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Reviews for Lost Child

By : Tyrana
  • From darkstar7789 on January 05, 2012
    Please please update this fic! I remember reading this in some other websites, and I was completely pulled into the story. Hope you continue the rest! Can't wait for the update, if you plan to continue it, of course. :) *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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  • From KittyhawkLuvcat on January 09, 2011
    Wow. I can't wait to read more of this story, it's a very captivating plotline. Kudos as well for the detailed descriptions; the words paint vivid pictures in my head, even though usually I'm not a visual person. I hope you can continue this in the near future ^^
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on September 01, 2008
    Most definitely intense and hott. The hard-core lime moment you made between Vegeta and Kakarot was so fantastic. I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next.

    You have me hooked. Please please update soon :)
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  • From kitkit on February 25, 2008
    i like
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  • From CrimsonTide on February 17, 2008
    ...Wow... What an absolutely PERFECT chapter! I adore how you described the interactions between Kakarot and the other Saiyajins! It was so easy to picture everything and the story flows so nicely ^.^ I simply can't WAIT for the next chapter! Excellent work!
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  • From Zofo on February 17, 2008
    Wow that chapter was intense, and they haven't even gone all the way yet! Nasty Nappa trying to get his paws on Kakarot, glad Vegeta stopped him.

    Can't wait for Vegeta to find Kakarot again, and read what Raditz thinks about it.

    Sad King Vegeta and Bardock will only be friends, I guess I can't have everything.
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  • From spoon10488 on February 02, 2008
    I love this story. Please let there be more.
    =)
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  • From Zofo on December 03, 2007
    Great first chapter. Loved the way you told it through the interaction between Bejita and Bardock, though I'm hoping they get even closer if you know what I mean!

    Can't wait to see what Kakarot is like? Good/Evil? Silly/Intelligent? Wanton/Prudish? I'm so thrilled Vegeta is the one to go and get him though.

    Lovin it.
    xxx
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  • From kitkit on December 03, 2007
    i love the story
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  • From ANON - darkserapha on December 02, 2007
    Interesting start, and I can't wait to see more. I like the attention you give to details, though sometimes you go a bit overboard with descriptions and adjectives. But other than that, the story is very refreshing (I don't think I've ever seen a storyline quiete like this) and the banter between the king and Bardock had me smile. Very, very nice and please, do continue!
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  • From Lucia on December 01, 2007
    Oh GODS!
    I have totally fallen in LOVE with this story! xD
    The conversation between the king and his counselor... the situations it showed... the holes it left that I'm just dying to know more about... Few times have I read such an amazing story, and belive me, this one is SUPERB!!!
    I'm on the edge of my seat, bitting off my finger-nails, cursing my luck for gettin so into this fic... but not regretting it an ounce. I can't wait to know more about the situation in earth under Bulma's power, how the big meeting between Vegeta and Kakrot will go, to know what happened with the "heroes" of earth such as Roshi, Tien, hell, even Kami-sama and MR.Popo xD
    Hope see more of this great piece of work soon
    Ja NE!
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  • From ultistarmon on December 01, 2007
    Oh, this is going to be great! Although if that first chapter was anything to go by, I'll have to read with a dictionary in my lap next time. Maybe Kakarot landed in another place on Earth, as long as he didn't meet Gohan or fall in the ravine then he would stay Kaky. Maybe he landed on a planet that was just conquered by Earth. The possibilities are endless.I hope to see more soon!! Your writing is some of the best I've ever seen!!
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  • From XxChiChixX on November 30, 2007
    Extremely nicely written, as usual, Ty! ^^ I really like the story idea and how you've adapted the characters to the change in atmosphere. It's really interesting to see how they Saiyajins live in their downtime. Don't worry about Vegeta. I think he's in character, considering. :D

    Cant wait for Kakarot!...I never can. Lol.

    Update soon!


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  • From CrimsonTide on November 30, 2007
    What a FANTASTIC start to this fic! Whaddya mean you weren't going to upload it?! This is a masterpiece in the making, what with your large words and fancy talk. Hecks yeah, definately a winner!

    I'm looking forward to the meeting between Vegeta and Kakarotto ^.^ I wonder what Kakarotto will be like having grown up on an otherwise uninhabited planet. That should be VERRRRY interesting indeed!

    Excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Katonie on November 30, 2007
    I LOVE it so far!!! Please update again soon!!!
    I'll love you forever and ever and ever if you do update soon! I swear!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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