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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2008
    do you need a tonge to whistel?
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  • From ANON - Chichicken on March 11, 2008
    Woah, I always thought it would need log-in to comment to fics here but now I tried and noticed I can do it without xD I must say I LOOVEE YOUUR STOORYYY!!! This is best ever, seriously T_T and this chapter absolutely suprised me and well, I at least wasn't dissapointed that there wasn't any hot sex ;D
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  • From ANON - Simone on March 11, 2008
    Finally!
    I knew you'd rescue them! Oh, that's just great! I hope everything will get better from now on and a very special someone gets the beating he deserves ... I'd be great if Goku regained some of his ki so he can do the beating up of Dr. Villa himself. But Vegeta doing it would be just as great ... oh, I love Vegeta as Prince in shining armour. He's so protective ... :-) ... that's just so .. sweeeeet! Awwww ... *sighs*

    Lookin forward to the next chapter! I'm really relieved that you didn't write a lemon in the lab ... with Dr. Villa watching and everything .... yuck!
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  • From ANON - BullKitty on March 11, 2008
    Man, good thing they had Piccolo with them, or Goku and Vegeta woulda been screwed. Literally too of course, but it's alright by me if we have take a raincheck on the lemon, you're good for it.

    ^_^

    Hee hee... you said "wooing"
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  • From saiyajinxyz on March 10, 2008
    I thought it was great! You're right about the lab. I want some wooing too, and having forced wooing...poor Goku and Vegeta. I thought the idea of Goku whistling a tune that Piccolo would recognize was a great and original plot device. All I can say is that I hope Dr. Villa somehow managed to die in the inferno. He's a horrible and disgusting man and it drives me nuts how horribly he treats Goku and Vegeta when they are obviously intelligent beings with feelings. Of course, humans do that to themselves, so it shouldn't be that surprising. Still...I hope he's out of the picture and Goku and Vegeta can finally try to sort out their relationship.
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  • From solitare1 on March 10, 2008
    I love your sense of humor!! I hope you get your wooing WOOING! Great story so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2008
    Yes! Finally there out. Please let us see the wooing
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  • From XxChiChixX on March 10, 2008
    Yeah, I felt that as I read this the scenes were a lot faster and less detailed than usual. But hey, you got them out of the lab so now they're finally past that road bump!

    I was wondering whatever happened to that chip! x3 I ADORE your clever ideas! I was so confused when Goku was whistling, ya know? I just stared and thought, "He's lost his mind...after all the years of torture..D: !!" but no! No! The whistling was for Piccolo! :DDDD So cool.

    I agree, wooing is good! :3 Can't wait for the next chapter. Vegeta will be happy to get his power back.
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  • From Zofo on March 10, 2008
    I was worried for a moment there when Dr. Villa found the device, as I thought the others would never find them once moved, so I'm breathing a huge sigh of relief. Neat idea for Goku to become a homing beacon, shows he's not as dumb as some perceive. Poor Piccolo's ears, though it was funny.

    Yes I was looking forward to a lemon, and had my pitchfork ready to come after you when it didn't materialize, but I do love a bit of wooing too so I'll forgive you. Just don't keep me waiting too long.
    xxx
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  • From ANON - darkserapha on March 10, 2008
    *smiles* I think it was a good decision not to let the lemon happen in the lab. One, it threw us readers off track and I like me some surprises, and two, I want to see some wooing, too!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 04, 2008
    It was indeed cruel of you to leave the chapter hanging like that. -sigh- I guess I will just have to send you lots of virtual cookies to entice you to update the next chapter. XD Seriously though, that's been the best chapter so far I think! Dr. Villa sure is a conniving and manipulative meanie.
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  • From zombiebait86 on March 04, 2008
    **hug**
    J-chan
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  • From 66Hiei08 on March 04, 2008
    I am really enjoying this. Have you seen my challenge request for a DBZ/YYH Xover? I bet you could pull it off. :o)
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  • From Zofo on March 04, 2008
    Poor Goku still unable to speak, I keep willing him to write in dust or try sign language, but at least it looks like he has finally convinced Vegeta? I hope so but now I have to wait a whole week for the mating (sobs). Your so evil!
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  • From saiyajinxyz on March 04, 2008
    Hmmm, Dr. Villa is evil, pure and simple. Poor Kakarrot, to think that Vegeta had rejected him when that isn't the case at all. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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