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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - darkserapha on March 04, 2008
    oh. argh. evil!
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  • From ANON - Chibi_Dilandau on March 04, 2008
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAH! *stomps feet* evil cliffhanger in a great story =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2008
    EVVVIILLLL! Why did you stop here..... Well love the story and I hope that they both get out before they get experimented on. I think this is one of the well written goku and vegeta pairings. Please write more!
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  • From XxChiChixX on March 03, 2008
    Haha! XD Oh and congratulations on 4,000+ hits, Firefly!

    xoxo
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  • From XxChiChixX on March 03, 2008
    This chapter had me going through so many emotions. O: Sometimes I was annoyed at Dr. Villa, and then I was thrilled to see some VegeGoku action, but others I was enticed by sexy Goku's taking of their shirts, and others I was so saddened by Goku's unhappiness...And now I'm extremely excited for the next chapter!! D: Aw, I don't want to wait another week...:< But I understand you're busy. I'll just... go doodle some more until my patience is back.
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  • From ANON - Mewmew2 on March 03, 2008
    Thanks for updating so quickly and to answer your question; Heck yeah we're eager for the next chapter! Update again when you can.
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  • From ANON - a Male fan on February 28, 2008
    well, this is quite certainly the best fanfiction of VxG yaoi i have ever
    read. And I compliment you on you amazing detail! I would love to make
    a doujinshi out of this! I might do that when you finish, if i have your
    permission?

    and i can't tell you in words how excited i am to read the rest!
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  • From zombiebait86 on February 27, 2008
    WAH!
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  • From saiyajinxyz on February 27, 2008
    Great, intense chapter. Those two really are living in a version of hell. Dr. Villa is a sick bastard and I hope he gets what's coming to him. Hopefully, Bulma and the others will find the two of them before they are forced into any more degrading situations. As always, keep up the great work and looking forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on February 26, 2008
    Lovely chapter! Possessive Vegeta is just too spiffy. Thanks for updating so quickly, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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  • From XxChiChixX on February 26, 2008
    Oh, you're getting doodles, Missy. You're getting doodles.

    I have to say.. my favorite line in this chapter had to be: “Hm. It would appear the dominant Saiyajin in a mated couple is extremely protective of his submissive, even at the expense of his own well-being. Take note of that.” XD Something about that made me crack up so much...

    I also really liked the beginning with the Z fighters and Bulma. It was funny, especially with Bulma and Piccolo.

    I'm going to disagree with Momo now. o_o; Because you have to put into consideration everything Goku has and is currently going through in this story. >>; It's seriously like nothing he's endured in the series so his response to the events would obviously be different. And after what went down in this chapter... Who wouldn't take pull that card when the glass is right there in your hand! I'm sure Goku's con---....O.O Wait a sec. Goku's not only considered suicide in the show, he HAS commit it! Dude, Cell Saga; big KABOOM. >>; So yeah. When it's the last thing he can think of, he'll do it.

    That's all I'm gonna say now. I have doodles to draw before they leave my head. D: I'm nervous they wont be right though.. I'll have to reread the scene again. As always, your writing is incredible. I love how you mention the little details .... x3
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  • From ANON - momo on February 25, 2008
    Your writing skill is brilliant, the story is very interesting, except I have to say goku is a bit too OCC. I will never ever imagine in next million years that Goku will be so weak to commit suicide. Vegeta's care towards Goku is very touching. But Goku is just not Goku anymore. Don't get me wrong. I still enjoy the story, just read with detachment from Dragon Ball.
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  • From Zofo on February 25, 2008
    Great chapter again.

    Are they really going try to get a human to impregnate Goku? Who will it be? Vegeta will use everything in his power to prevent it but will he regret not mating Goku if they do?

    My hatred of Dr. Villa is growing extremely strong at this point. Your ability to immerse me in this story and draw such strong feelings is truely remarkable, I've actually been scowelling at the screen in some parts.

    *sigh* I guess I'll have to wait until next Monday for an update, but wish I had a direct feed from your brain.
    xxx
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  • From miezekatzi on February 21, 2008
    Nice chapter! And a lemon ... normally I'm all for lemons (lots and lots of lemons :-) ), but this one somehow lets you wish it wouldn't have happened. You're really not making it easy for our two beloved Saiyajins.
    Well ... never give up hope ... so maybe everything will turn out fine in the end.
    I don't know if you're more the Happy-End-Type or the Drama-Type ... I hope it will be happy, well at least for all the nice guys. Villa can suffer (and suffer) - hopefully Enma will give him a room to share with Freezer and Cell :-) I definitely will keep my fingers crossed for this. Yep, definitely.
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  • From ANON - darkserapha on February 19, 2008
    Hm.. I must admit, this is the first chapter of this otherwise wholly enticing story that leaves me a little unsatisfied. The writing is good as per ususal, true, but I think the pacing picks up too fast in this one. I can understand that you were anxious to get to the lemon, but I thought that both Goku going into the drug-induced heat and Vegeta caving in happened too fast. But that only leaves me waiting even more anxiously for the next chapter!
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