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Reviews for To Understand Love

By : saiyajinxyz
  • From AmarisLuna on July 05, 2008
    As of late I have been searching the net for DBZ fanfics, and I must say the one you wrote is really, really good!
    I like the way the characters seem to grow, and how they interact. Also the fact that they are genuinely afraid of what is going on and where they are going comes across very well.
    It is extremely believable. Goten becoming a teacher is something I can really get into, I mean, I bet he can be a great teacher. I can see where you are coming from with that idea.

    I have to say I am looking forward to reading the next chapter, and can't wait 'till you upload it ^^
    Good luck with continuing the story, and I will be sure to read and maybe review it again.

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  • From daisyINSANEangel on June 22, 2008
    Wow... This story, I have to admit that I was addicted to every chapter I read last night. I was up 'til about 3 AM reading, and couldn't finish chapter 7 at that time. Your plot is exceptionally written, not just another jump into bed when they both discover their true feelings for each other.

    The emotional roller coaster the two have been on together has been written extremely believable and genuine. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the characters, and that it's not all angst and emotionally tense between the two of them again.

    Great story. I'm sorry I haven't taken a moment to read it before now.

    The only real hindrance I've seen to completely enjoying the story was that the last few chapters were formatted differently and I had to scroll across to get the last bit on every line. Other than that, I've found no other reason to say anything negative about the story or what has come about between Goten and Trunks.

    Thank you for sharing your writing,
    ~daisy
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  • From emudii on June 18, 2008
    I don't think I can properly articulate my feelings, at this moment. But I know if I don't say something, I will forget to say anything at all (bad habit). I love the conflict, awkwardness, and frustration in this piece. Growing up, growing apart, being accountable, being responsible... I'm willing to bet it's been years since they fused. Becoming two separate people after living through Fusion must be the most painful part, altogether. :

    I'm glad Trunks finally came clean. But I'm concerned for the way things are happening. They need to talk and get their stuff straight before they get involved. A lifetime friendship isn't something you squander on hormones--which Goten has already noted. He's so smart. He makes me proud. :')

    In conclusion: this might be my favorite Toraten fic. Ever.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 11, 2008
    This was the best chapter so far, I could see it clearly in front of me while reading xD thanks for updating!
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  • From mangerfaire on April 08, 2008
    This story has gotten archived into my collection of favorite goten/trunks stories. I think you've gotten their characters and voice really well. I like the overall tone to the story and can't wait to see where you take it next. One thing I do wonder is will we be able to get a trunks POV?
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  • From DetoxAngel on April 07, 2008
    I feel like killing you after every chapter! Augh! When will they hurry up and just connect, or when will Goten ask Trunks about his feelings? I can't wait until the next update, and I know how it is, I don't see why this doesn't have more reviews. It's the best Goten/Trunks I've ever read!
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  • From fanfan on March 19, 2008
    I really like this story and how your are presenting thier emotions. Keep it up
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2008
    Yay!! Thank you thank you!! (sorry, but I just feel like a 12 year old whenever you update)
    This chapter was pretty cool, the other I wanted to slap Goten now I wanna slap Trunks, he was being such an ass ¬¬

    It's too bad you be updating rarely, but I really hope you find a job, and not with mr. Nezumi xD
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2008
    Hey, hey... hello there! When are you gonna update? The wait is driving me insane o.O
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  • From anasi on March 15, 2008
    Your story is written wonderfully, I woudn't change anything about your writing style. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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  • From Niiro on March 08, 2008
    This is really good!

    Although there was 2 separate times when I nearly stopped reading. I just thought Goten was too pathetic! But I stuck with it and I'm glad I did!

    The angst is perfect!! And I now love this piece! It just took a while to grow on me! But that could be because this is the 1st serious Truten fic I've read.

    Again, great fic! Update soon!!!
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  • From AkitoSouma on February 10, 2008
    Wow...he threw away the BEST opportunity! I hope I'm never that stupid. Of course I understand his reasoning behind it, but still--Trunks was *right there*! Offering. And Goten decided he was joking. It just made me want to scream.
    Anyway, I love this story. I like the plot, and I can actually relate to Goten's situation right now. It was actually kind of eerie reading about how he hated his job, and his life and had no idea where things were going, since I've felt that way myself quite often recently. And I like how you're putting some real thought into the story and not just making one huge, smoldering sex scene. Those get tiring after a while because that's not what real life, and real love, is like.
    Please continue this soon. You're doing a great job with it and I can't wait to see what you have cooked up for the next chapter.
    Goten and Trunks forever! ^_^
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  • From cueball2 on February 09, 2008

    Ooh. Close. Trunks is more observant than Goten is giving him credit for. I think the more Goten straightens out his life the more he will discover about himself. I look forward to the next chapter. Great Job.


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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2008
    Woah! I loved this chapter so very much, please please please update soon! (I'm looking forward to that movie xD) I wish I could slap Goten ¬¬ but oh well, once I've been in the same situation as him and did the same stupid thing.
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  • From liz on February 09, 2008
    Oh my god. This is one of the best Truten stories I've ever read. It's soooo angsty and drawn out and hitting all the right spots. Poor Trunks and Goten. Then so obviously love each other. Need each other. Want each other. That last part where they almost kissed nearly KILLED me. Wow. You're a masterful storyteller.
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