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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide

From XxChiChixX on December 03, 2007
Awe, are you okay?! What is the catscan for? :<

This chapter was really cute. And informative. It really developed the plot well but MY GOSH you are really making me lose it about this secret sexual issue Goku has! I mean, you stopped RIGHT THERE!

That image of Vegeta snapping out of his trance to find Goku staring right at him sort of creped me out. XD I'd be startled to see that. And I laughed when Vegeta just..started petting Goku. It's such a weird, gentle thing for him to do. XD

Your story about how Goku doesn't like contact is something else I enjoyed. I love how you make so many references from Dragonball/Z in this. :D

I hope you don't feel too sick. D: I will be patient for the next update.
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From miezekatzi on December 03, 2007
Wow, two whole chapters since I last visited ... honestly, just HOW do you do that? ^^
But who am I to complain *g* ... they were just great.
Oh, and how I love jealous Vegeta ... Yamcha better takes his hands off Goku ^^

It's getting hot ^^ Did I mention that I love you? Well, I do *g*

Oh, and how I'm looking forward to the point, when Vegeta will take Goku to Dende.
First because of the healing and all, but second, ooohhhhhhh, I guess Vegeta has to carry Goku *ahem* ... *grins like a maniac* ... well, ermmmm, yes. ^^

Vegeta's just sooo cool as Goku's prince in shining armour. The role really suits him. 'Take your hands off him if you want to keep them.' ... you're just the best *smiles*
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From solitare1 on December 03, 2007
Get him Vegeta!!! This is soo good!
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From zombiebait86 on December 03, 2007
man I never win at those games>.
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From ultistarmon on December 02, 2007
Haha, poor Yamcha! I may not be his greatest fan in the world, but even he deserves better then being set up by Bulma like that. She should have let him in on the plan. Can't wait to see what perverted fantasy Vegeta's mind comes up with while he's dreaming.
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From Tyrana on December 02, 2007
Humph, I get distracted just for one day and see what happens, you have two new chapters up. O.o Sorry for skipping one review, blame my exams, they are looming, OMFG so near, just to kick my ass, bleh I just stole a little while from my studying time only because of your wonderful story XD

First, thanks for letting us know that Goku�s lowers are intact, it�s quite the relief ^.^ So his girlie voice is just because he hasn�t changed voice yet, poor baby, he�s too young lol (well, I�m not that familiar with his squeaking voice, I never heard the Japanese dub and though I�ve heard a little of the USA dub, here in my country the VA who plays Goku-well, actually there were 3 different VA for Goku along the whole DBZ series- ^^;; but all of them gave him a �manly� voice, ironically here Vegeta has a much softer voice than the American Vegeta, bleh Ok sorry for so much digressing ^^;; )

Oh the drama of the first half of chapter 6!! I like how you manage to include drama and tension along with humorous scenes through the whole story, you make it so believable, kudos! It was heart-wrenching to see how Goku lost his voice again, no wonder he felt so bad, it�s rare though to see him so defeated, but totally understandable, after all he�s been through. And it was wonderful to see how Vegeta cares for his Kakarot, haha that was so predictable, to go to vent his anger by trying to kick Dende�s ass, that was absolutely Vegeta.

Aghhh Yamcha, I knew he was going to try to get in the way. Lol you captured so perfectly how pathetic he is, at his old age and still with those airs of Playboy with the sunglasses and such :P He deserved the �your-hot-son� thing *snickers* Oh How I wish that Vegeta would have been there to hear it, that would have been just perfect, or better maybe Goku can tell him later and have a good laugh of it ;)

Perfect end to the chapter: Vegeta�s jealousy!! XDDDD

Now, to chapter seven: OMG, it�s official, I�m totally in love with chapter seven!!!

