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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide

From ANON - Susie Q on November 26, 2007
There you go again. I LOVE Vegeta in this chapter (3). The humor between Goku and Vegeta rings true.
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From XxChiChixX on November 26, 2007
That was fantastic! When I saw that you updated again I was overly thrilled! XD If you keep updating like this, I'll be the happiest girl in the world. This story has been honestly in my head all day. Lol.

And don't worry, I caught on to the humor. That scene with Vegeta calling Nimbus for Goku was hilarious! XD And the fact that Goku actually flipped him off was even funnier. But I think that in all, this chapter was downright adorable. It's so nice to see the interaction between Vegeta and Goku. I love how Vegeta is able to tell what Goku is telling him so easily. It's cuute..they have a bond. Hehe

But wow...weaker than Bulma. >>; Goku's weaker than EVERYBODY now, huh. Yamcha..Tien..Krillin....Oh, Krillin's going to have fun with this. >>; I think Goku lucked out by ChiChi moving on, though..because otherwise..he'd be married to the strongest woman on Ea-..Strongest HUMAN woman, atleast. And those frying pans would probably really hurt..and then he'd be the one flying through the walls. O:

I enjoy imagining Goku doing all of his expressions and hand gestures. The idea of him "Shoo, shoo"ing Vegeta makes me giggle. HE'S SO CUTE! x3

Ahhh, Yes. Update soon! This story is getting better and better! :D

Goku in Vegeta's clothing = YUMMY. XD
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From ANON - Foxxy Jones on November 26, 2007
Nice story so far keep up the great work!
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From solitare1 on November 26, 2007
I am soooo glad you started another story...I do so love your writing. This story is starting to get good. How dare they touch Goku!!! Looking forward to more.
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From ANON - Susie Q on November 25, 2007
Wow. Cool. I love when Vegeta's the hero. It's so rare. Thanks for this chapter. Can't wait for the next!
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From Tyrana on November 25, 2007
Oh my! Another one! Ahhh, damn! I�m so jealous, you do it so good and so fast! How can you? I command you to tell me or else, I will have to kidnap you and call that Doctor Villa to make a dissection of your brains in order to get to know your secret. Give me his number, please? Lmao

Oh and thanks so much for the update of �try again� *bows to you* I should make you a monument or a statue or something but I am too lazy (where the heck are the dragon balls when are really needed ? :D ) It was great, I don�t know which chapter made me laugh harder, the one where Vegeta learns about Goku being pregnant or this last one. (I wish I would have been there to record all those juicy things Goku revealed about their sexual life ^_~

About this one: You�re so clever; great job with the explanation as to how it was possible for Goku to come back home earlier instead of staying with Shen-long for one hundred years. and also it�s the perfect excuse now for an interesting relationship between Vegeta and Goku.. This is so promising, a so young Goku (18 years old, man now Vegeta is definitively a cradle robber, yum,) Vegeta will have to train him and teach him everything again, I bet he will enjoy it �if Goku does not make him go crazy ^^;
And talking about clever, Goku is so clever too yay, I knew he had it in him, the frog what the proof, but people tend to forget that ;)
I cannot help but have this bad feeling�this Doctor Villa , with his lack of scruples, I bet he has not told everything to Bulma, he doesn�t look the altruist type so I bet he used him for some other things and not only to cure diseases. I wonder how terrible and despicable things he possibly did using Goku as his lab rat, maybe you have some surprise hidden ?
Oh there is so much suspense!!! I was wondering, this story seems a little more dramatic than most of yours, so much tension. Will you keep that tone throughout the whole story? I was just debating whether it would be better that way or if you plan to give some touches of your humor (And I love your sense of humor) when Vegeta and Goku start to interact.
All in all, my interest on this story is going in crescendo and I�m certain you will keep on surprising me with every new chapter. Excellent, as always. ;)
Oh I almost forgot: Transfixed Vegeta!!! XD That was a great one, you should make a picture showing him like that lol

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From ultistarmon on November 25, 2007
Yay, you updated!! Of course Goku can defend himself when he has to. I hope Bulma lets Vegeta put the doctor through the ringer so she can find out what was done to Goku. Trunks and Goten could go raid the lab and bring back the data. I love this story, and your reason for Goku's lack of power is quite believable. Bulma's a crafty one and Goku's pretty smart too. Please update again soon.
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From miezekatzi on November 25, 2007
Oh, great chapter. But a cliffhanger non the less :)
I knew Vegeta would save the situation ... I really counted on him *hugs Veggie*
Bulma was great, too.
I hope Goku will get better - I'm really curious how you will develop the story.
I also hope that a Senzu bean will restore Goku's voice and that he can soon start to work on his strength.
Poor Goku (still), being weak and helpless and all *has to sniff yet again* *sniff*

Thanks for the quick update! You are the best :)
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From XxChiChixX on November 25, 2007
Holy fu-- I love this story. It's official! You're, honestly, currently one of my most favorite authors, Firefly! -:: Clings. ::- This story is just SO interesting and I want to read more and more and more!

I really, oddly enough, enjoy how Goku is dumb( the unable to speak kind.. >>; ). It really turns the story in a new angle and makes me wonder how they're not only going to get him able to speak again..but cope with his muteness until then. Vegeta has a such a low tolerance for patience, so I can't see him waiting for Goku to write down everything he needs to say.

Of course....if they have seeeeeeeeeeex....:] they'll be able to talk mentally, right?

I do not like Villa. >:[

Feed more more! More, more, more, more! -:: Reaches out greedily. ::- :D
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From zombiebait86 on November 24, 2007
so a fangirl, man I dread to see what happens when the scientist relieze she knows him....unless they already do....RUN BULMA RUN AND GET THE PRINCE!
J-chan

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From ultistarmon on November 24, 2007
Oooo, write more, write more!!!! Pretty, pretty please!!! This is gonna be good. Bad, bad scientist. They aren't going to let Bulma go after this, since she knows who their "subject" is. Can't wait to see Vegeta go hunting!!!
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From Tyrana on November 24, 2007
A new story from you, I�m thrilled :D The plot seems really interesting. I�ve noticed that it has become a constant in your fics, at least in most of them, to have Goku as the poor �damsel� in distress (I only forgive your sadist urges to torture him because you�re a terrific writer, lmao just kidding) and Vegeta as his knight in bright armor XD I must say I love it, I�ve always thought that Vegeta�s dream was to become Goku�s savior. It is sorta tender and sweet to see the cranky prince as the protector of the Earth�s savior , as if nobody else but him would care about Goku (sorry for the sentimental mood lol but it�s so difficult to find a good story portraying them exactly the way I�ve always imagined them ^.^ ) Don�t forget �Try again� please. I know I suck at reviewing, but it�s very difficult to me to find time to read anyway I�m still re-reading your other fics, not only because I enjoy them so much, but also because I want to learn from you, you�re first class. Now you only have to tell me how to do it to give the perfect amount of details to make the story so fluent at the same time that interesting, because I get so lost into details, I just don�t know how to do it.
Thanks for another good reading :D.

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From miezekatzi on November 24, 2007
Good start!
Poor Goku! I really hope Bulma can help him and take him home.
Oh, hopefully Goku is not too traumatized (is this a word? - sorry, no native speaker :-) and Vegeta is able to help him, cuddle him and make him feel better.
Don't let him suffer too long, it's just so sad *sniffs* ... poor Goku :-(
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From XxChiChixX on November 24, 2007
Ooo, a new story! :D Very nicely written. And the plot is fantastic!

Poor Goku. :< I hope Bulma can help him feel better and get him back home soon.

Can't wait for the next update! ^^
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