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Reviews for Pendulum Control

By : MutantPoptart
  • From Zofo on January 14, 2008
    Very promising start. They are very much in character so far and I like the way you have Vegeta thinking about Goku's humanity being his source of power. It will be interesting to see how you have Vegeta progress this and whether he can adapt to making it a strength of his.

    My only criticism is that I hope you can space out the paragraphs more to make it easier to read.
    xxx
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  • From KahlanN on January 14, 2008
    Despite the paragraphing problems, which I suspect are aff.net's fault mostly, this story seems to have potential. I certainly like where it is going so far. There isn't any ooc and your grammar and spelling are good. ^_^ Please continue.
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  • From CrimsonTide on January 13, 2008
    Excellent start ^.^ Your writing skills are great and the story flows nicely. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From saiyajinxyz on January 13, 2008
    This has the makings of a great story so far, although the spacing between paragraphs is a bit strange. But it wasn't hard to follow and I'm looking forward to read more. Goku and Vegeta are both very in character and I'm curious to see what develops between the two mighty Saiya-jin warriors.
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  • From Dragon7 on January 13, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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