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By : Ryoko21

From ANON - Wiki on March 12, 2014
Wow! Second time I read this and I am left without words. What a fantastic story. I have a confession to make. I never really like se he that much but now and after reading
This I am madly, deeply and crazy in love with him. You make me fall in love like crazy.
I loved each one of them, but Treize. Never like him anyway. But well Heero... Oh my... Love him.so vulnerable and strong. My Duo ohhhh so adorable and sexy
Trowa... I suffered with him I struggled with him and almost cry. Quatre sweet and lovable. Even Wufei which I really never love him so much... Once again
I fall for him too. In the end I'm in love with your story with all the characters even Sally . We'll I alwaysoved her
She is great.

I should be greedy but I would love more. I wish the end never came and continue reading more. Anyway, congratulations for this amazing story. Love ya!
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From ANON - EJ on April 12, 2012
Great story, i'm addicted to it. only problem is... I NEED MORE!!!!!! please continue writing!
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From ANON - dragonfly_dust on November 19, 2010
DAMN~! I just read this whole so far within 2 days and I LOVE IT~!

Why did you finish this fic yet~! UPDATE PLEASE~!
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From ANON - FoxJaFire on November 18, 2010
Ok, i cant help it? i know its been like waaaayyy longer then six months since this has been updated here. Your killing me! *crys* i love this story!! can you tell me the news on this? i even went to your homepage, but now i cant even find the story! *sobs* please don't tell me your not doing this any more!! *dies in dispare* hoping to the powers that be that i hear good news. -Fox
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From wolfkin59 on August 08, 2009
Very well done, even if there are some grammatical errors throughout the story, along with a few typos. I like the way you're writing this, especially the hellaciously long chapters. *coughs in embarrassment, as she herself is known for writing chapters of her Demented fic anywhere between 13 and 30 pages long in TNR font, size 12* Anyone who flames you for this creative piece of work ought to be sentenced to "be hanged by the neck until dead," as they say in PotC, and, as Terry Pratchett notes at the beginning of his novel Going Postal, "They say that the prospect of being hanged in the morning concentrates a man's mind wonderfully; unfortunately, what the mind inevitably concentrates on is that in the morning it will be in a body that is going to be hanged." *has this very bloodthirsty and morbid sense of humor sometimes, along with the sneaking suspicion that most of those around her are out to make her paranoid* (Although, if they really are out to get me like I think they are, they're too late to merely make me paranoid; they may well wind up hurt if they don't pay attention. I've been paranoid for both decades of my life, and I can't stop now. Not to mention that when anything messes with the hair on the back of my neck, all it does is make me even jumpier and paranoid than I had been earlier that day.) *suddenly makes up her mind and starts shouting to whatever gods will listen* Hey! Isn't it about time you killed me viciously yet? I'm getting tired of waiting! You're taking too long! After all the morbid things I've said about different ways I could die, haven't you found ONE method for me to wind up deceased with suitable irony yet!? *snarls rabidly, would bite were aforementioned gods close enough to reach*
*another self watches the whole thing, sighs, shakes her head* Y'see, this is why I keep very careful control over my temper. I have too many pissy selves that want out, although only one is a real risk of getting past ever. She's inherited, too, which only makes it worse. I just call her the Berserker, because all she ever wants to do is kill, kill, kill, in the most violent and bloody ways possible. *admits* She's fun to talk torture with when you're pissed, though. But I think the only reason I'm safe from her is because killing me means her death, and there are still people out there she wants to kill first. *has never been diagnosed with multiple personalities, but has a family history of manic depression and figures, 'why get diagnosed when I and my friends know I have these other selves anyways?'* Actually, I think the main reason for my near-constant paranoia is the multiple personalities. It kinda sucks. But they can be interesting company, and I, like Duo, am always easy to read when I'm getting ready to kill, kill, kill. I glare, and growl, and laugh, and smile viciously, with my head lowered like a dog about to attack. Unlike Duo, I don't get talkative when I get to that point, and I've managed to only be pushed to that point a few times, but as every time so far, my enemies were either smart enough to run or lucky I couldn't move. I may have problems with prior injuries, but when I'm in a fight, getting hurt only makes me more determined to win.
*comes back to self suddenly* Uh, my bad.... *sweatdrop* Didn't mean to rant.... They just had to come out. I think they've been bored. All of my friends are away right now, so they have no one to interact with.
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From ANON - terracannon876 on July 10, 2009
Wow ... I wish there were more stories like this. Long chapters, great characterization... I also like the dialogue and the fact that, to me, each chapter reads kind of like a journal entry with more detail. Generally, I don't like so many viewpoint swtiches or first person POV, but this story pulls it off really well. I like all the boys ... and Zechs =D Actually...I think this is the first GW fic I've read where Zechs was agreeable, nice, and not a total bastard. Wow.

