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Reviews for Poor Paul

By : soubiyuki
  • From minaaaaaaaa on May 23, 2008
    OMG this story has only gotten mucho mucho better-er!! since the last time i read it around chapter 4 or so. Can i just say i LOOOOVVEEE Paul!! he's so cute but also such a little perv *snickers* i couldn't believe when he got caught and went to jail HAHAHAHAHAHAHA hilarious!

    oh and i know what u mean about thinking you'd never enjoy edxroy, me too! but this one.. good stuff! IN FACT i cant believe i'd actually like to request another one with ed on top. now that he more knows what he's doing and i think getting roy to vocalise all those little thoughts in his head about how hot it actually makes him would be sooo awesome!! :D Keep them coming lol they are so good
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  • From NettChan on May 08, 2008
    That was definatly worth the wait!!! I cant wait for them to do it at the beach!!!

    As for suggestions, I'm REALLY surprised no ones thought of them doing it in a library!!!
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  • From MustangsHavoc on May 01, 2008
    Fuckstalker and adorkable = so much win!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 01, 2008
    You rule! and seriously why hasnt a library been brought up yet?! That would be sooo hot! They could do it in the kids section ^.^ thanks hun!
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  • From SarahTaylor on April 29, 2008
    I read this on LJ yesterday but I've not got an account on there so I'm glad you put it here, I can comment. I love this, I was in hysterics from the point where Ed realised he really couldn't reach the voting machine. And I love your little take on American Pie, 'I'M COMING' just as she's about to open the curtain - classic.
    My only question is, when I read it on LJ, there was no drawing. What happened to the amazing artwork that your friend does for you?
    Thank you for continuing poor Paul, it just makes the day seem more fun.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 14, 2008
    All right! I love Paul...he's so funny! And they are so mean to him! Excellent chapter!

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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on February 13, 2008
    Whew! Happy Birthday to me! :D Girl! I read this a few days ago and have just now recovered from the nosebleeds! XD I know how Paul feels now! LOL!! The pic adds so much to this even if Ed has no automail. Bad artist! Bad! You must not make these kinds of mistakes! :D I'm sure Ed appreciates you making him whole again but Ed's just not Ed without his automail! :) Very few, if any, people can pull off an EdRoy sex scene. You, my friend, have done it brilliantly! Granted Roy still managed to top from the bottom but the end result was the same - Ed got to fuck Roy! w00t! :D I admit it. I had no idea what a fleshlight was. I googled it. wow! Paul is gonna have fun now! Although, with the way he cums so easily, it probably won't take much more than taking the cap off the thing for him to cum! XD Hey, wasn't Gladys the name of his last girlfriend or something? *snerk* You're bad, Roy! ;)
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
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  • From NettChan on February 12, 2008
    w00t!!! HOTNESS!!! I gotta say, I prefer RoyxEd, BUT, the EdxRoy DID NOT dissapoint!!!
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  • From SarahTaylor on February 12, 2008
    yay, I sometimes feel so sorry for poor Paul, and then I think nah! I love these stories, I can't wait for the voting booth one. The pic at your LJ account is amazing. Did you draw it? 'Cos if you did you have some amazing talents.
    Oh and I think Gladys is a brilliant name :) :) XD
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  • From NettChan on January 28, 2008
    BOX SPRING?!?! Wow. Ew & that is one creepy manager! I loved it all. But where will poor Paul work next?

    YAY!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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  • From SarahTaylor on January 26, 2008
    I've just finished reading all the poor Paul stories - well, I finished reading them 5 minutes ago but I had to stop laughing enough to type first!!! You have a wicked sense of humour, I love it!!:):):) My favs have to be the toilet and the church. I love the church one - we are so going to hell! I can't wait for the next one when Paul gets his wish.
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  • From AmethystEyedKoneko on January 18, 2008
    ROFLMAO! Oh my God that was hilarious! :D "BOX SPRING!!!" *dies laughing* Love it, love it, love it! :) The pic on your LJ page was great too! The way Paul was leaning in to get a closer look cracked me up!! XD Roy is such a horn dog! :) I wouldn't be a bit surprised to know that something like this happened in real life. It's a good thing new mattresses come wrapped in plastic isn't it! ;) I can't wait to see Roy be Ed's "little bottom boy"! w00t! XD
    Update soon!
    Koneko =^.^=
    P.S. I hope you got the reply to the message you sent me thru LJ. I wasn't sure if it went thru or not. If not, I am who you thought I was. (Jeez, how cryptic was that! :D)
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  • From yeagerbomb on January 18, 2008
    ...cameras. there should definately be more cameras in the future. and YAY!! edxroy is coming up!! please update soon!!~
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  • From alleycat88 on January 18, 2008
    WOOT HOTNESS!
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  • From Evermist on January 17, 2008
    xD Man, I love this story too much to really explain it, so just know that it rocks. Can't wait for the next chapter; I can never find any uke!Roy scenes anywhere. ^3^
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