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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From Tyrana on December 29, 2008
    ^.^ Wedding! The part I liked the most was the end, Vegeta's all nervous about the proposal and fearing Goku could reject him. It's not usual his showing of his emotional side, I think you did superb showing that.

    I'm worried though that they have decided everything about the wedding and are making all the preparations without Goku knowing. I wouldn't feel happy knowing that they took for granted the wedding was going to happen without even ask first my opinion D: And taking into account Goku's 'issues' I'm not sure how he will react. He may think nobody cares about his feelings or opinions and it might think worse D:
    About the attires I cannot help much, I only hope there's nothing girlie in Goku's o_o;; that would be awful lol
    Poor Momoku hidden among all the plushies, thanks for stinky diapers ^___^
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on December 29, 2008
    Wedding ^_^
    That's just too cute.
    Fic coming to an end =(
    But still, it's been a fantastic journey ^.^

    They must all pretty sure Goku is gonna say yes...
    Shouldn't they wait til after he's agreed? =D

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  • From ANON - Chibi_Dilandau on December 25, 2008
    ...wow...!...
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  • From Tyrana on December 25, 2008
    Ahhh I thought you would say something on DA about this new update, I almost missed this, I never come to this site anymore save for posting my stuff and reading your fic ^^; )

    Poor Goku, you , wicked, gave him all possible syndromes and traumas. I so enjoyed jealous Vegeta here :3 Glad that he is paying some attention to his mate again and Goku recovered his sex-appealed :XDDD But I’m worried. As much as Goku was needing to get laid (lol) he has so much issues and Vegeta should realize that Goku needs more of his mate that a hot romp. Vegeta still needs to learn so much about dealing with emotions and has to make a big effort to save his new family from disaster . I hope he does more than the sex thing fo Goku (can’t wait to see how they are doing :3 )





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  • From Chuquita on December 24, 2008
    Yay for Goku for being understood and yay for Vegeta for understanding~! X3
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 24, 2008
    WOOT! Best Christmas gift ever**hugs** Have a happy and safe holiday!
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on December 23, 2008
    ^_^ teehee.
    Some much needed sexual therapy, methinks.
    Bless 'em. What's in store for them next? =O
    ^.^ eyes glued.
    Can't wait til next chapter. xxx And have a nice christmas, Lauryn =) xxx
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on December 22, 2008
    I completely understand, this week has been a straight pattern of stress for me. Thank you for updating once more, you have done a fantastic job as usual. Feel free to update again when you have the time.
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  • From inuyasha7885 on December 19, 2008
    I have just spent every spare moment I've had for the past week reading this! I love it! I wish u would let Goku be able to train and get as strong as he used to be-Vegeta deserves to have his ass kicked by Goku-esp as he was being such a jerk to him about feeding the baby! I don't think Goku would ever really be this submissive and I don't like that-but I can see where u're going with it-esp the post tramatic stuff-! I love it and will def keep coming back to read updates!! Great job! :)
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  • From ANON - Ish on December 14, 2008
    Hee! This story has been very cute, and I'm thrilled to have found some GOOD DBZ fanfiction after all this time. Only on chapter 29 so far, but very much enjoying it. Thanks!

    By the by, any chance we might see a bit of Trunks/Goten in the background? I'd love to see a few more tails waving about, not to mention, I've always liked the idea that Goten inherited some of his father's more *cough*special*cough* traits. That, and I adore that pairing as well. ^^ Of course, you're the writer! But it would be nice to see! v
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  • From ANON - Tyrana on December 08, 2008
    P.S: Just disregard all the typos and weird things in my previous review, my keyboard is being a bitch today.
    Now locked Vegeta and Goku together so they can recoversome common sense whether it to be by beating the crap out of each other or by Vegeta screwing Goku's brains off, or both but they must do something, soon.
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  • From ANON - Tyrana on December 08, 2008
    Too lazy to loggedin :3

    I totally forgot to review this chapter, seriously I thought I haddone it the irst time I read it but I just noticed how wrong I was, sorry o_o;;

    Since I hadsawone ofyour drawings relatedto this chapter, "neglected" if my memory doesn't fail, I was feeling such pity for poor Goku as I getto the partwhen he was so content with his plan to seduce Vegeta D: I havea theory, Vegeta's vision must be getingimpaired with his old age, that's the only possible explanation for him to not jump a sweaty yummy Goku j/k It's certainly interestingto seehow Vegeta's personality switched or to be more accurate how his protective instincts got exacerbated sincehis recent paternity, and how he feels more close to this new daughterthan he ever seemed to do with Trunks. As I mentioned it in my last fic, I always have believed too that all the losses in his past would turn him over-protective, but it's also frustrating to see his incapicity to fully understand his mate's feelings. Damn, when itfinally seems that things are starting to go beter for the couple, Vegeta always ends screwing all somehow. He needs some therapy too, but ofcourse he wouldn't even admit it, though I wonderifhe would get to caludicate for Goku's sake if things get too far.

    It's worrying me Goku's incapacity to form a srong bond with his daughter, even to the point to neglect his duties just to look for his mate's attention and even more now that he also is developing a sentiment of jealousy against his own baby. I hope they can findsoon away to sort things out. I think Vegeta should try to share more time with both, herchild and Goku, the three ofthem together and that he would somehow help Goku to develop stronger feelings for theirchild, but with how strong-headed he is, that seems dificult. Damn, Vegeta you should be more caring and understanding. I hope the child won't develop also negative feelings against her mamma with all that's going on. Saiyan babies seem to be more intelligent and perceptive, (as proved by how they can learn and remember their missions after being instructed in their spacepods during their travels through spaceforpurging missions) I wonderifthe baby is able to notice atleastto some degree her mom's and dad's attitudes. It would be so sad ifall his would tear her apart from his mom T.T
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  • From Chuquita on December 03, 2008
    Oof; poor Goku. @_@ He and Vegeta really need to sit down and have a talk about these things.
    So sad that he did all that and not a single bit of notice.

    Hope you feel better soon!
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  • From zombiebait86 on December 02, 2008
    **gets a stick and looks menacing....well tries anyway**You sit a heal we can wait
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - Anomlov on December 02, 2008
    UhOh....looks like poor Goku is having post partum on top of his depression not a good thing. I hope Vegeta gets his ass into gear and turns the ship around before Goku leaves him. another awesome chapter I can't wait for the next chapter! i do hope that your carpal tunnel calms down and you feel better :)
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