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Reviews for In Your Dreams

By : CrimsonTide
  • From ANON - saiyajinxyz on November 19, 2008
    Poor Goku, having nightmares of being rejected and then waking up and feeling left out of the loop. I can see why he has such a difficult time adjusting to the arrival of his daughter (which I am excited about!), but it was a really good sign when he went in to see her on his own and felt some sort of connection. Too bad Vegeta ruined the moment. I hope things iron themselves out soon.
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  • From ANON - Tears Of The Pheonix on November 18, 2008
    THAT'S HORRIBLE POOR GOKU!!! TOT

    I'm gonna kill Vegeta!!!
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  • From Chuquita on November 17, 2008
    Waaah~! Poor Goku! TT_TT
    Vegeta's being so bossy and vaguely paranoid. How's Goku supposed to bond with the baby if his friends won't give him alone time with her?
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  • From Tyrana on November 17, 2008
    I did read all the 53 chapters yestardy. Sorry I would have liked to leave reviews for all the chapters I was missing but I wanted to catch up with the story ^^; Now, after reading the last chapter there are a lot of things I would like to have commented, things that I may comment into detail on future reviews. But I wanted to remark the impressive job you are making delving into Goku's personality, complex and emotions. Specially since he got pregnant. And this last chapter was beautiful. Damn Vegeta, what a jerk, his lack of empathy about his mate is ...well just makes me want to slaps him Grrr. Goku needs to recover his emotional stability, but Vegeta is making things worse. How much could Goku take before getting to his break point, if things keeps on like this, Vegeta is going to regret it later, I hope things don't get to the point it cannot be fixed D:
    Genious!

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  • From Gnome on November 17, 2008
    Ouch. I say ouch because I could feel all the pain and confusion bombarding Goku. He's at war with himself. A masterfully crafted chapter with tension layering upon layer by the paragraph. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 17, 2008
    Vegeta you dickhead!!!!! ='(
    Oh I'm far too emotionally involved with this story....
    I can't believe how Vegeta's acting...
    Vegeta, you're meant to LOVE him!! You're supposed to know him inside out!? Why accuse him!?!?!?! He kept your baby you idiot- let him attempt to bond with her!!!!!!

    Oh I could rant forever about this >=(
    Vegeta's not in my good books right now.

    Your deviantart spoiler fuelled my anger for him too...

    But he'll eventually see he's being such a git...............right???

    Seee??? You're such a fantastic writer to have inspired this furious emotion in me. Lol. My emotions literally change as I read on, IT'S MORE THAN JUST A STORY DAMMIT!
    I think the little girl sounds fantastically cute, too. =)
    Will we see your interpretation of her on deviantart sometime soon?
    I certainly hope so ^^

    As is becoming my new phrase....
    Roll on Monday =)
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  • From XxChiChixX on November 17, 2008
    When I read that first scene, I swear -I- felt like I was having a nightmare. My entire body became so rigid and I was SO scared for Goku. D: I can't even describe the feeling of relief I felt when it turned out to be a dream! XD

    This chapter...is so freaking sad! I feel so bad for Goku! He's in pain--in more ways than one! :< POOR 'KUUU!! ...Although, he's in bandages and thatsreallysexysoI'mprobablygoingtodoodlethat.....X3

    The lactating scene was hilarious. I could hardly handle Goku's reaction. XD You've described him so adorably in this chapter! The way you wrote him sneaking into the baby's room with his hands tucked to his chest...AWAH! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!? -:: Throws herself to the floor before you and shakes you by your ankles. ::- I CAN'T WAIT ANOTHER WEEK! Do you know how long last week was? O.O It felt like 2 weeks! TWO I TELL YOU!

    ...

    I'm happy it's a girl. Momo sounds even better now. ....:3

    I want to draw the baby--I think you described her well enough that I could but..I would rather you drew her first so I know -exactly- how you intend her to be.
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  • From ANON - Madeline Allen on November 17, 2008
    OMG that makes me sad!! I can't believe Vegeta is so mistrustful! Poor Goku!! Love the story update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - MewMew2 on November 13, 2008
    Thank you so much for updating once more. You have done an absolutely excellent job with this chapter. Please update again when you have the time.
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  • From zombiebait86 on November 13, 2008
    **Chews on lip** He's ok right?
    J-chan
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  • From ANON - Kyotama on November 13, 2008

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  • From ANON - saiyajinxyz on November 12, 2008
    Well, it finally happened! I knew Goku would be able to do it without the doctor. He is a Saiyan, after all, and it would be silly for him to have been in this condition without being able to have the baby in a safe and natural way. As for Vegeta leaving Goku, I hope he doesn't do that. I don't think he will, but Goku leaves him in a hard place if he doesn't accept the child that Vegeta obviously wants. I can't wait to find out what the baby is like and if it is a boy or a girl. I actually hope it is a girl. Anyway, looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Madwren on November 11, 2008
    OMG!! I can't wait to see what you do next!! Love the story, your a wonderful author!! :D
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  • From ANON - SacrificialButterfly on November 11, 2008
    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

    I KNEW you were gonna do that!!!! ='(

    Oh my God, I'm acting like this is as important as a real birth....
    You'd better be a fan of happy endings >=(
    I'll come for you, you know.

    P.S. Vegeta almost broke my heart in that silence =( =( =(
    P.P.S. MONDAY WILL NOT COME QUICK ENOUGH
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  • From Chuquita on November 11, 2008
    That was INTENSE! O_O
    I was holding my breath half the time in anticipation. Did Goku have the baby? Or did he simply pass out? So many questions.. X3
    Looking forward to the next chapter! :3
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