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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From Tyrana on December 26, 2007
    Oh I can see Vegeta smirking as he let go off Goku after the kiss, watching as his Kakarot stayed there on the floor all dazed, as you put it “looking at the ceiling”, and then leaving the room all proud of himself. And how very well you described all the reaction from Goku after the kiss, his doubts, his confusion, his questioning , you have captured so well those first stages of an incipient relationship, the uncertainty, and then the kiss in the kitchen was so wow! It’s a pity though that Bulma’s intromission got Goku so stressed, whenever they make advances in the right direction to building a solid affective relation a new obstacle is thrown in their way.
    And now an unexpected and incredibly interesting twist, I’m excited with this new turn of events, more suspense, more drama, what will those evil scientists do now with both Saiyans? (Maybe I’m lucky enough and they first decide to study the sexual behavior and reproductive habits of Saiyans Bwahahaha! ) Now seriously, this story is getting better and better. Thanks for such fantastic Christmas present! (Now I should start reviewing “Try again“, maybe that way I’d get to coax you to update it, still my favorite, I can’t help it but a preggie/mommy Goku is impossible to beat Lmao! )


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  • From Tyrana on December 25, 2007
    The hickey thing of chapter 12 was priceless, everything, from the sucking , to Goku's shyness to Trunks sudden interest to spend time with Goku and Vegeta jealousy. And the fall was so masterfully described and so it was Goku's and Vegeta's reaction after it! Aghh I felt so frustrated after reading chapter 12, how could Vegeta screw it all like that, he was doing it so well until that, but then the last part of chapter 13 was so fricking incredible; Goku coming to Vegeta's bed, the pillow battle and the kiss; it's interesting to see such playful side of Vegeta and that only Goku is able to put him in such mood, I only hope Vegeta won't do any other stupid thing like the falling thing. I'm looking forward to see how things progress aftter the kiss specially how Goku will be affected by it and his attitude and demeanor around Vegeta now that he knows how the prince feels BTW, merry Christmas!
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  • From ANON - foxxy jones on December 24, 2007
    congrats on your state board
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  • From miezekatzi on December 22, 2007
    Good job, Vegeta :-)
    Finally he's doing something right ^^
    Oh, and yes, definitely a great progress, a wonderful turn of events, indeed.
    I'm glad Goku liked the kiss, somehow I feared he would panic and things would be worse than before.
    You know, maybe traumatic events due to Dr. Dumbass or similar ... but luckily everything went fine and now ...
    .... now the fun can begin (hopefully) ... if there's not a mayor drawback because of another Vegeta-induced incident ^^

    PS: forgive me my grammar mistakes :-)
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  • From solitare1 on December 21, 2007
    I got to hand it to Vegeta, He has learned to not be so aggressive for romance sake. Bravo my Prince!
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  • From Zofo on December 21, 2007
    Yeah, Goku can fly and use ki again. I was worried he wasn't making much progress but it seems revenge on Vegeta was just the incentive he needed. Loved that. The pillow fight was cute and the kiss even better, glad Vegeta's still taking it slowly, even though patience is not his strong point.
    xxx
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  • From LittleMustardSeed on December 21, 2007
    FINALLY!!!
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  • From ANON - fef on December 21, 2007
    so good! must have more! vegeta is was being soo patient. its good that he made a small step forward.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on December 20, 2007
    I always reading about the first kiss. It's probably a little awkward for Goku, being kissed like that by his former rival, but at the same time, it's always nice to realize that you are loved. Love this story and I'm looking forward to the next update.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on December 20, 2007
    Yes, Vegeta definitely needs to work on the wooing skills. Nice chapter.
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 20, 2007
    Thanks for updating again so soon. Cosmo, that's such a cute name! Well, I hope that he continuess to bring you joy and happiness (I know that my kitten who's currently purring on my lap as I'm typing thsi and swiping at my hands is). Till next time.,....
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 18, 2007
    O_o ya Vegeta needs a smack in the head for that.
    J-chan
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  • From Zofo on December 17, 2007
    I'll second what Simone said. What Are You Doing Vegeta!!! That's no way to court Goku. He'll have to do some major sucking up to get back in his good books now, after doing so well with his sneaky hickey.

    Try tiring your puppy out and write when he sleeps. My brother's puppy gets tired quickly if you give him the round around. Then we get an hour of peace.

    Loving your work.
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Foxxy Jones on December 16, 2007
    Greatchapter plaese keep it up it is helping me through midterms.
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  • From miezekatzi on December 16, 2007
    Nooo .... *wipes tears* ... *sniff* ... just how could you do that?
    Poor Goku baby having such a shock and everything... bad Vegeta *slaps Vegeta over the head*
    What are you doing, boy!! You're never going to win Goku like that!
    You should be his prince in shining armour, not ... that! Just HOW COULD YOU?!!
    Now go and apologize!! No, don't you look at me like that. It's not working. Go and apologize RIGHT AWAY!!
    You know it might not be too late ... yet. But it'll need a lot of courting ... you know, flowers, chocolate, a nice meal and nice music ... campfire in the wild ... you know, the full program.

    Now go and HIT IT UP! Let us be proud of you!! You can do it, Vegeta!


    Well .... I hope this little speech helped a bit ... you know ... men!!! They just seem to miss an important gene, or chromosome or something ...
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