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By : CrimsonTide
  • From 66Hiei08 on September 28, 2009
    This was a great story. I enjoyed every chapter. Sad to see it end, though.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on September 28, 2009
    OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE THATS THE ENDING! Its all been a DREAM! *cries* poor Goku, he is still in that lab and Vegeta, he finally has his family and its no longer their. Please, Please, Please, Please have an epilogue with them together (maybe with Goku pregnant). *gives puppy dog eyes* Pretty please. Sighs

    While the ending seemed so worng (and yet fairly right) the entire story was amazing! You are an incredibly talented writer and I could see you writing as a job! Fantastic job...I hope you continue writing and i can't wait to see what you come up with next. :)
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  • From Gnome on September 28, 2009
    Oh bravo! A brilliant ending. Perfectly bittersweet. It just goes to show what can happen when a dream story is done well. There are many out there who could learn a thing or two from this.

    Thank you very much for the adventure. It's been a rollercoaster.
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  • From DoggyYasha on September 28, 2009
    WHAT THE FRACK?! LAURYN!

    oh yes Lauryn.

    I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU DID THAT! i mean its kinda hard to be angry cause it fit so perfectly.

    BUT I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU AFTER A YEAR AND A HALF DO THIS TO YOUR READERS!

    no no i kid. You did a wonderful jump. Considering the last chapter made me cry, this more then made up for it. I still cant believe that you actually made Goku a dream. that they both dreamed it. I mean ..its totally better then wha happened in my head..but i make my stories end in angst this ended with a happy note...

    An im going to kill someone MWA AHAHAHAH note. XD which is always pleasant. O.O and cause im all sorts of demanding. and you are all sorts of good at writing

    I DEMAND a epilogue ...or something!!!! i mean..if its possible. but dont do it cause you have tdo it cause there is a reason.

    WHATEVER now im rambling..cause i really cant express in words hw much i loved this story!

    I LOVED IT SO MUCH! very good job and *-* write more stories......*whispers* make something involve Bardock XD
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  • From ANON - Alex on September 20, 2009
    Hey! You're writing is so great! I loved this show as a kid and you're writing is just perfect; you are so great at making conversational dialogues and adding bits of humor to each piece.

    I seriously think should consider writing as a part-time endeavor - as in, paid writing. I read in an earlier chapter note that you were going to Cosmo school, but should the opportunity for some sort of writing assignment present itself to you ... I wouldn't be afraid of it! You are so talented.

    I can't wait to finish. I just started reading yesterday and I'm on chapter 9. Keep writing! You're doing a fabulous job! ^_^
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  • From Ashray on September 16, 2009
    How mean!!!!!!
    And just as I thought that it is FINALLY, after all that angst and bad luck, the happy end!
    ANd now everything was just a dream?! Poor Vegeta.
    But at last it gives them a change to be together without torturing and hurting and scearing Goku so much..
    They will be together in the end, righ?
    RIGHT?

    You can't let them be alone without each other! (Well, you can, since you are the author, but I want to see a happy end, I like happy ends *whine*....)
    PLease update soon, I ca't wait to see how it end, it was a really great, interesting story!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on September 15, 2009
    That had better not have ACTUALLY been a dream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From 04netgurl on September 15, 2009
    WTF!! sorry for the language but whats with the major cliff hanger!? Grr. I can't wait for more i love this story.
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  • From ANON - ArizonaRed on September 15, 2009
    :gasps: No! No-no-no! You can't do that to them! Don't take Kakarrotto and Momoku away from Vegeta! Now it begs the question, just how much of it was a dream? Dear God, if it's the whole story, I'm honestly gonna cry....and I 'm not the type that cries often. Anxiously awaiting your next update.
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  • From Gnome on September 15, 2009
    Well I didn't expect that, but on the other hand whereas in most stories I'd groan if this happened, here it feels right. And I have an incling not everything is as it seems. It's great to read your work again.
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  • From ANON - Aiyoko on September 14, 2009
    Oh whats happening to goku? Was it all just a dream? Cant wait til the next and final chapter begins.
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  • From XxChiChixX on September 14, 2009
    You? Lauryn? ROURINU? LAURYN M. CRIMSONTIDE FIREFLY ROURINU HAD -TROUBLE- WRITING VEGEGOKU?

    -:: Thwaps you upside the head. ::- You and I need to go off and draw some canon shounen ai for a while, my dear. I think RP is getting too thick in your head. We should devote a whole month to just Canon DBZ! I've been meaning to suggest it for a while. I, myself, feel the urge to reopen my clubs and go back to drawing contest entries of sheer sexy eye candy. It's normal, I fall into it alllll the time. And it's probably what I'll do after I finish these IDs. x_x;

    -:: SWOONS over this chapter. ::- This was so hot, by the way. *-* I think I have to read it again. I've missed reading your style. Your Vegeta - you know I love your Vegeta. And your attention to detail always gets me. AND YOUR GOKU IS JUST THE CUTEST WIDDLE SWEETIE PIE EVER. ;.;

    I loved the part where he swung Goku over his shoulder. XDD Goku's classic "I'm not a girl!" got cut off.

    And when Vegeta was like "That must have been the best fuck of my life, because I'm clearly going blind." I cracked up so hard! XDD Maybe it's my immaturity but I really couldn't catch my breath.


    .....................but I swear.

    That last line.
    ...........

    IF YOU'RE ABOUT TO SAY. THAT THIS WHOLE ENTIRE STORY HAS BEEN A DREAM.........O.O

    I mean, yeah, it's called In Your Dreams BUT BUT BUT!!! THEY JUST GOT TO THE HAPPY PART!!!!! D: You wouldn't be THAT cruel, would you!!? Poor Vegeta. ...Poor....p- WHERE WOULD GOKU BE IF THIS WAS JUST A DREAM? O_O DON'T MAKE OUR GOKU DISAPPEAR!! >< NOOO! Now I'm all scared and paranoid and and and and -:: Clutches her many Goku plushies for security. ::-

    Update soon. Please.....PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on September 14, 2009
    Yea a new chapter! Oh, I hope this hasn't all been Vegeta's dream and he's really not with Goku....I'll be soooo sad :( Update soon please...(begins to freak out) the cliff hanger is killing me! I need to know what happens next!
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  • From 66Hiei08 on September 14, 2009
    I've got to say. I really have enjoyed this story. Thanks for updating and not giving up on it!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 14, 2009
    You're so mean
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