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By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - Chuquita on April 28, 2009
    Waah! It ate my review! @_@
    *Tries again*

    Anyways! I loved Vegeta in this chapter. "Surprise her." XD He was excellent throughout it, especially at the end where he's all smirking.

    Poor Goku. The pressure's getting to him. Its making him paranoid. TT_TT

    I can't wait to see how the wedding itself plays out.

    I missed this story! Thank you for the update.
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  • From inuyasha7885 on March 26, 2009
    Bulma chasing down Goku was hysterical!!! And I'm glad he's getting more comfortable w/ their daughter! I think he'll end up being a terrific dad to her! Better than Vegeta! Lol!
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  • From inuyasha7885 on March 18, 2009
    I am happy to see that u were able to finally update! Yay! I went to the outfit-and not to be mean, but it is extrememly girly-it looks like something a sailor moon chick would wear. Is everyone forgetting that Goku is a MAN! Why would he wear a girl's outfit? I really like ur story and am not trying to be mean, but c'mon-Goku is a guy and I really think that Vegeta likes him because he is so strong and so manly. ANyway-the wedding should be fun and I'm glad that Goku gets to spend some time w/ his daughter now and that Vegeta has stopped being such an a**. !! Hopefully, their relationship will continue happily and a little more equally-Vegeta treats Goku like a *itch sometimes-but then again-that is the Vegeta we know and love!!! Goku needs to stick up for himself and just not tolerate it!!! ANd maybe-they can have another baby in the future? One they both want! A little sis or bro (sis is better!!!) !!! Anyway-great job again and hope u update soon! ^_^
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  • From Kalendral9 on March 11, 2009
    that's sweet... how many chapters are left? Two? Three? I can't wait for the finale... K
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  • From ANON - Chuquita on March 11, 2009
    Wai~! I missed this story. X3
    Vegeta's so evil. :3 I do like how he gave Goku a running head start though. :D

    I don't blame them about the flowers, that scent is way too powerful. @_@ And with their sense of smell it must be even harder to deal with.

    Poor Piccolo. XD


    Looking forward to Vegeta's outfit. :3
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  • From ANON - bj on March 09, 2009
    I do love this story. I'm glad you've been adding to it. I nicely written.
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  • From ANON - Madwren on March 09, 2009
    Yay! loved the update!! Cannot wait till the wedding!! Keep up the good work! :D Update when you can! :D
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  • From ANON - Lepa93 on March 09, 2009
    Once again a fab chapter!
    So much fun to read!
    It's so descriptive and well written. ^.^
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  • From Chuquita on February 15, 2009
    Two or three cakes! XD

    Waah~! Piccolo's confrontation with Vegeta was classic.

    Yay for Goku's new ceremonial garb! :3

    LOL, Vegeta at the end there. I'm sure he will. XD
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  • From Gnome on February 10, 2009
    It is a pleasure to read this story. Your characterisation is enchanting and makes it so easy to fall in love with the characters in question. I'm always rooting for someone, usually both sides of the argument. The way you paint it, in every conflict it's always easy to see the perspective of both players. Even Villa was understandable. In a very twisted way he was helping people, but at the expense of others. It's an insight into animal testing really: A necesary evil, but how far to take it.


    I'm going to go away and tun off my philosophical button now.
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  • From Kalendral9 on February 10, 2009
    I so love the picture!!! You are such an awesome artist ^_^ Of course can't forget the story either! Love weddings! I'll be sad when you finish :( Hope you have more stories acomin' *cheers*
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  • From ANON - Robyn on February 03, 2009
    OMG this is one of the best fan fic i have read in a LONG time.

    i love how long it is and the lemons are VERY well done ^^

    and mpreg goku is cute and the mental challenges make it even better =]

    I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!I Love It!

    i spend the last few days doing nothing but reading this its highly addictive i dont ever want it too end D=

    i also like your work on deviantart brilliant =]

    look forward to more fanfic from you =D

    Robyn xx
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  • From inuyasha7885 on January 07, 2009
    I'm glad u updated and hope u had a nice holiday! I really like the lemon and I guess the wedding will be cute. I don't like that Goku is smaller and will not be able to be a super saiyan-I see why u did that-but it just doesn't see like Goku-I mean-the best interactions between Goku and Vegeta are when Goku gets stronger that him and Vegeta gets all pissy-I love it! I think u are making Goku alittle too effeminate-I mean, he is a MAN-not a woman. I don't mind him being uke, but please-can u write him alittle less girly? U've really got Vegeta done well, but u are really getting OOC with Goku now. And I really don't think Vegeta would have very much to do with the baby-remember how he pretty much ignored Trunks until he was older? So that is alittle OOC with Vegeta-I mean-do u really picture him ever changing a diaper? I don't think so--not Vegeta, Prince of the Saiyans!!!! Lol!!! But all in all-I like this -keep up the good work!
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  • From XxChiChixX on January 07, 2009
    The first scene was so cute. I love how you had Goku interogating Vegeta on his whereabouts. I laughed when he asked the Bulma question. So naive~!

    As I told you, I really do love the way you had Goku whining at Vegeta the entire way to the jewelry story. XD And the fact that he didn't even realize where he was at first was priceless.

    I could see the scene where Vegeta drops down on one knee so clearly and it made me SO giddy. Like, I had to look away from the screen and have a moment to recuperate kind of giddy. XD

    Of course he said yessss. Why else would we go through the trouble of drawing all those outfits!? I would have hit you so hard if he said no.

    ....

    I love yooooooooooooouuu. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE WEDDING!!
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  • From Chuquita on January 07, 2009
    Awwwww~! X3
    That was so sweet! What a wonderful chapter!

    I luv how it lead up to Goku following Vegeta right into the jewelry store; and everyone cheering him on and the one employee instructing Vegeta on the proper way to do it. XD

    Oh man I can't wait to see what happens next!
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