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Reviews for Vejicula: The New Blood

By : Nikikeya
  • From darkstar7789 on January 23, 2012
    NOOO!! Please update this fic! It can't just end there! I beg you! Please don't give up on this fic. They jsut met and everything! *puppy dog face* :( *hugs, blood, and chocolate*
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  • From kuramasgirl on March 03, 2010
    i curse u cliff hanger 2 the deepest pits of hell. update soon b4 i decide 2 sick my rapid goku-oozaru on ur ass.
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  • From wyntermist70 on July 11, 2009
    come on now why are you playing finish the story why did u stop at the most interesting part this is good u need to keep it up......
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  • From IuvenesL on March 05, 2009
    Hmm, I bet German is your first language, eh? The general lack of commas and occasional capitalization of random nouns is a clue. :) Good work so far, but get yourself a beta or two and it will read much more smoothly.
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  • From ANON - lovers hatred on November 13, 2008
    love the story. please write more soon.
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  • From Plaguerose on October 13, 2008
    Hoy!!! That was very scary with the discreption of the goul... yuck *towards his death*...
    Is goku a reincarnation of the person that vejita once knew or did goku once met him in his much younger self?
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  • From DarkSerapha on October 08, 2008
    I'm not as adversed to complete AUs as I once was or I wouldn't have given this a try. It's fairly interesting, but you desperately need a beta. The spelling mistakes really distract from the reading. Also, don't rush things along too fast, it kind of breaks the scene. Lastly, Vejita is a head taller than Goku? Okay, I know this is an AU.. but shouldn't there be, you know, at least some resemblance to the actual characters? Why bother writing DBZ when really it's an original with DBZ-names? I'll wait for the next two chapters or so before deciding wether this is worth continuing to read.
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  • From Zofo on October 08, 2008
    Oooh that disgusting ghoul almost got him, why did 17 leave him like that. Tut-tut Vegeta won't be happy with him but at least he got to rescue Goku. What's happened to him now though and why did he say Vegeta's name, is something coming back to him?

    Love the mystery in this story and the dark creepiness :)
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  • From 66Hiei08 on October 08, 2008
    I really am sooo glad that you have continued this story!! Thank you so much!!
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  • From ANON - Kymera on April 20, 2008
    I love this story. It has alot of potential for an enldess plot twister. Are you going to update it soon? I cant wait!!
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  • From smhatche on January 16, 2008
    So far the story is pretty good and I can't wait for you to update. I also noticed several spelling and grammatical errors and was wondering if you were interested in a beta I've never beta-ed before but am more than willing to try if you'll let me. If you are interested, just send me an email. my address is smhatche@coastal.edu. I'm looking forward to the rest of your story!
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  • From CrimsonTide on January 13, 2008
    Well this is interesting! I don't normally like AU fics, but this is pretty entertaining ^.^ Nicely thought out and put together! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From Zofo on January 10, 2008
    Gripping cliffhanger. Is the ghoulie going to get Goku and is it a distant relative? Glad to see Raditz will make an appearance, but when will Goku meet the master?
    The suspense is killing me.
    xxx
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  • From Dramastarelf on January 10, 2008
    evil. ahhhhhh. new chapter soon please!
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  • From ANON - pixy on January 09, 2008
    the only thing i see wrong with this beautiful first chapter is that i now want and crave more. if you update soon i'll love you forever.
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