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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - Amy on September 14, 2009
    HOLY SHIT! Lauryn! ....I'll tell you right now i have no flippin clue what you got planned but you just brought me to tears!
    I was all "aww this is so sweet and i can see it..and they stay in character" ..or well yeah. like not when i write XD...

    then that...last line! “No, Vegeta. You’re not going blind. .....You’re waking up.” i actually gasped and then started crying! i just started thinking of all the possible scenarios you could make..and.. OMG I ALMOST DONT WANT TO KNOW!

    *takes a breath, then and other and an other, wiping eyes* OK! im ok...O.O YOU ARE LEAVING YOUR FANS WITH THIS CLIFFY HANGER AND ..OMG! LAURYN!!!!!!!!!!

    as much as i dont want to find out what evilness you have in store i must know..so you take the vaca..and then come back..and write full force! understood?!

    I THINK I STOPPED MAKING SENSE! NOT THE POINT!!! omg! *hyperventilates*
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  • From ANON - BunnyLover on August 03, 2009
    Simply, A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!! MORE MORE MORE
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  • From Deathdeamon88 on July 21, 2009
    I love this story! it has so much details and i love Momoku she sounds so cute. *falls over* sorry, anyways i love this story.
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on July 08, 2009
    Yea!!!! Another chapter! It was sooo cute. I love Goku "HOLD MY BABY" >D Priceless. I can't wait to read this next couple of chapters. This is an awsome fan fiction...I can't believe it's almost finished. Awesome job, you are a very talented writer!
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  • From 66Hiei08 on July 08, 2009
    I've hung on every chapter of this story. Excellent job!!!
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  • From ANON - Chuquita on July 07, 2009
    The CAKE. X3
    Such a sweet chapter.
    I really enjoyed both Goku and Vegeta's reactions to said cake. XD

    I imagine Goku wanted someone to look over Momoku for the night so that he could have his honeymoon? X3


    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lepa2793 on July 07, 2009
    Lovely!
    Absolutely lovely!
    You have managed to put together a fab chappy again!!!
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  • From SpazChan395 on July 01, 2009
    this story is BRILLIANT!! I had a one many years ago that started with Goku being in a lab and having his growth stunted like that, but it wouldn't have been written nearly as well. I demand to read more, MORE!! update soon plz ^^
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  • From TristaML on May 28, 2009
    Adorable marriage
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on May 08, 2009
    Yea! Another update! I'm so glad that Goku finally has his parental insticts kicking in...I love that Vegeta was understanding enough to have gotten Piccolo to have a small ceremony. I can't wait to read about the reception ang Goku meeting Victor after his small blow-up. I hope he forgives goku :) Loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Madwren on May 05, 2009
    AWW! Great chapter love the story! Keep up the amazing work! :D
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  • From ANON - Chuquita on May 05, 2009
    Waai~! That was so sweet. X3 Piccolo just makes me grin. X3 And Cheshire-Cat-smile Vegeta was priceless. :D I really like that it was out in the forest afterall. And Goku using his tail to keep Momoku entertained was cute. X3
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  • From Kalendral9 on May 02, 2009
    A little over protective there eh Goku? And of course Vegeta just smirks ^_^ K
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  • From ANON - Lepa93 on April 29, 2009
    Love it! L-O-V-E IT!
    That last bit there with Victor, Momoku and Goku, so funny!
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on April 28, 2009
    OMG another awsome chapter! Yea for Goku his maternal/paternal @___@...ummmm...well his instincts for his daughter have come through! I hope you update soon...I'm dying to to see what happens next....will the wedding occur? Will Victor forgive Goku for his freakout? Will Geta follow Goku and calm him down? Tune in next to find out from In Your Dreams......(liitle pout and giant eyes) pretty please update soon
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