Click Here!

Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From LittleMustardSeed on March 27, 2008
    omg! please update again soon, will goku remember what he said? will vegeta buy him flowers? and what gender will their child be? these questions need answers!
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on March 27, 2008
    Poor Goku, he was so embarrassed when the girls were teasing him, I was like awwwwww, but it was very funny. The little seduction scene at the water park was very cute and I loved how you ended it with a pinch. The image of Goku using his tail as a propeller also had me laughing.

    Goku makes an adorable drunk doesn't he, he was putty in Vegeta's hands but Vegeta was the perfect gentleman. Not something he does often so it showed his resolve to take it at Goku's pace and also how much he loves him.

    So Goku's not against having cubs, I did wonder, but he still thinks a bit like a human and believes it's strange. He obviously wants to be with Vegeta now but I hope he doesn't think Vegeta only wants him for that.
    Report Review

  • From Katiefoolery on March 27, 2008
    This is a fascinating story - I like the idea of their being able to start all over again, almost, giving them a chance to learn about each other. I'm also enjoying the way you're slowly developing the relationship between Vegeta and Goku. So many people tend to rush into that, without giving much thought to how they end up together. You're making it seem quite natural, with a mix of hurdles and small triumphs, which lends it a very believeable air.

    Now that the drama of the scientist and testing seems to be over, I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the rest of the story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Simone on March 27, 2008
    I really liked this fluffy chapter! They really deserved to be happy!

    ... and Vegeta and Picollo playing Volleyball ... I bet the white of the ball fitted well with Piccolos green skin *lol*

    Thanks very much for updating again so soon. But get better soon!! Being ill sucks *hands you a cup of tea*
    Report Review

  • From XxChiChixX on March 27, 2008
    "Eight bruises, four head wounds, ten volley balls, and one Namekian later," - XD ! I don't know why that makes me giggle so much..

    kay, its late so I cant really go into full detail of why I loved this chapter...but I think you know all the reasons I did. x3

    The drunk Goku was so cute, hehe.

    Doodles. They're coming. KEEP WRITING! You're on a roll! ..of course, get better too! Don't want you being sick. -:: Nuzzle. ::-
    Report Review

  • From ANON - darkserapha on March 26, 2008
    Yay, wooing! Awwwr.. that was nice! But oddly.. I think I liked Goku better mute... o.O (yes, I'm evil, why do you ask?)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 26, 2008
    That bit about the sunscreen was really cute. Thanks for updating once more, it's nice to have a pure fluff chapter every so often. Please update when convenient!
    Report Review

  • From Zofo on March 26, 2008
    Nice to see Kakarot still considers Vegeta a potential mate even though he's mad at him. Loved their banter as well.

    Some wooing, yippee!

    Oh that was so cute with the sunblock, surprised no one noticed though I suspect Piccolo did.
    xxx
    Report Review

  • From miezekatzi on March 26, 2008
    Hi!

    Sorry for not reviewing the last chapters ^^
    Anyway ... finally (after another stupidity to add to Veggies already quite long list) some progress.
    I'm really glad you made Goku regain his voice (we want to hear him moan and scream, right *g*).

    What I'm wondering is what's about all those henchman of Dr. Villa. I'm not really sure we're all done with them, yet. I mean, OK, the King's dead, but ... well, the king is dead, long live the king, right? (it's a german saying, I don't know if you really CAN translate it like this into English ... anyway)...

    Well, I really hope everything will go upwards from here on, but somehow I've got a bad feeling about this.

    Looking forward to another update!

    PS: it's really great of you to add this little 'wooing' :-)
    Report Review

  • From saiyajinxyz on March 26, 2008
    A jealous Vegeta would be quite uncomfortable, but I know that he would never deliberately hurt is little Kakarotto. At least in this story, he wouldn't. The beach scene was really cute. I never imagined sunscreen being used in such a sexy way. 10 points for Bulma's ingenuity and Vegeta's daring! Keep up the excellent work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From saiyajinxyz on March 26, 2008
    A sick Vegeta is not a very happy Vegeta and now he's messed things up with his jealousy. Poor Kakarotto!
    Report Review

  • From solitare1 on March 26, 2008
    That was so cute!
    Report Review

  • From Simoko on March 25, 2008
    XD

    that was so sweet! I loved it! Cant wait to see more!
    Report Review

  • From CrimsonTide on March 24, 2008
    The wooing is coming, I promise!! This set it up so Vegeta would HAVE to pull out all the stops :P

    Woo, woooooooooo!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - darkserapha on March 24, 2008
    *wails* where's the wooing?
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!