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By : SarahTaylor
  • From ANON - Drake294 on June 20, 2008
    YAY! They are alive *smile*

    You did a pretty good job with the ending. And the mention and the end with a purple haired man was for sure the way to a sequel ^^

    But I don´t think you should write an epiloge. For me, an epiloge is an ending without the chance to make a sequel. And I´m looking forward to one :D

    About a new name for your story...
    I think I would choose "Tortured Soul". That way anyone can choose for himself / herself which soul was
    tortured (Tyson with being kidnapped and Kai with going crazy without a hint for Tysons whereabouts)

    see ya *winks*

    Drake294
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  • From ANON - Drake294 on June 16, 2008
    First of all...
    This is really a good chapter ^^
    The part where the group of Bladers run into the Doc and Daichi is my favorite :)

    To answer your question...
    Personally I love happy endings. But I don´t know how Tyson and Kai would come out of that. The chances that they would be found alive are really small.

    But I´m a optimist ^^
    I would be glad if they survive the breakdown of the roof - even if they were hardly injured - and you could write a sequel to this one ^^

    yours
    Drake294
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  • From ANON - cheats on May 29, 2008
    Please write a happy happy ending!!!

    Viva La KAI/TY
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  • From demonashes on May 28, 2008
    *sigh* well you weren't kidding at the words 'cliffie'. My vote goes in the direction of a somewhat happy ending. Our poor bladers have been through enough drama me thinks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2008
    write a happy ending! (you're right! the optimism does kill me... *dead*)
    ASOTA
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  • From demonashes on May 26, 2008
    You can't just stop it there!!!! Keep going going going...keep going going goin. This has been three teaser chapters so far where really no action has occured but I still can't help but love them because of all the thoughts/small action.
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  • From ANON - Drake294 on May 25, 2008
    I hate to admit it but Boris is clever... (f*** security system)
    But Kenny saves the day ^^
    Is it me or seems he much older the way he acts?
    Maybe it´s just the stress ^^°

    Good chapter :)
    See you in the next one *smiles*

    yours
    Drake294
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  • From ANON - demonashes on May 20, 2008
    Another teasing chapter, but that's okay. It was well written and I very much so enjoyed the bit between Daichi and Tyson about Tyson seeing him as a "younger brother" of the group.
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  • From ANON - Demonashes on May 14, 2008
    Not another teaser!!! Lol sorry. Anyway. Very good chapter. I really like the maturing that Tyson seems to be doing. Viewing himself as an older brother. Although before this situation, I believe that he would have been grouped with Max and Diachi. Update as soon as you can!!! I really enjoy reading this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2008
    poor daichi... he can't move and he's going to be put on that machine again soon... i hope the others find them, but don't get caug---what am i THINKING?!?!? i'm the most pessimisstic person in the world!!! don't tell me that i'm becoming OPTIMISTIC!!!!!!!! that's bad!! that's VERY bad!!! the balance of the world is going to tilt and crash because of this!!! ..........i have to go now.....
    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - Drake294 on May 13, 2008
    YAY!!! ^^
    Dizzy I could kiss you *makes happy little dances*
    But now I´m really curious how she found him...

    To tell you the truth... with this ending I find it hard not to beg for a fast upload of the next chapter ^^°
    Well... I think I have to wait like all the other readers *smile*

    Anyway - take your time *winks*

    yours
    Drake294

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  • From ANON - Drake294 on May 07, 2008
    It´s good to know what the remaining Bladers are thinking about the situation and how they are coping with their emotions. But I feel sorry for Rei -.-
    He wants to be strong for the rest of his friends but he didn´t have a person to lean on - well, not in this moment... *thinks of Mariah ^^*

    I certainly can say that I´m looking forward to the next chapter. And don´t worry about your story upload - I can understand what it means to go to work and have some other crap to deal with. Just take your time ^^
    I´m not running away *grins*

    yours
    Drake294
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 05, 2008
    i wonder how daichi and tyson are doing as the rest of the team gets there last moments of semi-peaceful rest?? has daichi been hooked up to the machine again or is it still the 'day of recovery' for both him and tyson?? i've kind of lost track of the time in this story... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! please don't let the others get captured today!!!
    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - Demonashes on May 05, 2008
    This is a great story, and sorry for not reviewing for the previous chapters. I'm anxious to see what is going to happen next. This chapter was kind of just a teaser. :( But still good. lol update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 26, 2008
    Please update soon!!!!
    ASOTA
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