The only complaint I have is the formatting, but it seems that it's soemthing with this site, seeing as how you've even patched up a link to your lj.

Hope you update soon! I would love to see how this goes on, especially how Zechs' personal goals start affecting the whole story, as well as who the Owner really is...
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From ANON - esc on May 22, 2009
i love what u r doing with this story, but u havent updated in months! please please please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - nynaevesilverwind on April 26, 2009
This is such an amazing story! I can't wait until the next chapter! I haven't been able to stop reading since I started, and now
I'm itching to know what happens!
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From DysyniaandDisolo on April 20, 2009
Disolo: *looks over to his sister passed out on the floor in a pool of blood from her nose* Yep, she's a pervert. Then again so am I, which is why I love your story to death. Keep up the awesomely porn-tastic job.

Dysynia:....naked....sexy...boys...so much YAOI!!!!!.....love it....*drools as nose starts bleeding again*
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From ANON - Hikishi on April 04, 2009
Okay.

This followed me for a good few months. Every time I came on AFF it was there, top of the page every time. Because it was Zechs - centric and I am a die-hard Duo fan, and also a hardcore 1x2/1x5x2 fan, I really didn't want to read it. So I ignored it. Every time I saw it, I got a little more curious, and wondered.

Finally I just said to myself 'if it's catching your eye that much, just READ the damn thing!'

So I did.

It took me ages, and I wasn't expecting that. It was in depth, emotional, thought provoking and dowright lewd at some points. I loved your characterisations of the boys, especially, strangely enough, Wufei....very wise and wonderful. Heero and Duo are as turbulent as they would be in canon which was great, and Quatre, so lovely, until Duo got a hold of him. Trowa I found to be weird, but then I write him weird myself. because he doesn't say much in canon, you get free reign with him really, so what is one person's cup of tea, might not necessarily appeal to the next.

Zechs helping the boys overcome their issues was also a deep thing, provoking the desired reaction within me. Especially Duo, as but I've already established that he is my favourite! I loved the tension between him and Zechs throughout the story. Duo mouthing off and setting Zechs alight. Also the time Heero took the punishment for Duo. It was honestly the best way to control his character.

The interactions between them as lovely, watching them all grow and change.

The only thing that worries me is when this all ends, what will happen with the little family they've built? The boys will fight tooth and nail to keep it, even if it is out of their control. And if no one finds out about Zechs before the end of Collar, how will they all react to what would seem like a betrayal of trust? You've got a lot of work ahead of you.

Just a little piece of advice would be to keep an eye out on your word processor or uploading, as it seems to be deleting words in some sentences, sometimes making one guess at the meaning of the sentence.

So a round of applause from me, as I didn't think it would be possible for me to appreciate a story like this. I'm just sorry I missed out on the chance to read it as post, but will definitely keep up in future!

Thank you and I can't wait for the next update!

Kind Regards,

~Hikishi
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From ethereal on March 07, 2009
Yeah you updated! I love this story sooo much. I haven't seen one like it before. Your characters are great and your writing style is professional grade. Please keep going. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Zechs an the others enconter farther problems at the parties, and what of Collar itself.

Impatiently awaiting more.

Ethereal
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From Judie on February 25, 2009
One word. Update please. Soon. I love this story.
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From JeanMPat on February 19, 2009
This is very good so far. Albeit taking me quite sometime to finish it. A few errors but hardly noticeable.
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From ANON - WhiteCookie on February 01, 2009
I can't wait to see the boys perform at Collar! I love watching the progression of each character, their relationships, and the plot line that ties it all together. Also- thumbs up to your detail work- particularly in the dynamics/rules of the master/slave environment on the satellite.
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From ANON - JD on January 19, 2009
Great story so far,update soon
i'm very curious waht collar will bring
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