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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From XxChiChixX on January 07, 2009
    The first scene was so cute. I love how you had Goku interogating Vegeta on his whereabouts. I laughed when he asked the Bulma question. So naive~!

    As I told you, I really do love the way you had Goku whining at Vegeta the entire way to the jewelry story. XD And the fact that he didn't even realize where he was at first was priceless.

    I could see the scene where Vegeta drops down on one knee so clearly and it made me SO giddy. Like, I had to look away from the screen and have a moment to recuperate kind of giddy. XD

    Of course he said yessss. Why else would we go through the trouble of drawing all those outfits!? I would have hit you so hard if he said no.

    ....

    I love yooooooooooooouuu. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE WEDDING!!
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  • From Chuquita on January 07, 2009
    Awwwww~! X3
    That was so sweet! What a wonderful chapter!

    I luv how it lead up to Goku following Vegeta right into the jewelry store; and everyone cheering him on and the one employee instructing Vegeta on the proper way to do it. XD

    Oh man I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Chuquita on January 07, 2009
    How could I have missed this awesome chapter of sheer awesomeness! X3
    *Couldn't believe she was 2 chapters behind*
    Holidays do this to me. TT_TT


    Anyways!

    Vegeta being dragged through all those stores was hilarious!
    Goku probably could pull it off. XD Oh Pan...

    I can't believe Goku stuck Momoku in with the plushies! ^^;

    Bulma smacking Vegeta upside the head for being unromantic made me laugh. X3

    *goes off to read #59*
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  • From Kalendral9 on January 06, 2009
    Yay!! I love to see Vegeta flustered :) This is such an awesome story, too bad it's coming to a close eh? Can't wait for the rest. K
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on January 06, 2009
    That last paragraph made my heart flutter ^.^
    It was very sweet ^^
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  • From ANON - Lepa93 on January 06, 2009
    That was so cute ^.^
    Can't wait till the next one!
    It's great and sad seeing Goku be able to turn Super again. Sad of course because of his heart. Poor thing ^.^
    But hey! He's able to bring the saiyan prince to his knees ^.^ lol
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  • From ANON - mkh on January 06, 2009
    I know this is probably just a silly notion but... why don't they have Victor make a wish on the Dragonballs (or maybe the Namekian ones, if Earth's Porunga is still all fussy) to restore the health of Goku's heart and body? It's certainly been long enough, and he conveniently falls in the list of people who had nothing to do with the original Dragonball fiasco, unless you count quite possibly having been blown up in the battles before the Dragonballs disappeared as being a participant... in which case, off to Namek! Goku has too much potential in him to restrain his fighting abilities and ki for long and it seems to me that not at least trying to correct his health is just asking for a very painful end.
    (Also, how did the others not realize how their behaviour was alienating Goku? I mean, I expected Vegeta to be at least a little oblivious, but everyone focused so much more on the baby and not Goku, from the pregnancy on - being more concerned with Goku's health in relation to how it would affect the baby, and later not allowing him to bond with the baby - the first days are so important! - you'd think the women were idiots or pod-people who replaced the normally intelligent ones we're used to. At least they finally pulled their heads out of the sand and realized that Goku was hurting. *shakes head* Took 'em long enough.)
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  • From zombiebait86 on January 03, 2009
    I would assume in a sayinjin wedding there attire would be simple, light, and breezy. Flowing pants(both for the male and female/male). The vest would actually be a bit more, it would have intricate embroidery of wildlife and maybe a family crest. The color of the vest would be different depending on male or female(less dominate mate, the male would reflect his family(the embroidery would be made to work with the vest color), while the female would be white(the embroidery would be gold on the female) sense she is coming into the family/pack. Finally the would have stand alone sleeve matching there vests(I like sleeves >.>), and these would also be emroidered. There feet would be bare

    J-chan
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  • From ANON - Lepa93 on January 02, 2009
    Ok, I need to draw some kind of outfit for Veggie and Goku if they do get married...
    And sorry xD
    I like reviewing xD
    If I draw something I'm probably going to put it up on my DA.
    My account name is Lepa93 xP
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  • From ANON - Lepa93 on January 02, 2009
    Ok, so I've read further into the story now, and I love it!
    Goku stealing Veggie's clothes to make a nest is adorable!
    And I love how you always have either real life facts or references to Dragonball Z. It makes the story more believable!
    I'm gonna keep the review short so I can get back to reading the story ^.^
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  • From ANON - Lepa93 on January 01, 2009
    Such a fabulous story!
    Just the right amount of drama and fluff to satisfy me!
    Plus the pairing is heavenly
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  • From 66Hiei08 on December 31, 2008
    I placed a photo link for an idea for Vegeta's side of the wedding outfit on my LiveJournal page. Here is the link to my LJ: http://inuyuyu.livejournal.com
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  • From Kare on December 30, 2008
    I'm so glad that you updated, I was totally sleeping on the porch of this fic waiting for another chapter, so yay. But aw! Its going to end soon? Well i suppose thats a good thing that you didn't abandon this fic to a tortured existance of 'what if's' in my head (I am still suffering from the trauma of that happening so many times before when I followed fics by updates), and I hope there's a sequel! Or maybe just an epilogue at the end. But anyways, I'm sure you know of the artist XxChiChixX, and she drew this incredible picture of wedding!Goku and I totally think you should ask for the one she drew or bug her for ideas.

    http://xxchichixx.deviantart.com/art/Wedding-Design-1-79856493
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  • From ANON - pixelgoddess on December 29, 2008
    This is so cute - and the wedding should really help Goku (that and Vegeta actually paying some real attention to him for something other than sex.) Saiyan dress attire should be something like what Yul Brynner wore in stuff like the King and I. Something like this: http://www.fanunity.com/brynner/images/yul_brynner.jpg http://www.libertyfilmfestival.com/libertas/wp-content/brynneryul2.jpg (Yul Brynner would have made a great Saiyan.)
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  • From XxChiChixX on December 29, 2008
    Setting Momo down in a bunch of soft stuffed animals is probably the nicest thing Goku could have done. XD Sure beats drowning her in the tub or something!

    Hehe! Cute, they're gonna get married! (Maybe)

    This was a really funny chapter. I enjoyed it a lot. X3 The whole idea of Vegeta standing in that jewelry store, surrounded by the girls, with a look of sheer dread on his face is hysterical! XD

    I can't wait to see how he proposes. ;3

    I tried desiging a wedding outfit for Goku before...>>;; But looking at it again I don't think I like it too much. Besides, that idea was for one of my stories and you'd need something new. I'll see what I can come up with when I get the chance. ^^
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