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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide

From Tyrana on December 01, 2007
Hehe the bored Vegeta is a fabulous idea.. What a better remedy against boredom than a pet? It seems that Vegeta got one for himself ;) though his new pet doesn�t seem easy to tame, he will have to work hard�this is so promising!!
And even better: A jealous Vegeta. I love it when he�s all over-possessive and over-protective with his Kakarot :D
Yes, Vegeta should go and take what he wants�he just has to figure out what he wants, neh? Though I�m pretty sure that he�s starting to get the hints. I love how you�re giving a glimpse of what�s going on with Vegeta, I would like to see also what�s inside Goku, how he�s feeling about Vegeta, uggh I�m not sure if you know what I mean, because I am not able to explain it better. ^^;;

Goku is so determined and eager to recover his energy and strength, so typical of him! And now that the prince has volunteered (or rather, imposed himself ) to train him it�s going to be really entertaining.

Ok now I�m worried and stressed, that thing of Goku�s fear to show his privates along with Vegeta�s comment that he sounds like a girl O.o..he could not possibly have been castrated D: an eunuch Goku is sooo sad, please, tell me his jewels have not been severed *crawls toward Goku and makes the pat-pat to check if everything down there is ok�Vegeta pops out of nowhere, growling like a beast and ready to throw his final flash attack� Ahhhh �I better run ^^, � O.o damn, I won�t get any sleep until you clarify that.

I simply adore that little exchange between them� �I am going to tell Bulma that you�re picking on me� That was priceless, I did not know that Goku could be so devious, XD (Goku recovering his voice was totally unexpected, but the thing of having Dende augmenting the power of the senzu bean was really clever. I love all your ideas.

(Thanks for reviewing my fic, still thinking that your nice compliments were totally undeserved but incredibly motivating so I really appreciate it ^__^ )

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From miezekatzi on December 01, 2007
That's just great!! You restored Goku's voice *dances around happily*

And jealous Vegeta was just soooooo cute! All protective *g* 'Don't touch his tail!' ... oh, I just loved it.
I want mooooore, mooooooooore .... I think I'm getting addicted to this story.
You really do a great job ... I don't know how you do it, but it's just great how often you have a new chapter ready (by the way I didn't think this one was short ^^).

Hoping you update soon ^^ *cheers on your muses hoping to get a lemon soon*
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From ANON - PurinsuArashi on December 01, 2007
LMAO-OMFG!

~Falls over laughing... Dies!~

Can't Breathe!

~Gasp!~

Gah!

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Oh shit!

"Kakarotto, wait!!"
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Thankyou!

Thats was the cure for a very bad few months!

Thankyou!!

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From ultistarmon on December 01, 2007
I love it when Yamcha's Bi-ness shows up! Will there be a battle for Goku's affections? I'm glad you posted what you could, cause it sure as heck made my day! Hope to see more of this great stuff soon.
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From XxChiChixX on November 30, 2007
-:: Coos and snuggles up to you. ::- Yay for updates~

Goku can talk again! :D And he's being a bratty teen--oh noes. =x He seemed so sweet when he couldnt talk. XD Must be the hormones...?

I'm excited to see how you're going to have Goku show Bulma he can talk. Will he just run down and scream about Vegeta or will be playful about it? Awwwwwwwww...he sounds like a girl. x) That's not that much different than usual, lol.

I think you did a great job with the gym scene. I love how you described Goku's fatigue; his spasming muscles and pale skin, drenched with sweat. :3 Soooohott.

I enjoy how people undress Goku in this chapter. >>; In the beginning, with Bulma taking off his shoes ... and then who knows what else she took off after Vegeta left..and then Vegeta in the spa. XD

I'm reaaallly getting interested in this whole "no touchie my privates!" issue Goku's having! What's the matter? What did the Dr. do!? .....H-he didn't cut it off did he? >_____>..............-:: Shakes you. ::- I wanna know!!!

Now that Goku can talk, it means him and Vegeta can have better boding time. To get closer. And make out. ..Anddoit. :D :D :D W00t, progress!

Personally, though, I think I would have waited a little longer before having Goku speak again. I love the scene, it's so cute and humorous, but it's only been a couple days since Goku came home. I thought he'd be mute for a little while longer, so this chapter was a big surprise for me. x]

The pillow scene was incredible, too. Vegeta and Goku better make love on those pillows. Just think about how happy they would be......>>;;;; ohhh man.

Vegeta's hostility toward Yamcha in the beginning was so amusing! I loved it. He gets jealous so easily--and him and Goku aren't even together yet! I adored how Vegeta carried Goku up to bed, too. :D HEE. SO CUTE. I think that's what I'm going to doodle for this chapter.

