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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From saiyajinxyz on February 18, 2008
    How awful for those two, especially for poor Goku being drugged like that. They are both dealing with it better than I would if I were in their shoes. Vegeta is so thoughtful and loving towards Goku, and even though he feels guilty for what they just participated in, he did his best to maintain Goku's dignity, while doing it in such a way that makes it plain Goku is more important than himself. Thanks for the great chapter.
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  • From Zofo on February 18, 2008
    Nice explanation for why they can't use the dragonballs. It makes sense and fits into the logic of the series. Now their friends have to find them the old fashioned way but will they be in time, and what experiments will they have to endure before that?

    So Vegeta wants to court Goku if/when they get free, hope your story covers that, that would be sweet.

    Loved the lemon. I know I wanted tail-play but I wasn't expecting that kind of tail-play. Hot! Still it calmed his heat. Wonder if it fooled the doctors since they were covered up? Can't wait for the aftermath and Goku's reaction to Vegeta.
    xxx
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  • From XxChiChixX on February 18, 2008
    I just... I just... I think you should know that I squealed. From the moment I read the word 'lemon' at the start of the chapter to every single line of the actual event...>>;; It was intense.

    But wow. That was so dramatic and.. geez! What I love about this story is that it's always something new and unexpected! I mean, the way you played out the morning scene..I never would have guessed the breakfast was drugged!

    Damn..>__>; Villa is such a pervert. BUT HE FAILED. He didn't anticipate that Vegeta would use his tail! >D And since the sex was blocked by the sheets, he'll never knoooooow!...........Okay, he will. When he finds out Goku isn't pregnant, he'll probably make him eat more food...>>;;; so then Goku and Vegeta'll just have to starve themselves....D: OH NOES. The rest of the Z-senshi better find them quick!

    Oh and..needless to say, the lemon was hot. -:: Clears throat. ::- Very... very hot.
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  • From Tyrana on February 16, 2008
    The flow of this chapter is just perfect. You are always so good at that but this time you're overdone yourself. Well, this time I cannot blame Dr.Villa. Honestly, who wouldn't want to kidnap these two sexy saiyans and lock them in a room full with cameras to spy how they make babies???? O.O
    Excellent work, and just so you know, you're one of the few authors on this place that have them absolutely in character ^.~
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  • From ANON - Laurel Runes on February 16, 2008
    ...They want us to breed. Well isn't that a kick in the pants. Haven't they been through enough. I want Dr. Villa to die a slow and painful death...or at least, maim him a lot! Please?!
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  • From miezekatzi on February 14, 2008
    Hey!
    It's good to read you again :-)
    I don't know what problems you had but I hope everything turned out good (well? ... my English sucks) for you at last.
    Although it was a bit short the chapter was really nice.
    At the end of the last chapter I feared a bit that everything would go downhill now and develop into a drama/psycho thriller but it seems (for now?) that Goku manages quite well and with Vegeta there he will have at least someone to hold on to.

    I'm curious if you will put some drama in it :-) You know, doctors torturing Goku so he can never trust again or something similar. Oh, I soooo hope Dr. Villa and all his minions will suffer, really really suffer.

    Poor Goku *pets Goku's tail*
    What was this with Vegeta being Goku's prince in shining armour? *grins*
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  • From Racine on February 14, 2008
    glad to see that you updated. And that things are seemingly going better now for you. Nice Chappy! Looking foreward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Broken on February 13, 2008
    Wow! This was a good chapter! Even after waiting for a couple months ^.^ I really hope you update again soon! I am also glad your life is straightening out again by what you said before ch 15. Good Work as alway!!
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  • From zombiebait86 on February 12, 2008
    Mwahahahaha, and another fic makes goku a bearer. **does a happy dance**
    J-chan
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  • From Zofo on February 12, 2008
    Ah that's the reason for the leaky tail, very handy, can't wait to see it in action again.

    Why do they want them to breed, do they want to experiment on the cubs too (shudders)? They're so sick, they remind me of old film footage of animal experiments in the fifties, no regard for life, driven by personal greed and glory, and the egotistical idea that humans have the right to do anything to other creatures as they think they are superior. If aliens ever did land you can bet there would still be those itching to experiment on them. Sorry, needed to vent that!

    I look forward to the next chapter getting me all fired up again, or all gooey if there's tail-play.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on February 12, 2008
    Thanks for the update. I wasn't really surprised with the ending. I had a feeling that was the reason Goku reacted to Vegeta the way he did. I hope my last review wasn't forceful with the updating thing. People have lives outside of writing fan fiction, so not updating is a fact of life. I hope you take it as a compliment that so many people are enjoying this tale that they want to read more. You are a terrific storyteller. I hope Bulma comes to the rescue soon. I don't want Goku or Vegeta to have to suffer unknown acts of horror under the care of Dr. Villa. And this time, if they escape, I hope either Goku or Vegeta give Dr. Villa what he deserves.
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  • From ANON - fef on February 12, 2008
    *dies* omfg. ive been checking this every day to see if there was a new one. THANK YOU FOR THE NEW ONE. even though it was realy just shortish and made me want MORE!
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  • From XxChiChixX on February 12, 2008
    VEGEGOKU BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD Could this story get any better?! COULD IT?

    I love the way you describe everything in this chapter--from the pain Goku felt as the bullets were removed, to the look on his face when Vegeta told him he could conceive! I missed this story so much! And I'm very glad you're feeling better! And Vegeta's such a smartie, coming up with that tracking chip plan! ^^ I hope Bulma finds them, though. >__>; Those doctors need to go away.

    -:: Nuzzles. ::- Definitely the best part of my night.
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  • From ANON - darkserapha on February 10, 2008
    Gah! I think I may have found your deviantart-account.. damn, I haven't laughed that hard in a long time! Hey, I've been trying to find contact information on you but there seems to be none - if you'd maybe like to chat at some point, email me at darkserapha@gmx.de
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  • From Broken on January 24, 2008
    I really do hope you plan on adding on soon! I think I came at the worst time. ch. 14 cliff hanger of death!! A great story so far! I hope you update soon!
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