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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From Tyrana on December 09, 2007
    CHAPTER EIGHT:

    (Aghhh sorry for skipping so many reviews, my internet keeps on being a pain in the ass)

    Yeah, Vegeta had the guts to admit to himself that he wants Goku. That’s Vegeta, facing and admitting the naked truth without qualms.

    I liked all the insight you gave on this chapter about Goku’s lack of real affection, I’m thrilled with the idea that he will get to experience what love really means for the first time with the prince. And it was very touching all the scene of Goku’s nightmare, how Vegeta saw some of the torments Goku had experienced for years, that would help him to understand better the other man and strengthen their future relationship; Goku’s panic at what Vegeta could have witnessed (That has me totally intrigued O.o what kind of things that evil Doctor did to poor Goku?? ), that uncharacteristic tenderness of Vegeta and of course the way Goku bribed Vegeta into stay and keeping on comforting him with his caresses, lovely.

    Hehe, well about the Trunks thing I just thought it could be funny to see father and son as rivals fighting over Goku, it would be entertaining to see Vegeta looking for advice to properly court Goku, and it would be also interesting to see Goku suddenly being the object of romantic interest of two men when he never before in his life had received such attention, I would like to see his reaction, maybe he would be overwhelmed and confused and incapable to choose, at least in the beginning, especially if he isn’t conscious that one of his suitors are just lusting for him while the other feels true love. Lol , just fantasies of mine, you can just ignore them.


    CHAPTER NINE:

    Oh poor Goku, it seems that still he must go through a lot of shit. Chichi was so unfair, after all she has already move on and has the kind of husband he always wanted, she had no right to be so mean. But at least it serves for Goku to start realizing some things about himself, his terror to disappoint his prince . And that training session only got things worse, poor Goku. Those misunderstandings between the two saiyans are heartbreaking. You’re a master when it comes to create tension and drama , but you will have to make it up great time lol The guys deserve a very generous reward for everything you are doing with them :P



    CHAPTER TEN:

    Impressive! You’ve outdone yourself. This was so intense, and it was only a hug. My blood pressure right now is over superhuman levels. I’m just licking my lips waiting for the oncoming lemons (Do take note that I made use of the plural, please XD )

    Poor Goku, though. Finally he got to savor the delight of being with another man in an intimate way just to start feeling guilty and dirty. Poor, poor thing. I hope he gets over all those issues soon. Vegeta should take notice that they have a serious problem of communication that goes beyond Goku’s incapacity of speaking and he should work on that too (But without forgetting the ‘so hot comforting moments’ :D) It’s heart-wrenching to see all the misunderstandings between them, maybe Vegeta gets to figure out that he probably should confess openly his feelings for Goku but I understand his dilemma that Goku, in his delicate state of mind would freak out or something, and besides gentleness isn’t Vegeta’s forte, I have to give him credit though for his efforts to try to help Goku and how he‘s controlling his own urges in favor to make things better for the other saiyan.
    And now another mystery, with this thing of the lubrication, lol I would like to have the video tapes of all that happened during all those years in Villa’s lab I need to knowit, desperately, suspense is killing me lol I’m a fan of X-files so your story gets me totally hook lmao

    BTW, great to know that everything is OK with you ahaha but you’re a perfect specimen for Dr. Villa, don’t let him know you have strange things living within you and take care with those UIL (Unidentified inner lumps) lmao who knows if those are some kind of extraterrestrial form of life that has taken your body for hostage. Just in case, don’t feed them after midnight, don’t take them for a walk under the full moon and don’t ever let them watch ’Mars attacks’, we don’t need to give them ideas….OMG we’re doomed lol Sorry I’m again babbling too much nonsense

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  • From Zofo on December 09, 2007
    Awww Goku smells like Vegeta's favorite food, that was so sweet. Great chapter. Thought they were going to do it this time but you snatched it away at the end, you tease!

    Glad your scan results were ok.
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Susie Q on December 08, 2007
    Yay Vegeta! This is a great chapter (10). Very gentle but with a little spice thrown in.
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  • From ultistarmon on December 08, 2007
    I wonder if Vegeta is going to have to give an infamous birds and bees talk to Goku? One thing I do want cleared up is the power level issue. When a Saiyan suffers a near death experience, then they grow stronger. If that's true and Goku suffered all sorts of abuse in that lab, then why isn't he stronger than he is? Hope to see more of this great story soon! :)
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  • From XxChiChixX on December 08, 2007
    Those seven pages were so hot....I swear, I could read them over and over again.

    But woah. Woah. WOAH. Did Goku just ...... out of his tail!? O_o;;; What the heck happened in that lab!? I WANT TO KNOW! ..And then I want Vegeta to do Goku. -:: Cough. ::- Seriously, I was..they were so close just now. Vegeta's waist came into contact with the butt. It happened. They have to do it now!


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  • From ANON - Xero Sky on December 08, 2007
    Best.
    Hug.
    Ever.
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  • From XxChiChixX on December 07, 2007
    Aww, thanks for the plug, hon! x3

    Another amazing chappie! Great job!

    Goku and ChiChi had to run into each other eventually. = Poor Goku and his bruises.

    I love how you're making Vegeta and Goku so misguided. It's such great drama. But at least now we know that Goku's developing feelings for his Ouji~ :D

    The training session was really well written. I really enjoy reading about Goku..like..even though he's not speaking, he's still saying so much.

    Whee, more more!
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  • From Zofo on December 06, 2007
    Such missed signals and misunderstandings, I'm loving it. Is that a glimmer of desire sparking in Goku? Oh I do hope so.
    Loved the pictures you linked to so have commented on them there.

    Glad you are ok and hope the scan results are alright.
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Simone on December 06, 2007
    Two great chapters... and thanks for answering my questions about how you just can write so fast ^^

    Ah, and just the confusion I like :-) Misinterpretations everywhere you look ... ^^
    And poor Goku being a 'touch-o-phobic'. I hope Vegeta can mend that.
    But I'm faithful ... they can do it. They're Saiyans :-)

    Also from my side good look for the results of your, erm, I don't know the word ... doctor-visit-thingy ... thing ... you know *g*
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  • From ultistarmon on December 04, 2007
    I love your story! Why do you have to go in for a CAT scan? When are we going to see any of the demi-saiyans?
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  • From Zofo on December 04, 2007
    What did those nasty scientists do to poor Goku? Looks like Vegeta's got his work cut out for him, but Goku pulling him back and purring was a hopeful sign, and soooo cute!

    Not sure about Trunks getting involved, but as long as Vegeta and Goku get together in the end, I don't really mind.

    I hope you are alright and everything goes ok with the scan. Update when you can.
    xxx
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 04, 2007
    **is a happy panda**
    J-chan
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  • From Dramastarelf on December 04, 2007
    wow when they did my CAT they just had to give me shot of the stuff. Sorry you have to go though that. I really like your story I just read the whole thing. than you for writing it.
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  • From ANON - Susie Q on December 03, 2007
    Bulma is so wise. Good luck with your scan!!
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  • From Zarahai on December 03, 2007
    watch out dont let them make you guzzle down acid....maybe your story is based on fact...O.O NOOOOOOOO BEWARE THE SCIENTISTS!!!!! RUN! RUN NOW!
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