Thank you for updating before you went out to play. Lol. Waiting for more!!
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From inuyasha7885 on November 30, 2007
I really like this story so far-I'm glad u restored Goku's voice and he is really funny as a "teenage brat"!! I am looking forward to some special lemony "training" sessions in the future!!!
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From miezekatzi on November 30, 2007
Ooh, please let it be something cruel for Dr. Villa. Something that hurts ... and hurts ... and hurts ... *grins*

I wonder if Dende can heal Goku ... would be really cool. I think I would freak out if I couldn't talk any more.

Oh, and pleeeaaaaassse do Vegeta/Goku ... not Yamcha/Goku ... no, definitely not Yamcha ^^ The two Saiyajins just belong together ...

And I'm really looking forward to see Goku train again ... so he can kick the ass of Dr. Villa *gg*

Hope you'll update soon ^^
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From Tyrana on November 30, 2007
I am impressed with the way you explain everything, like the voice thing, it's evident that you put a lot of work and thought on it, really awsome. The nightmare scene is my favorite, Vegeta was unusually understanding! I just hope Yamcha won't be molesting Goku or getting in the way Ok that would add to the drama but bad, bad Yamcha, Goku is not for you lol.
This is so incredible that I now feel so inadequated to post my new story umph, it looks so bad compared with this, really if my beta would not have passed the last night without any sleep just working on it I seriously doubt I would post it aghh Well, anyway, thanks again for so much goodness ^.^
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From solitare1 on November 29, 2007
AWWWWW! Thats sooo kawaii! Poor Goku but hes a bad man!(lol)
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From zombiebait86 on November 29, 2007
Woot! **hops around**can't wait to read the rest!
J-chan
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From XxChiChixX on November 29, 2007
Ooo, a lot of fun stuff happened in this chapter! I like how you went from a relaxed mood, to a more dramatic/intense and then back to relaxed/causal/fun. :D

The shopping was terrific. And I ADORE the idea of Goku wearing the BADMAN shirt! X3 "You look better in pink than Vegeta does!"...Oh Bulma, if only more people had your taste!

I giggled when she held up the cloud and airplane shirt to Goku. But I wonder what outfits Goku actually picked out, beside the gis.

The pillow thing was amusing. And yeah, you know I got a kick out of Goku having to be piggybacked by Yamcha. SO CUTE. SO FREAKING BLEEPING CUTE!

The nightmare scene was another part I enjoyed. Well, I enjoyed the entire chapter but I really liked that scene. You did a phenomenal job at describing Goku's body language during the nightmare and how Goku reacted to the wound, quickly running to get a cloth to tend it was so sweet!

I love your ideas. How you explained how Goku lost his voice..it's so upseting to read but I really think you have some very clever ideas! Your reasoning behind why Goku couldnt eat as much was really interesting too! And believable . ALLOFTHISISSOBELIEVABLEILOVEYOOOUU! ..

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It's 3:08am.

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Expect doodles. I can't hold myself back. My hand is reaching for the Wacom Pen----OH YEAH! Congratulations! The Bamboo thing..that's a drawing tablet, right? :D I wanna see your doodles! ...Oh god I need to go to bed. XD

LOVE YOU!
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From ANON - Webtester01 on November 29, 2007
Interesting story. Keep it up. I just discovered it. :)

I wonder why Bulma didn't bet a wheelchair for Goku, since they were going to the mall and Goku energy was low. ;)

People are geniuses in different ways.
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From Zofo on November 28, 2007
Oh what a juicy plot. Poor Goku always getting the rough end of the deal. Will Vegeta help him regain his power or just lord it over him? Methinks he wants Goku at full strength, in more ways than one (winks).

Goku kicking Vegeta's butt whilst being weak as a kitten - priceless! I love how you always mix humour into your stories, I always find myself laughing out loud.

Can't believe I missed this story starting by not checking the site for a few days. I will have to check everyday now to see if you have updated.
xxx
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From solitare1 on November 27, 2007
That was funny!!! You better run!!LOL LOL OMG I'm still laughing...Keep up the good work...LOL
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From Tyrana on November 27, 2007
Rawr! This was hilarious. I love the way you have them interacting, Vegeta and Goku I mean lol The last sentence from Vegeta "you better run!" just had me on the floor lmao How I'm loving this story, please more. Oh that thing of Goku's reluctance to show his privates have me thinking the most devious things, if you don't explain that soon I'm going to go crazy, really. Sorry for the rushed review anyway. I should have left to college almost an hour ago but I came upon your new update and I just could not wait till this evening I suppose I will be skipping my first class of the afternoon, you are a very bad influence. Thanks again for such wonderful story ^.^
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