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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From Zofo on March 24, 2008
    Vegeta's first cold, or should that be man-flu, was so funny, especially the 'kill me now' part. It was just how I would imagine him acting. That's some cough medicine to be able to knock Vegeta out though, must be Bulma's special Saiyan strength batch.

    There was always the danger that Vegeta's temper could spiral out of control and upset Goku, but glad he's got his voice back. Vegeta will have to tread carefully and be extra nice to him now.
    xxx
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  • From zombiebait86 on March 19, 2008
    Bleh, finally the jerks gone...god why is "Ding Dong the Witch is Gone" in my head?!? @.@
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - Princessvegata on March 19, 2008
    Finally Dr Villa got what he deserved! I am glad he is dead. I hope that the two now can come together with no treat over their heads. A very great story.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on March 18, 2008
    Dr. Villa met a fitting end. I couldn't see Vegeta doing anything less than torturing the man the way he tortured Goku. An eye for an eye statement seems to come to mind. I was a bit shocked that Goku actually shot the man in the head, seeing how forgiving he could be in the show. However, I do recall him doing the deed when the bad person wouldn't repent from the evil ways, so I shouldn't be that surprised. Dr. Villa was evil incarnate. Looking forward to the next chapter and the wooing!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on March 18, 2008
    thanks so much for updating so soon. Excellent job on this latest chapter, i can't wait for the next one!
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  • From XxChiChixX on March 17, 2008
    YAYFORSLOWANDGRUELINGDEATHS!!! :D

    I throughly enjoyed reading Vegeta murder Villa...and the fact that Goku got the last shot in made it even better! I laughed when he couldn't let the gun go.

    And Yaaaaaaaay. Goku's back in his original clothes! :3 Me likey.

    And now on to the wooing. ... >>; Wooing would be better with a voice, though..and well..it has been 20 chapters...I think Dende's lonley.... -:: Cough, cough. Nudge, nudge. ::- xD
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  • From Zofo on March 17, 2008
    Oh yes, Dr. Villa finally got his comeuppance! *does happy dance* Loved how they both had a hand in it and Goku had the last word so to speak.

    Was very sweet at the end with Goku scared he would be trapped and obligated as he was with Chichi, but Vegeta played it just right, letting him know his feelings and wishes but not being too dominant.

    As you said, let the wooing begin *starts bouncing in seat*.
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  • From Racine on March 15, 2008
    I just really had to say this. I loved the fact you used the piccolo song and how pissed off he got. It was a priceless stroke of genius. I also love how the story is currently progressing. It is very interesting and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Nikikeya on March 14, 2008
    Heehee Piccoro Daisuki!!! Lol.


    Wooing? ::Shakes her head::

    Translation: it will be five more chapters before they [i]get it on![/i]

    Cause they have to do that whole one step forward, three steps back thing again! Can't they just be like Redkatts Saiyans and Screw for the sake of screwing? e___e;

    But no thats not very romantic.... Funny as hell. But not romantic.

    I can remember, are Goten and Trunks togather in this? What about Gohan and Piccolo.

    Gohan: You know if I was with Piccolo-san and we ever tried for kids... I'd probably end up laying an egg...

    Trunks: And then the kid's name would have to be Omlette. ::snicker::
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  • From zombiebait86 on March 14, 2008
    WHISTLING FOR THE WIN! hehehehe
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - Chuquita on March 13, 2008
    Oh that was AWESOME! I luv that idea, whistling to get Piccolo and the others' attention. X3
    I really like action-packed chapters like these.
    This fic has been so much fun so far, and now that I know you can review without being a member, I shall. :3
    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - mgpem on March 12, 2008
    Piccolo-san daisuki! Oh, dang! I love that song! ...Piccolo's gonna have a nose...err, ear bleed.*grin*
    BTW very nice work so far. I have to admit I was really surprised by the turn of events in the latest chapter, and quite pleased too. You see, I too want some WOOING! ^^;
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  • From 66Hiei08 on March 12, 2008
    OOoo.. You tease But then again, Vegeta trying to wooo Goku should be fun, lol. Please update soon. I'm into this story. I love DBZ, but for some reason I just can't seem to get my mind around writing anything from this series. So I "live" vicariously through others who write excellent DBZ. I want to see more DBZ/YYH X-Overs, Hahaha!!
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  • From Gnome on March 11, 2008
    Very nice. I enjoyed Goku's solution to his capture. It made me laugh.
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on March 11, 2008
    Nice job on this chapter. I'm glad that you put wooing into the equation before the long anticipated lemon. Nevertheless, I like many others was awaiting it. Oh well. Please update again when convenient!
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