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Reviews for Cages

By : Ryoko21
  • From kogaluver on February 08, 2008
    I just love this fic. Even though the guys are out of character, their characters are endearing and real. And though your titling each person's POV is a bit awkward and distracting, and at times hard to know who is doing what, the story still manages to come together nicely. I'm anxious for them to get back to Collar to see what happens ^_^

    Really nice job with the story line and for another slave fic, you've managed to give us a lot of orginality which makes the reading fresh and interesting. Keep up the great work.

    One bit of advise, though, if you could remember to put each person's dialogue on a separate line it would be less confusing and easier to follow. It's just a suggestion, take it or leave it, lol. Good luck with the rest of the story.
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  • From Tesp71283 on January 28, 2008
    I've been stuck for the last 24 hours reading this story-at work, in my phone, at home, over email. lol, Needless to say, your long chapters are toooo long, I think I may have damaged my eyes a bit for not taking a 15 minute break every two hours. My only suggestion would be if you can break the paragraphs a bit more, only out of kindness for the reader's eyes. Otherwise, these past two years of your writing have payed off, I am sold with your writing style. I have to read the entire chapter, and the suspense makes me forget how long the last chapter was before rushing to the next. Great Job, I will look forward to whatever you post next!
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  • From ANON - jneli on January 22, 2008
    This story is awesome!!! You write really well and have a wonderful plot. I can't wait for more.
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  • From romanticfae on January 20, 2008
    i love this story its so amazing id love ur address at live journal so i can keep track of updates please thank u i just adored this o r an amazing writer
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  • From ANON - jek on January 14, 2008
    Great story, can't wait for the next bit!
    Have to read every morsel not just skim, excellent writing
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  • From sillyneko345 on January 13, 2008
    O_O

    Dude. I just spent an... entire... day... reading this. I was wondering like mad how long it took for you to write it all. Two years, huh? That sounds about right... Well, it's great! I had a blast reading it all. I'm really looking forward to the next update now :D
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  • From ANON - volume on January 05, 2008
    this story is phenomenal. The detail in your writing leaves nothing to be desired. You also handle the characters in a very interesting way. I cannot wait to read more of this story. Please do not leave me in suspense (for long anyway).
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  • From ANON - Mira on January 04, 2008
    you will keep writing this story right I really want to see how this ends
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