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Reviews for Pendulum Control

By : MutantPoptart
  • From Zofo on November 15, 2010
    That encounter with the mini-space-bandits was funny, I wish they had boarded though just to see Vegeta swat them away :)

    I love how the Goku/Kakarot switching is confusing Vegeta and that he is now the good guy however reluctantly.

    Next stop a planet to get shields and weapons, somehow I don't think Goku/Kakarot will pay for them :)
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  • From KillJoy2510 on September 14, 2010
    I absolutely love the Kakarrot/Goku duality, especially when Kakarrot comes through. And you do it so well--he seems so unstable, even when he's being regular Goku, it's kind of scary. His behavior has a sort of kid-playing-pretend thing, especially when he mentioned something about destroying civilizations like "the old days" and I'm still trying to figure out if he is indeed pretending or something happened that actually brought Kakarrot out. Vegeta is being ridiculously patient, though I suppose it's also for self-preservation since I wouldn't want to disagree with anyone THAT powerful. Very sad scene when he left his family btw. You are doing an awesome job ^___^ I look forward to more!
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  • From EvaGreen on July 29, 2010
    Please, please, please carry on. Its addictive.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2010
    You need to update real soon, okay? c':
    I'm really quite curious now, I need to know what happens next!

    PS: Lol on Goku's awful timing.
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  • From topbear1974 on July 21, 2010
    Yay! I remember this story. I was hooked before i am gald you updated. It has been a while so i read the previous chapterss. I love the story! it has a very interesting start, it conbined the humor and darkness. I wonder what's in Kaka's mind and what this leads to. please update soo.

    btw, goku and vegeta on a luxury ship! why I felt they are on a honeynoon? Looking forward to your next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2010
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    This is pretty epic.
    Update soon, please.
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  • From Ulrike on July 17, 2010
    Yay, I'm excited to see this story continued. Goku/Kakarotto is really creepy, as well as annoying. I fear for Vegeta's safety, yet I'm very excited to see the possible future angst. Keep up the awesome work!
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  • From saiyajinxyz on January 23, 2008
    Oh no! Poor Vegeta. I'm not exactly sure as to why Goku suddenly reverted to his Saiyan nature like that, but it makes for an interesting story. Your perspective of Vegeta is very detailed, and even though he still is sarcastic and caustic, it's interesting to see exactly how much he is changed and how different he is from what he was like when he first came to Earth. It's like the two of them have had a role reversal and Vegeta is more like Goku. It almost broke my heart when Vegeta said goodbye to Bulma and Trunks without actually saying goodbye. And when he thinks about how following after Kakarrot might lead to his death. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From topbear1974 on January 23, 2008
    I am so happy you updated. this story intrigued me. I can not wait to see where you take us to.
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  • From Zofo on January 23, 2008
    Oh this is very interesting.

    I didn't see Goku's transformation coming, wonder what set it off and if it's reversible, not even sure I want it reversed at this point as it's making Vegeta show more humanity than Goku.

    Looking forward to their adventures in space.
    xxx

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  • From solitare1 on January 22, 2008
    WOW! Usually it's the other way around. But I think I could get use to the new Go..Kakarotto.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 21, 2008
    Wow...impressive. I did not see their trip into space at all. This should give some pretty good twists and turns. There's no way Vegeta can escape crazy Goku now.

    At times, it seemed that Vegeta couldn't make up his mind about this new Kakarotto. His confusion was obvious. And the whole time I kept thinking about the first time we ever see Vegeta in the show and how he was the one who asked Goku to join him. The tables have turned indeed.

    I really think this fanfic is going to be awesome. I check for updates daily, haha. If there's anything I would like to see the most while reading, is maybe more emotion from Vegeta. Sometimes he seems pretty accepting to Kakarotto's evil ways, and then the next sentence he's absolutely against everything he says. It's like he can't make up his mind either way.

    But anyway. I am so excited for this story to continue. I love angst...so...so much and I can see some dark things happening in the future. Awesome stuff!
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  • From Dragon7 on January 21, 2008
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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  • From KahlanN on January 18, 2008
    Very nice! Thank you for reformatting!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2008
    Wow...Amazing. AMAZING! I...haven't gotten so into a fanfiction like this in a long time. There is just so much I enjoyed while reading this story.

    It's rare when we actually get such a descriptive and accurate view inside Vegeta's mind while he looks at Goku. I absolutely loved the details and observations Vegeta had on Goku and how he is so powerful. I read it how Toriyama probably would have described it. Vegeta's fear toward Goku's power, his realization on Goku's pure heart. It was all greatly written.

    And the whole thing with Vegeta saying "Goku." I could actually feel Vegeta's pride crumbling. It's as if his saying Goku's true earth name...pretty much killed off Goku's connection to the saiyajin race. How alone Vegeta must feel. Just by saying Goku's name it's as if Vegeta truly is the last full-blooded saiyajin.

    And Goku's reaction! So much emotion and mystery! Ah, this story will keep me thinking...and I love it. So awesome. Great stuff!
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