancy issue could be a big deal for him and now that you left it at such a cliffhanger, I look forward to reading the next chapter next week or so. Thanks!
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  • From Zofo on April 14, 2008
    Poor sore Goku (giggles). Nice morning after bath scene, very sweet.

    Understandable that Goku was feeling less of a man and expecting to have to be like Chichi as she's his only reference. I laughed at the bit where he was imagining himself hoovering with a baby. Glad Vegeta reassured him.

    Goku is afraid of the others reactions, I'm wondering if it will be all plain sailing. Can't see them all accepting and being pleased for them.

    So Goku could be pregnant but is unsure he wants kids yet. This could be tricky.
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  • From XxChiChixX on April 14, 2008
    "And that's when Goku panicked." - Nice way to end the chapter. XD

    I can only imagine what he'll do next. I'm so glad they're a couple now! :D!!


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  • From ANON - Lexa on April 12, 2008
    I'm totally in love with this fic! And about other people complaining about Goku being too OOC? I totally agree with you, of COURSE he's gonna be completely different than he is in the series under the circumstances. Duh! Gosh, some people. Lol. Anyway, love your writing, can't wait for the rest! :D
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  • From zombiebait86 on April 10, 2008
    ....your evil knows no bounds...but it was worth it! 26 chapters tell we finally got to the steamy action and your still going! Are you fuled by like rockets or something?!? Your crazy! hehehe
    J-chan
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  • From saiyajinxyz on April 08, 2008
    Yes! A very hot chapter, and one that was worth the wait for. I'm glad you didn't rush things, because it makes the moment so much sweeter. As for Goku being OOC, in the circumstances you are portraying him, I don't think he is at all. I think that Goku would react strongly to being so much weaker than he was before, especially considering his current size differential. He's used to being the protector of everybody, and now he's the one that needs the protection. I definitely think it would be something difficult for him to get used to. But Vegeta's there to help him out and I think the Goku you are creating will be so much more dynamic than the way he was before he left with the Dragon. I feel that you are doing an excellent job, and that your characters fit the molds you have created for them perfectly.
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  • From Simoko on April 08, 2008
    Hot as hell.

    Its about time we got some real lemon!!!


    D:
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  • From Zofo on April 08, 2008
    I'm so glad they didn't break the bond, I was worried that Vegeta had blown it, and Goku wouldn't give him another chance to break his heart.

    That lemon was truly beautiful and well worth the wait. So passionate and caring plus extremely hot! The inclusion of the mirror was genius, and I loved the part where Goku's insecurity about his strength showed and how Vegeta reassured him.

    So they're finally mated. That must mean more hot lemons to come. Yes! Oh and the patter of tiny feet (or should that be paws) soon.
    xxx
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  • From Gnome on April 08, 2008
    In my opinion Goku is definitely not OOC. It is the art of the fanfic writer to embrace canon characters and then show their growth in a believable way throughout the story according to the situations they meet. You have done this.
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on April 08, 2008
    Well I have been enjoying this story all along, sorry for not reviewing eariler. I love it, so keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Simone on April 08, 2008
    Yeah! You are the best!
    Finally they're together! I'm really happy for them - and glad that in the end everything turned out fine.
    *dances around happily*
    The lemon was just awesome. The way you described everything was just incredible and it was really worth the long wait.
    Did I mention that you are the best?
    *keeps on dancing*


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