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Reviews for Spirited

By : Kali
  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2010
    Ah, that was fun, that was really really fun. It's nice have the dead monologue at times. But, other then that, huzah for partially romantic scenes. I love how it not said, but it already has been, but either way it wouldn't really matter because... ugh, yeah, it's all just a fun time. So to make that make sense (if that sentence even made sense), I think it's great how they both already know they're kind of already together, but there's no need for all the sentimental fluff and crap because of the weird 'bond' type thing and Kai's secret insecurities. Yeah, sorry, I've been watching Whose Line clips on youtube for about six hours now and I'm currently incapably of uttering any intelligent words/sounds. Plus all the secret yaoi suspense is making me explode with fangirl happiness.

    Yeah, so I'ma stop this now so this doesn't get anymore personal and long. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2010
    Oh, hey. This was a... fun chaptor. With all the psychological(?) crap and whatnot. And here we are at the end of it where sentimental shit is finally revealed. Usually I'd have stopped reading a story like this, but somehow you've seemed to keep me occupied. For that I praise you as at the moment I happen to be bored with the world. And now, continuing to chaptor... five? I think.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2010
    And yet anoter fun house trick. Mirrored situations of characters even though they've been separated. And I'm guessing it wasn't just a coincidence that the person who found Tyson just happened to be a woman. Ah, whatever. I half hoping for some fun house madness, half hoping for something interesting to begin or, atleast, something to do with the situation the others are in. 'S fine either way.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2010
    Totally saw that coming. Always with the door swinging closed, the creepy self-starting fireplace, and the trick door thing with these ghost stories. Though, this one seems to be alot more entertaining. Another fun chaptor with people hiding feelings and stuff. Yeah... Wait, I hate that. Oh, well. On to chaptor three we go.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 08, 2010
    Nice opening chaptor. It's a liitle bit irritating (for me atleast) that there's the whole scary story, *gasp*, other stuff, but it was pretty entertaining. It kind of reminds me of this comic on dA. Same events minus Hillary, Daichi, the scary stories and the actual ride. It's more or less just seeing them after the bus stalls (or something) then they all start freaking out and Kai walks off and Tyson fallows him. So, yeah, the chaptor was pretty entertaining.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 10, 2008
    Cangrats on finishing. It was definitely a cute story. KaiTaka is my OTP :)
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  • From Kiotana on May 07, 2008
    Yay! Wonderfully charming fic!
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  • From SarahTaylor on May 07, 2008
    Thank you oh God of Tyka writing *bows before thee*
    I love this story, and I really love the twist at the end. All the way through you assume that this is new for them and that neither knows the truth but when I read the bit where Tyson told Kai that he understood why Kai wanted it kept low key I almost squealed (it was late, I was tired!) You pulled off an xmas, mystery, tyka fic and I am awed. Again it's late and I'm tired :)
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  • From Kiotana on March 31, 2008
    He what?... He fell unconscious and what?! How could it end there?! *dying on the spot* Tyson!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Kirei on March 31, 2008
    Ooooohh! This is getting interesting! That was a nice touch at the end of the chapter. I can't wait until the next chapter! *giggles* Please update soon. This story is getting REALLY, REALLY good!!

    Lady Kirei ^_^
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on March 30, 2008
    Ohh! How could you end it there! So exctiting! But, damn, the ghosts are jerks. Kai's cute though with his possessiveness :)

    Please update soon!
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  • From Hoshisaki on March 29, 2008
    *__* Please, please, update soon! I loooove that story so much! >/////
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  • From ANON - Baroqueangel on March 29, 2008
    I've been waiting ever so patiently for this, thank you for updating. It was well worth the wait. I'll continue to wait patiently (sort of) for the next chapter. Please don't leave it as long as you did, last time I ended up reading all the chapters of once a thief in 2 days and then I was still waiting.
    I love your stories, you are a master.
    I may be slightly sleep deprived so forgive me if this review is confusing.
    Update soon please.
    Baroqueangel
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  • From Kiotana on February 14, 2008
    JEBUS! Get me outta here!!! DX Spooky stuff!
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  • From ANON - Baroqueangel on February 12, 2008
    Couldn't be bothered to sign in. I love this story, I feel really sorry for Tyson and Kai but also think they're a tad daft. I know Tyson wasn't likely to remember but Kai should have flagged the name! I can't wait to see what you do to them next :) More please.
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