Mostly because the spying thing and Vegeta�s jealousy, lol It�s delicious, for once to see Vegeta chasing and lusting after Goku (I just hate it when people have Goku drooling after Vegeta while the prince remains oblivious, but people keep on doing that, when it�s just natural the other way around, Goku is the object of desire of everyone, period! )

Everything in that chapter was perfect; Vegeta figuring out the real motives of his interest for Goku, his jealousy, his resolve to stalk the �couple� , Yamcha�s annoyance Hehe finally Vegeta and Goku had their first date, an unconventional and unexpected one, but thei fist date after all, even if it was a threesome lmao
Yamcha isn�t a rival though I love his embarrassment when he had to admit he was incapable to get the stuffed animal for Goku lol how low he had fallen :D I wonder how it would be to have a more remarkable ival, like Trunks, for instance: Vegeta would have a hard time to get his Goku, it would be rather entertaining (Though I just like the VegetaxGoku pairing, from time to time I like to entertain the thought of a perverted Trunks chasing after Goku, to Vegeta�s dismay but without any success of course, lol. *slaps myself* sorry, I�m digressing again ^^;; )

It was perfect to see Vegeta boasting and letting flare his ego. But even better the ice-cream thing, oh my the Goku�s swirling-tongue�I bet Vegeta will have later wet dreams about it :D And his arousal just because Goku touched his thighs lol
Another thing was the way Vegeta just packed all Goku�s stuff in his car, just like saying: I�m the alpha here, the only and rightful owner of Kakarot so get your useless ass out of here, Yamcha lol

Ohhh When you mentioned about Vegeta�s tail fluffing because Goku�s actions, I was thinking about the sudden attraction of Goku for fluffy soft things and I just could but entertain the thought of Goku suddenly getting addicted to touch Vegeta�s tail , I bet Vegeta wouldn�t mind, neh? ^_~

Marvelous work , as usual, can�t wait for more!!

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From ANON - MewMew2 on December 02, 2007
Thank you for updating so soon. I was having a kinda crappy day w/ an extra heaping of work, and this helped cheer me up. Thanks again!
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From XxChiChixX on December 02, 2007
Aww! I love the whole "Vegeta winning prizes for Goku" thing! :D What a great way to end the date--tossing Yamcha aside like that! Another great chapter! x3 I'm a very happy girl.
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From Zarahai on December 02, 2007
I loves your story! please continue!
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From Zofo on December 02, 2007
So Vegeta really does have the hots for Goku, but what does Goku think?
You're right, things are hotting up and I can't wait, though you update so often I think I love you.

Now where can I sign up to learn that Crazy Monkey Style fighting?
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From Zofo on December 02, 2007
Oh Vegeta is sooo jealous that Yamcha is with his Kakarrot (though thankfully not carnally yet), but would Yamcha swing for Goku? I hope not.
I love a possessive Vegeta that is almost clueless to his own desires.

Poor silent Goku again, but it was so sweet that Vegeta tried to help.

This is such a wonderful story, eagerly awaiting more.
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From ultistarmon on December 01, 2007
Lol, I didn't know Goku could drive a stick shift either. Then again, at the end credits of the movie Lord Slug he's in the driver's seat of what appears to be a stick shift, so I guess he can drive one. The "they called me old" line was truly hilarious. I like the fact that Yamcha doesn't think its a date but Vegeta does. Hope to see more of this great story soon.
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From solitare1 on December 01, 2007
OMG!!! This is sooo entertaining! I am getting a real kick out of how Bulma is making Vegeta jealous.
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From ANON - Susie Q on December 01, 2007
Thanks for updating so fast. Poor Vegeta. (Can you tell who my favorite character is?) He's just trying to help and keeps getting snubbed. You're making me crazy but it's fun.
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From XxChiChixX on December 01, 2007
You took it away. You took it away, only after calling him Bura. :< I think I just lost my pupp-- I don't like dogs. So we're changing it to birdie! Oh god. I'll cry.

Stupid Dende. Making things complicated. ..I'm surprised Piccolo didn't follow Vegeta back to see Goku. He's usually quite protective of Goku and Gohan, himself.

Goku has a new sexy outfit. You know I'm going to draw it. XD! He's like a little fashion show. I enjoyed the car scene. It was so funny and cute when Goku was called Yamcha's son. And then when Goku grabbed the wheel from Yamcha and later whacked him upside the head..his little fits are adorable!

Vegeta better kill Yamcha soon, though. I don't want to draw that creepy old man again. ....... >>;;; Get Broly in here, lol. XD Just kidding~~ ... I typed kissing at first.

Thank you for clarifying that Goku has not been mutilated below the waist line. XD I can rest easy now. Haha

Oh, and by the way, I'm proud of myself. :D My pictures have been making people read your story and they love it as much as I do! ^^ You deserve it soo much!

Next chapter, please! X3

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