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Reviews for Poor Paul

By : soubiyuki
  • From NettChan on January 15, 2008
    WHOA!!! I LOVED the latest 3 chapters!!! & I'm so happy for PAUL (but I'm also INCREDIBLY jealous of him) & now he wants to see ED on top? I LOVE THE WAY PAUL THINKS ;)
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on January 02, 2008
    *wibbles* That's not 'the' end is it? *pouts* Well, if so, it's been fun while it lasted! :) Paul certainly enjoyed it that's for sure! The sex-not-sex thing was a brilliant idea! Actual skin-on-skin contact might have melted Paul's brain! LOL!! This is definitely a birthday Paul will remember for the rest of his days! :D mmm! Ed topping Roy! Hell yeah! Girlfriend, if you can pull that one off I will love you forever! XD w00t! Ed topping Roy with toys and flavored lube involved too? Good Lord I may just pass out! LOL! I can't wait to see this much promise RoyEdPaul pic! :)
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From yeagerbomb on January 02, 2008
    yay!! that was special-happy! edxroy! EDXROY!!!! muwhahahaha!!
    my sis says: thanks paul!!
    she was going to tell me to ask for edxroy, but paul did it for her! so...YAY!!!~
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  • From yeagerbomb on January 02, 2008
    yay paul's room!! i love this story! thank goodness he got rid of the bitch!!~
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on January 01, 2008
    YAY!! The "accidental plot device" is gone!! XD I think Paul is about to have the best birthday he's ever had! Just remember Paul, you can look but you can't touch - Roy and Ed that is! LOL! Yourself, go for it!! XD
    Update soon! Immediately! Love this lots!!!!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From alleycat88 on December 18, 2007
    Hahahahaha! will Paul never get in on the action?! HAHAHAHA! I liked it they are soooo bad! Please continue!
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  • From yeagerbomb on December 17, 2007
    ohmygod! poor paul! i feel so bad for him!! and in a CHURCH?? ...that is so them. i was afraid he was going to go to jail again! that would've been so unfair... lucky for him that lady was senile! oh, please write more soon! i love paul!!~
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on December 06, 2007
    ROFLMAO!!!!! This is the best story ever!! OMG! When Roy greeted Paul with a, "Hi Paul", like he'd known the guy for forever I thought I'd die laughing!!! XD The fact that Roy isn't even slightly bothered by Paul always catching them is hilarious!! I cracked up at the last line about Paul asking the cops for asylum!! XD priceless!! Paul needs to let that harpy he's with go and admit he wants (needs? ;D) a man! He can watch Roy and Ed all he wants just so long as he doesn't touch! :) I hope you write more of this!! This made my day! :D
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on December 06, 2007
    i've only read the first two so far bc i SUP to be studying but can you say HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMG!! my sides, my sides. i positively died when paul walked in on the bj. and roy's 'hi paul.' classic. classic. i love this. hope the rest are just as good :D
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  • From Hotnspicyfox on December 04, 2007
    This is as addictive as sexy candy. Poor Paul! I look forward to more of his adventures in the future.

    My favorite bit--"“God, hurry up and fuck me!” Even though he was beside himself in pleasure, he still remembered his manners, looking up at Roy with his large, amber eyes and adding, “Please?”"

    Way too cute.

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  • From alleycat88 on December 04, 2007
    Poor Paul! Those were o funny! And sexy of course! ;) Awesome! My complimets!
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  • From yeagerbomb on December 04, 2007
    okay... i read all of paul's stories in one sitting. and i just have to say: POOR PAUL!! i felt so bad for him with each story. of course, poor ed, too, because he was utterly embarrassed each time. *shakes head* but honestly, HE was asking for it. paul just walked into it with no real control. ... for the first four or five chapters. them he seemed to be doing it on purpose. i loved the last one, when he fell on the tent. and roy shouting 'bye paul!' in the store was excellent. and of course the one in the restaurant. 'he dropped his fork.' and 'hi paul! did you finish?' in the bathroom. it was all great!! wonderful job!!!~
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  • From MustangsHavoc on December 02, 2007
    Fucking evil Roy! I love it! Damn!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on December 02, 2007
    "Ed's banana handling."

    This was the first line that made me lose it, I was basically in hysterics after that!

    Roy just can't help himself can he? Winking and saying bye to Paul! I totaly have friends who do shit like that and you can't get out of there fast enough!

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