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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide

From Squallsama on January 13, 2008
Oh yeah, forgot to mention Bulma. OMG I love her!!! I always hate Bulma in all the other fics, but you make her so awsome in this. I love it! She's exactly like I'd picture her. She's even better than the real thing. (if you could considder that real???) I love how she's so devious and sneaky and motherly and kind and protective. She's nto a raving bitch like Chichi. >.< WEll, she is, but only during the right times and it fits! *claps*
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From Squallsama on January 13, 2008
LeSigh... I love your fics so much; I swear, they're seriously like a drug. >.< It's crack--CRACK I TELL YOU! *crazed eyes* Can I marry you and just bypass all the horrid waiting and need for more?????

.... *glances around innocently*

I love this fic--if you couldn't tell. >.< Like, wow. This is by far the best you've written. I WANT MORE! *begs-BEGS* Pllleeeeeaaasssseee!!!! *gives you big watery, innocent puppy-dog eyes* Mah, I can't wait to find out what happens next! It makes me giddy when I'm reading it and I'm put in such a good mood, I was so happy--for like 2 whole days after reading this (which is like, amazing) and all I could think about was the possabilities of what you would do next with the boys.

My god I love it. I love how you make Goku the "damsel in distress" and Vegeta is such an arrogant dominating sexy bastard. Gawd. *fans self* I love how make Vegeta. He's just such a sexy... BEAST! *grrrowl* Damn, he could dominate me any day. And I can't wait for when he does it to Goku... yummmm. I get all tingly just thinking about it. *grins*

Buuu, write more soon, please????? *begs some more*

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From Bitsy on January 03, 2008
I look everyday to make sure if you have or haven't updated this story. When you don't I get sad, and when you do I get sad when I reach the end of each chapter. you write so well and with great imagination to how it could have gone. Please keep up the great work.
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From ANON - Chuquita on January 01, 2008
Uwaaah~ @_@ It's all getting so dangerous! O_o
Vegeta'll be able to save Goku though; he's got those super-strategic skills of his. :3
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From Racine on January 01, 2008
okay...i will have to put it this way. despite how tired i am i could not stop reading this. I read all 14 chapters in one sitting and i am highly looking forward to your next update. I like your style of writing and the story itself to me seems like it really could happen. So good job so far and once again i look forward to your next update.
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From ANON - saiyajinxyz on December 27, 2007
Ha, totally wonderful chapter! I wasn't expecting Vegeta to put on the ki restraints. It just shows how much he loves his dear Kakarotto. You have to update soon! You left it on such a cliffhanger and I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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From Zofo on December 26, 2007
Brillient chapter, I'm almost speechless. They've got Goku and Vegeta, oh no! What devious experiments have they planned for them? They were getting so close, and now they are forced together in unwelcome circumstances.

How am I going to sleep now until you update?

Thanks though for updating over Xmas, a merry one to you too.
xxx
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From ANON - J-chan on December 26, 2007
OMG! I will hunt him down and kill him! Shot guns arn't ment to hurt Kakarott they're ment to hunt zombies.
J-chan
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From ANON - MewMew2 on December 26, 2007
nice job! This chapter has defiantly hightened both the drama and suspense factors. thank you for updating this story so quickly!!!!!!!! till next time....
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From VChan on December 26, 2007
Oh and forget what that idiot Chloe said in his/her comment. Some people can be so shallow and opinionated. Why read something when all you have to say is something negative about it? I 'ought to stab him/her in the fucking eyes.
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From VChan on December 26, 2007
Interesting turn of events. I believe that out of all of your fanfictions I'm enjoying this the most. Though, my only qualm is that Kakarott is little more uke than I would have liked, we are all entitled to our preferences. It is easy to overlook this since the story is believeable and after what Kakarott has been through, it's easy to see how his personality may developed this way.

I like that Vegeta chose the option of going peacefully, ever the brilliant tactition. It isn't often that he's given to moments of chivalry but from his standpoint I can understand how he would want to share the experience with Kakarott. As long as the younger saiyan is within his sight he can begin plotting and planning his next move, working from the inside out on how to defeat this band of evil scientists.

Since Vegeta has been in worse scrapes than this, I trust that he has a plan in mind though he is prone to biting off more than he can chew. Being that he has no idea what the human race is truly capable of, he may have underestimated them.

I can only pray that Kakarott and Vegeta can endure this latest turn of event and continue to bring their budding 'relationship' into fruition.

I eagerly await the next installment.

On another note, In many ways this story reminds of my old fanfiction "Living A Lie" since I used the whole 'saiyan experiment' idea as well. If I had kept at it, I may have gone down a similar road that you are. Now that I am aware that your story exists I can only hope that I can alter Living A Lie enough so that it remains an original on its own. I almost want to rewrite the whole damn thing because I started writing it something like 6 years ago and it's STILL incomplete (and my writing style has changed dramatically over time). Alas, it's been so many years and my attention is not as focused on it as it should be. Perhaps reading "In Your Dreams" will inspire me to continue.
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From ANON - Naschkaetzchen on December 26, 2007
T_T WTF?! How could you?! How dare you O_o?!
I hope you start a new chapter soon ;_; I expect you writing like you have never befor XD. Rescue our precious Goku and Vegeta... I don't want to know bout the new study the docotr is planing... it frightens me >.
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From ANON - Chloe on December 26, 2007
I have to admit I've mostly been reading this because it's the only thing regulary updated, so I don't expect much. But still. Chapter 14 fails miserably. The characters are already OOC enough. I highly doubt Vegeta would agree to any such terms, and it's not like gathering dragonballs or other methods are that hard.

Very pathetic development... *sigh*
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From Tyrana on December 26, 2007
Oh I can see Vegeta smirking as he let go off Goku after the kiss, watching as his Kakarot stayed there on the floor all dazed, as you put it �looking at the ceiling�, and then leaving the room all proud of himself. And how very well you described all the reaction from Goku after the kiss, his doubts, his confusion, his questioning , you have captured so well those first stages of an incipient relationship, the uncertainty, and then the kiss in the kitchen was so wow! It�s a pity though that Bulma�s intromission got Goku so stressed, whenever they make advances in the right direction to building a solid affective relation a new obstacle is thrown in their way.
And now an unexpected and incredibly interesting twist, I�m excited with this new turn of events, more suspense, more drama, what will those evil scientists do now with both Saiyans? (Maybe I�m lucky enough and they first decide to study the sexual behavior and reproductive habits of Saiyans Bwahahaha! ) Now seriously, this story is getting better and better. Thanks for such fantastic Christmas present! (Now I should start reviewing �Try again�, maybe that way I�d get to coax you to update it, still my favorite, I can�t help it but a preggie/mommy Goku is impossible to beat Lmao! )

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From Tyrana on December 25, 2007
The hickey thing of chapter 12 was priceless, everything, from the sucking , to Goku's shyness to Trunks sudden interest to spend time with Goku and Vegeta jealousy. And the fall was so masterfully described and so it was Goku's and Vegeta's reaction after it! Aghh I felt so frustrated after reading chapter 12, how could Vegeta screw it all like that, he was doing it so well until that, but then the last part of chapter 13 was so fricking incredible; Goku coming to Vegeta's bed, the pillow battle and the kiss; it's interesting to see such playful side of Vegeta and that only Goku is able to put him in such mood, I only hope Vegeta won't do any other stupid thing like the falling thing. I'm looking forward to see how things progress aftter the kiss specially how Goku will be affected by it and his attitude and demeanor around Vegeta now that he knows how the prince feels BTW, merry Christmas!
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